The Incarnation of the Eastern Emperor in the Qin Dynasty

I read this book all night. For many old bookworms, hundreds of thousands of words may be read in a while, but I want to say that I gave you a try, and it is okay. The character design of the protagonist and his treatment of emotions are very delicate. It can be said that the beginning is the peak. There are not so many intrigues and intrigues after restoring cultivation. Donghuang Taiyi showed what he should be like, not what Even small fish and shrimps can talk to each other. The author's writing is smooth. It's very interesting for people like me who have never seen Qin Shimingyue. The layout has not fallen behind. At least within a hundred chapters, I think it is good. The only thing I don't like is the sister who sits down with two little girls. I will continue to give you a face. You should have the awe you should have and don't always beat your heart inside.

Don't ask for a female protagonist. Every Qin Shi Mingyue fan I come across has a harem. It's disgusting. No matter how well written they are, I won't read the harem.

Brothers, I saw some readers complaining that the protagonist, Donghuang, originally had a very high profile and very mysterious image, but I downgraded the image of Donghuang. But think about it, if according to the original work, the whole drama does not appear, talks little, and is mysterious but rarely appears, then the meaning of the protagonist's existence will be lost, and people will complain about the lack of a protagonist, and the plot will not be able to be written. My outline is written around the protagonist, so if you think that the protagonist I wrote lowers the image of Donghuang, I have nothing to do, so I will keep it like this.

Brothers, I am also very conflicted. Some of you want me not to write a female protagonist, and some of you want me to write a female protagonist. You all have reasons, but I don't know how to say it. We don't want to say that the heroine has a high personality, high status, and inherited memories. None of the beauties in Qin Shi Mingyue are worthy of their status and status. The original work should maintain its inscrutable and mysterious feeling. Those who want a heroine think that reading a book is about watching the drama between the heroine and the protagonist. It is best to have multiple heroines and open a harem, so that they can be enjoyable. Many people read novels for beautiful women But as an author, I am very confused. I know what you mean. I have read many novels of various types, so what you said is right, but I am writing about this protagonist. The characteristics are like that. I really didn't have a suitable heroine at the beginning, so I was undecided for the time being. But then I read the comments about wanting a heroine, and for the sake of the performance of this book, I tentatively decided on Dong Jun as the heroine. But when it comes to the end, after getting the longevity of Canglong Qisu, I think this is a better way at the moment. Let me know if you have any opinions. I have written almost 100 chapters, and I can still modify it.

To be honest, Donghuang Taiyi is an insidious boss behind the scenes. Your true identity is revealed at the beginning of your writing. The protagonist has no scheming yet. It's a bit too white.

I read the comments, but I haven't read the novel yet. The author is awesome. I haven't watched a single episode of the movie.

Whenever a female protagonist appears in this book, it means that she is in trouble and no one can save her. Donghuang Taiyi is such a superior person, and if you insist on adding a woman to his bed, no one can save you. I haven't watched it yet, but just looking at the comments section, you are all discussing who is the heroine, haha. Don't you feel awkward? It's like abandoning the Emperor of Heaven and forcing him to have a commoner wife. Don't you think there's something wrong with that? A bunch of idiots who have never seen a woman before. If there are female protagonists, they should be divided into categories, right? How could such a protagonist want a female protagonist?

This fanfic is really good, I follow two chapters every night, and sometimes I can't help but vote for recommendation. I would like to recommend another Douluo fanfic to everyone, "Douluo: Rebirth of the Human-Faced Demon Spider" to see how the protagonist leads the soul beast to rise against the sky and reach the pinnacle of life. The new work hopes everyone will support it!

If you want to seize the house, just seize it cleanly. From now on, just call him Donghuang. Old Linghan, Linghan, what a show.

Dong Jun, Yan Ling Ji, Shao Siming, the first generation Jing Salamander, Zi Nu, Chao Banshee Lady Pearl

Book Review Overall Rating: Average Complaint Points: 1. Personally, I feel that people who have traveled through time still have to follow the plot, so what are you here for? ? ? Then why should I go watch a TV series and watch you? 2. Just borrow the general background and setting of Qin Shi, and change his story beyond recognition. 3. If I start by taking the Yin Yang Sect to surrender to the First Emperor, and then speed up the pace of unification. Then integrate the power of hundreds of schools, and finally bulldoze the whole world. Develop fantasy technology and gather the power of the whole country to challenge the world's ceiling. If you win, you will be lucky. If you lose, the whole world will be buried with you. Overall, it is not as good as the original drama.

One thing I don't understand is why they didn't collect the salamander earlier, but they only found it when they were pregnant, forcing them to be the receiver? 🤔🤔

No one in the Qin Dynasty dared to touch the big guys like Dong Huang and Bei Mingzi. The most important thing for these big guys was their strength. Except for Canglong Qisu who cared about it, they didn't care about the unification of the world by the First Emperor.

What I wrote before is fine, but it won't work after it's put on the shelves, and the data should drop significantly. I don't know what the author thinks, but what about your qualifications as Donghuang Taiyi? I personally participated in the development of the plot and communicated with each character as if they were my peers. Seriously, you might as well start giving him the identity of the elder of the Yin and Yang family. Is this still reasonable? As a result, you came up as the big BOSS and then participated in the plot step by step. It was really impossible to watch, and it slipped away.

Three labels, I don't know which one is worthy

Forcibly assigning a certain identity has become the biggest loophole in the setting. The more you explain, the more confusing it becomes. It is the best choice to just mention it in one stroke. You just jumped into this trap. Qu Yuan wrote "Chu Ci·Nine Songs·East Emperor Taiyi" and Wu Chengen wrote "Journey to the West". So the Jade Emperor Tathagata is all him? That's outrageous

Donghuang should be hidden, and then the protagonist uses an identity to walk outside. No one knows what Donghuang looks like anyway. As for the reason: as a time traveler, the protagonist wants to travel the world of Qin Dynasty. Isn't that enough of a reason? Even if it is to pick up girls on his own, it is better than to find Canglong Qisu as Donghuang. If necessary, just use the power of the Yin Yang family to directly order as Donghuang. To be honest, everyone knows the appearance of Donghuang, which is really cheap. (The main reason is that as a time traveler, I look like an old man. I don't see anything interesting other than crushing with strength.) Intervening to change the fate of the characters is also very ordinary. It feels like it has changed but nothing has changed. Come on, author.

This book is not suitable for readers who like to open a harem LSP. When the author wrote about Qin, he was not thinking about how many harems he would open, but whether to open a harem or not. He is an amazing author. When you read Qin Shi, don't you just want to watch a harem to make up for all the regrets? If you don't open a harem, why don't you just watch anime instead of writing a book? What a weird author.

I was a little bit annoyed after watching the first part, and the time was a bit inconsistent with the rest. Fortunately, I can continue reading.