I Have Been Raising Dragons at Kassel Academy for 30 Years

Let me talk about my views on this book In the past few months, Dragon Clan fanfiction has become quite popular at Qidian. Starting from Brother Shui's No Money, there are many of them. I've read dozens of them alone. Among all the fanfics, this book is not necessarily the best written, but overall it is not bad. Compared with several fanfics of the same period, this book has its own advantages and disadvantages. In terms of character creation, the author's original heroine can be said to be the most unique among the Dragon Clan fandoms. After all, there are many attractive female characters in the original Dragon Clan novels. Of course, it's a great idea in my opinion, and Mirai Ishikawa is super cute! ! ! In terms of new character creation and other aspects, the author's original work is quite good. Although the selected timeline is relatively early, there are currently no major problems in the various original plots. Keeping this writing rhythm should not collapse. Of course, I have a small opinion about the protagonist here. I feel that the protagonist's life in Kassel is not cowardly enough and too flamboyant. The protagonist, Xiami and Fenrir are brother and sister. And I feel that the protagonist's trust in Mirai Ishikawa is a bit too much. He has exposed all his little secrets after they have only known each other for a long time. If Ange accidentally finds out... Beibeilong will be stabbed to death with a folding knife. But overall, the quality of this book is quite high. I hope the author can stick to it and write a complete good story.

I read the author's emotion at the end of Chapter 74, saying that some readers pointed out that this book was not enjoyable. I have posted a few comments in the relevant paragraphs, now move them to the comments section and make some modifications. I didn't really want to talk at first, but my mind suddenly moved. Some people may think that the current content is very dull, but with the author's writing skills and the tone of the book "Raising Dragons in Kassel", you can imagine that the future development will never be as smooth as it is now. I did not regard this book as fast food literature, and the book itself is by no means positioned as fast food literature. (But maybe it's just a random work in the author's spare time, and I won't make any wild guesses.) So if readers are more patient and give some encouragement to these interesting contents, maybe the author will be more motivated to update, for example, update a thousand chapters before six o'clock tomorrow. In fact, what seems to be the most obvious popular point that can be written at present is the identity of the protagonist as the Dragon King, and it is a fun point to show his own personality in front of others. So far, several playful conversations have been shown in front of killed enemies and with Ishikawa Mirai. Let's ignore the killed enemies for now — But here comes the question, does the male protagonist directly ask Ishikawa Mirai to immediately and unswervingly identify the protagonist's identity as the Dragon King? Of course you can, but in that case the problem of the basic logic of a story character will arise again. How will Ishikawa face the protagonist and surrender in the future? Follow? What position should she take to face this? Ishikawa can't trust the protagonist without thinking and love the protagonist without thinking. There must always be enough dominance. And with the character of Ishikawa Mirai currently displayed, I believe that what everyone wants to see is a female protagonist with an independent personality rather than an epiphyte or a female subordinate whose identity is insignificant. This all takes time, and one of the themes of this book is about raising dragons. The author has written dozens of chapters and has raised three different dragons. You can fully expect their appearances in the follow-up plot, the bond with the Dragon King brother and sister, the happy love with Mirai Ishikawa, the relationship with Mingfei, the collision and fusion of Cassel and the principal's ideas (?), And all kinds of interesting developments. You can't just be cool all the time and overwhelm everything, although sometimes I also like to read more radical cool articles, which are very stress-relieving, especially the background of the story. But if a person can do something different as the Dragon King, make up for part of the past, have some collisions of happiness, confusion, comedy, and tragedy, and use different characters and different plots to develop a higher story on the original basis, even if it is not written clearly to tell you what it is, it is also a kind of pleasure. The above concepts only represent personal opinions. If you have different suggestions or similar ideas, please kindly leave a message. Thank you very much.

Written in front: These words are my true thoughts after reading them in one breath. They may be impulsive and emotional, but I don't intend to change them. If the author can read them, I hope to respond, even if it means scolding me. As long as you have confidence in your heart, I will have confidence in my heart. Good books are hard to find, and there are more eunuchs. I don't want a good book to disappear like this. Text: I finally caught up with the latest chapter, and I can say what I want to say, without worrying about being slapped in the face when I turn the page (laugh~) From my current impression, this book is well written, and the original plot is interesting. It is slightly lacking in details, so I can give it an eight-point rating - the above evaluation refers to the first half (before the containment object). I don't know what happened in the next few dozen chapters. It was as if the author had changed people. There was no foreshadowing, and the story suddenly jumped from the Dragon Clan to the Foundation. (Of course, if you want to say that the background of the protagonist's novelist is just a foreshadowing, it is barely passable, but when you open the chapter, it is too abrupt to suddenly jump from college life to the entertainment industry. The protagonist has never even met the school before. (When I saw that chapter, I thought I had read dozens of chapters less), the character of the protagonist was completely broken (the ability to modify reality is too buggy, the protagonist affected his memory before, so it's okay to make up the background, but it's outrageous to change even the main character at the request of you. Is your girlfriend the one you made up, right? (See through. Jpg)), and the plot is well designed It's sparse (the Foundation and the Dragon Clan are interspersed with each other, and there's no connection. I haven't read the original work and I don't know what the story is about. It's like making a fool out of it), and the details are a mess (the Black God's Eyes are something that has appeared before. The setting can be changed at any time. Did you learn from Jiang Nan? And many things are introduced first and then the setting is added. There is no problem with this writing method. If you don't write it well, there will be no plot to build up the atmosphere, and the readers will be completely confused, and they won't be able to guess the follow-up at all. They won't have the feeling of "Oh, so that's how it is, it's so awesome." It will just feel like you are patching up loopholes.) If I had given this book a high rating before, then now I would give it a maximum of 5 points – still based on the first half. This is my impression after reading Chapter 22. I am not a bored troll. There are more than a thousand words on the tenth floor. When I finished typing, I felt that I might be too sensitive, like a psycho. Maybe the author is preparing something big. Let's take a look first. After seeing the latest 28 chapters, I feel that the problem is more serious than I thought, so my current remarks are even more rude. Eri is a character that many people like, and Ryusan is also the pinnacle of the dragon clan, but the author's attitude seems to be completely indifferent. The details are full of holes, there are more typos than before, and the plot development is very stiff, making it feel like you are reading an outline. I think the author may also be under a lot of pressure. As I said before, it was very frustrating when chapters were blocked. I used to interact with readers a lot, but now I don't interact with them much anymore. It's hard to get bad grades, but grades are earned with quality. Now the starting point is an era where quality is king, and there are many newcomers on the rankings who have become gods with one book. The quality of this book is very good, and it has the potential to become popular, but this quality must be maintained until the opportunity comes. Looking at the author's previous remarks and the hints in the book, the author is a person who loves writing books. I know that dreams cannot be eaten for a living, but at least you must respect it. The author's writing is good. If I really can't stick to it, I will continue to pursue it if I open a new book, but please don't fool it. Moreover, even in terms of income alone, this is not a good choice. Either continue to bet or cut off the meat and quit. This book is not too long. Dragon Three is an important plot, and it may not be unavoidable once it is written. ps: The development of the plot is the author's business. I can't interfere with what subject the author wants to write about (even if I really think the foundation is not suitable for dating), but no matter what the subject is, the logical details must be reasonable after setting the background. In addition, I feel that the author has referenced the setting of re: The Creator, but it is a street drama, and the most outstanding character in it is the villain Jun Ji Altair. Unless you want to write the legend of the Dragon Mother, it is not a good choice, not to mention that you also involve the foundation... These two backgrounds combined...

The reason why I read this book is half and half between Honkai and Dragon Clan, so I suggested that since the author has added Honkai elements, why not add some things related to Honkai. From now on, except for the protagonist who has the appearance of Benares and a name that no one knows (the two are not human), there is no element about Honkai at all. This will cause readers who come for Honkai Impact to feel like they are reading a cool novel . After clicking in and reading more than a dozen chapters the author suddenly tells you that this is not a Long Aotian novel, but a wretched development novel. It's like taking a bite of an apple and finding out there's a bug's head and butt inside. Of course it's not as extreme as what I said, but this is how it feels to people who have only played Honkai Impact but have never heard of Dragon Clan. So it is strongly recommended to add a little Honkai element, so that you can better satisfy the sweeping aunties (uncles), even if it just has a name like Chili Pepper. It's like creating a weapon named Jizo Mithun for the future. Besides, you are a fanfic, so you can make a second design. Since you are a third-born son, other dragon kings can also be third-born sons. Then add a queen sister to the black king, a fox sister to Norton, and a maid sister (nanny) to the water dragon king (mountain dragon king). And people who play Honkai Impact have a higher chance of playing Genshin Impact, so they can also give Wind Dragon King a Barbatos fantasy linkage! So for the sake of what I have said so much, please give me some extra details. 🥺

To be honest, the Dragon Clan's so-called official match is a joke. Chu Zihang killed Xia Mi, and Lu Mingfei gave up on the little monster and continued to lick Chen Motong. He didn't think there was such a thing as an official match, so he might as well accept it himself.

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I didn't read the novel just to post a picture.

Beibeilong and Beibeilong Figure

Shark Chili

Xia Mi should not give it to Chu Zihang, he is not suitable! Although Lu Mingfei failed to protect Hui Liyi, he tried his best! Brother Chu is not worth it

I have never dared to watch Dragon Clan fandom. Jiangnan old thief Zhu Yu comes first, so comparison is always unfair to the author. What's more, Sima Yangzhi's literary youth syndrome is too obvious, and he is still in love with his sister, and he is in love with someone else's family. The legal principles are always lacking, but the emotions are always entangled. The unique crux of the literary youth in Jiangnan left me with a lot of pain in the plot. It's not that I don't want to realize my dream of doing fanfiction, but I always feel that there is something to be gained from working with dead people. In my opinion, the imperfections in Jiang Nan's works are like Su Shi's "Jiang Cheng Zi". The sadness and inferiority lost in youth are the real essence of several of his novels.

(I suddenly thought of it after watching the demonstration video of Black Myth Wukong. It must be because the author has not allowed Bai Hang and Future to post, which caused my thoughts to diverge to this place...) ………………………… Bai Hang is dreaming again. This time, it seems, it's not a nightmare? In the dream, he was holding a stick and... Beating a white dragon? Bai Hang couldn't help but fell into doubt: "I am obviously the Dragon King, why do I want to beat the dragon?" But he still took the stick and beat the dragon on the head. "It's quite interesting, isn't it?" Bai Hang thought in his heart. The arc of electricity surged from the dragon's body, but it could not stop Bai Hang. The dragon king's random sticks hit it, causing its dragon scales to fly. It wasn't until the whole dragon fell to the ground that Bai Hang realized something was wrong. "This dragon... Looks a bit like me?" He looked at the giant dragon lying on the ground. Its appearance was so similar to Bai Hang's body. "Whatever, it's just a dream anyway." Bai Hang thought, anyway, he had more than one nightmare of being killed. So he dropped the stick and the dying dragon and continued to move forward. I don't know how long he walked before a flower boat appeared in front of him. The flower boats are carved with dragons and phoenixes, and are beautifully decorated. People in black clothes were busy inside. Looking towards the bow of the ship. What catches the eye is a bright red dress. Ishikawa Mirai was dressed as a bride and stood on the bow of the boat looking at Bai Hang. "Since you have seen the future, why don't you worship?" The voice of the future rang in Bai Hang's ears. Inexplicably, Bai Hang felt his throat tighten. …………………… Bai Hang woke up from his dream. He climbed out of bed, and at the same time, dialed the future number. "How about getting married?" The moment the call was connected, Bai Hang launched a fierce attack on the future. "You... What are you talking about!" On the other end of the phone, the sleepy girl opened her eyes wide, and her face was filled with crimson...

Did Baihang and Future post a post today?

Once it's badly written, it's over. It's obviously like there's no outline

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I don't know why the introduction suddenly went wrong. It's quite strange. It had been working fine for the past few days.

The contract has been sent out, everyone can invest with confidence