System: Counterattack Starts with Iron Man

I have read Chapter 40 to make a complaint. After a scene, a woman will appear, and they are all beautiful women. They are also women who blush easily when they see the protagonist. I... I really can't complain about this.

Books written by people with incorrect three views also have incorrect three views. There are still too few people scolding them in the comment section. If they don't criticize their correct three views, they are not worthy of writing novels.

It's really not enough to write more than twenty chapters for building a house. The whole text is a bunch of explanations and psychological descriptions. The main plot is too bland. Most of the time traveling through the world is to follow the plot without any of my own thoughts and events. It is a tasteless book.

After reading Chapter 5, I have the most basic question. I don't know if this "hehe" is the author's mantra or something. Anyway, it greatly affects reading. The most important thing is that it appears too often. It is almost impossible to add "hehe" after a sentence. You must know that "hehe" has almost become a compliment on the Internet now. The first pig-footed mother called and asked for a proof of income. Hehe, it didn't make sense when I read it. Then I thought it would appear on a large scale later on. Hehe, it affected the viewing. I felt that it was a bit unreadable. Forget it, the author has his own ideas no matter how much he said, so I'm leaving!

I've read a few chapters and I really can't stand it. It's so long-winded.

. . . The author must be an old author! Why do you want to write so much about the real world, where everyone is like a dragon? . . The reality of this kind of novel is best brushed aside. . . Anyway, that's what I think, and there's that one thing that makes everyone in Xia Kingdom look like a dragon in real life, which is a bit embarrassing...

I still say that some books depend on whether the three views are consistent and whether the idea is good or not. It doesn't mean that it's good or not. Some books you praise are good, but I just think they are rubbish. But I think you may not like good books, right? There is no need to impose your own ideas on others. Really, that's boring. Until now, my favorites are The Three-Body Problem and Base, followed by Harry Potter and Game of Thrones, then Independence Day and Swallowed Starry Sky. My least favorite channel is the one channel ~ I basically don't read books on female channels, unless I'm forced to... You mean Douluo Dalu? I really didn't like it. Except for the first one, which was okay, I immediately vomited after watching the others. I was not interested in watching 4 and 5. To be honest, there was a suspicion of money-making later on. Then what you said about Breaking the Sphere was the ceiling of the fantasy world at that time. It can be said that this book has not been read by many novel fans, but its reputation has gradually been ruined by fan fiction. It is not bragging or bragging. This book is just because it is too popular, so it is gradually made by fan fiction and makes me feel like a child. However, I still don't have a good impression of this book... Then I talked about the first sequence that you like... I... Can't say anything. After all, I am really not suitable to read this book. The main reason is that it really violates my impression of science fiction, so I will not express anything. Others, such as Tomato and Chendong, are above the standard but below the upper limit. I can't say anything about the recent new books... It's okay. It's a semi-science fiction novel held by old fans. The writing is extraordinary, but the subject matter is a bit old...

Is this a single heroine or a harem? Don't write a lot of emotional scenes like in the last book and not accept them. Don't write other emotional scenes if you have a single heroine. If you have a harem, try to avoid it.

Why did you make the male protagonist a virgin? Those who have enough food and clothing and no desires want to rejuvenate the Han nation. How does the author get the reader to feel involved in this way? The process of traveling through time was hard and dangerous, but after finally returning to the real world, I had no desires or desires! Wearing clothes a few sizes too small, eating bad food, living in a house of 100 square meters, and still single! I'm going! What a shame, why don't you let people watch anymore?

I don't know how much the author likes Iron Man, but almost every chapter talks about how great Iron Man is, which is a bit disgusting. The most outrageous thing is that Tony's prodigal character is whitewashed.

I was shocked when I saw this sentence from the author

Isn't it disgusting to write a lot of fucking emotional dramas and then not accept them? Doesn't the story world have to have emotional dramas to make the game world fun? It's very annoying. I advise everyone to stop as soon as possible.

This is too poisonous! In reality, she is a little loser who is fed dog food every day. She is envious, jealous and hateful every day. She just wants to live her whole life licking a not-too-ugly N-handicapped person. After gaining control of the system, he turned a blind eye to the innocent and good goddess who was sent to him, and after cultivating a good relationship, he gave it to others. Even Shen Nong could not withstand this kind of poison!

Are you taking this too much for granted? Is it because of America's peeing ability that you can get the battle suit? Don't tell me that Tony sent it. Believe it or not, the army came directly to the doorstep and asked for a complete set of technical drawings. If you don't give it, it will be destroyed immediately. Don't tell me that Tony is rich and is no thicker than paper in front of the state machine.

It's really baffling. If the author didn't intend for the protagonist to acquire a girl in the film and television world, he wouldn't have written so many emotional scenes! You spent a long time writing dozens of chapters, but in the end they were all given away by the protagonist? Also outrageous

Does the author have too little social experience? When I saw the chapter about selling gold, 300 gold bars were sold for more than 60 million at once. Not to mention how cheap the black gold bars were, you sold so much at once and you did it openly. Which gold shop dares to accept it? You will be investigated by the police department immediately, and you will be on the hot search immediately. You can sell the gold bit by bit and then sum up the time in one stroke, okay~_~

This is the most verbose novel I have ever read, and it is empty and purposeless. Moreover, the protagonist has no desires and desires, so he lives in a small mountain village. He even rejects women and even the monks cannot compare with him. Possessing the ability to destroy heaven and earth, he lives like a thief. I read Time Travel three times in the beginning, and then skipped through dozens of chapters. I really couldn't hold on anymore.

Ren Tingting, if you don't accept me, why are you writing so much? Disgusting people? Waiting to be green?

Shen Nong died of poison. I advise you to escape as soon as possible.

Is there "haha" behind it? Please allow me to mouth a fragrant greeting

I didn't notice it in Counterattack. I just felt that the protagonist became less and less human and more and more like a machine. I had no desire to continue watching and it was becoming more and more boring.

Where it is necessary to write in detail, I will not write in detail. It's a lot of nonsense that shouldn't be written in detail.

As long as the heavens are not fused together, it's okay. The fusion of the heavens is disgusting to read.

After reading Chapter 120, after wearing it twice, it looks like I am cultivating immortality without any desires or desires. The reader cannot read it without any desires or desires.

It's too poisonous. The author may have lived at the bottom for a long time and has no common sense at all. It's really poisonous and his cognition is too low.

I thought it was a science and technology article, selling sheep's head and selling dog meat.

It's written like shit, no wonder no one reads it

The story is okay. It's just that the main character's character is fucked up.

It's really unbearable for all the heavens and the world to show off in front of mortals.

These modal particles that start a new paragraph make me uncomfortable.