
Nagato Sweeps Across the Heavens
长门横扫诸天
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 331k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Nagato does not have the blood successor limit, he only has the Uzumaki bloodline, and the Rinnegan Eye belongs to Uchiha Madara, which can be counted as his eye (plug-in). Even if the protagonist assimilates the eyes in the later stage, it will not be considered a blood successor, because he does not have the bloodline of Senju and Uchiha (well, the Uzumaki has some connections with Senju).
The high-end combat power has been reduced and the low-end combat power has been improved. Looking at which ninjas those shadows fight in the anime is completely one-hit wonders, especially when facing Ban later.
The protagonist is like the bitch next door, beeping endlessly, talking to your opponent for a long time every time you move. Have you not spoken to each other for hundreds of years, or do you think you have enough time to make your opponent think? When your opponent couldn't think clearly, you still explained it thoughtfully. That's enough
First of all, let me talk about it. You have strengthened Konoha too much. In the original anime plot, except for Kakashi who moved twice and was hacked to death, the other ninjas had almost no ability to resist. Konohamaru felt that he was forcefully messing around. And the Senju clan has long since disappeared. When Pain invaded Konoha, the direct members of the Senju clan had died out during the Wood Release experiment and the previous two ninja wars. The rest were all collaterals and their surnames had been changed Secondly, it is too easy to defeat Metkai as a time traveler. All his information is in your hands. It is not as troublesome as you wrote. Moreover, at this stage, he cannot open eight doors. After opening seven doors, he will basically become disabled. Several reasonable solutions? Control one Pain, talk to him about youth, and then the other one will sneak attack directly (the probability of success is very high), use poison or use the Samsara Iron Chakra Rod, just waste one hand and clap, like Jiraiya did, so his combat effectiveness will be limited even if he opens the eight gates, can he open the eight gates even if his body is bleeding massively? Still a problem The second option is to prepare a defective Shura Dao, go up and directly output it with all your strength, force him to open seven doors, and then directly cut off the chakra supply and let him explode. For Nagato's body, it doesn't matter how much damage he takes as long as the chakra supply is cut off. Well, the consumption of chakra is not too big, and then use a defective Shura Dao to let Metkai's seven side effects come out and destroy it, and that's it. It's outrageous to fight head-on like you wrote. For a ninja with high explosive power using this method, it definitely shouldn't be dealt with head-on.
In a word, it disgusts me to death. After almost 40 chapters, I realized something was wrong, so I went to Konoha to set up a map cannon and grab some things. As for Momojiji, why did I write so much? The entire story is nonsense, and the Thousand Hands appear all over the place. If there is really a strong person named Thousand Hands in the original work, why doesn't any one appear in it? What about the map cannon? What about feeling pain? Looking at what you said in front of me, I thought that after grabbing the cells and injecting them, I would just clear the screen with my big move. Is this the result? After playing so many chapters, a few unnecessary deaths occurred.
The fight lasted for a long time, and the typical villain died and talked a lot.
I wrote more than 100,000 words in one sentence, which is awesome. However, your kind of gameplay will not be retained by ordinary readers except for die-hard fans. You constantly create accidents and make things that are already a sure thing repeatedly unbalanced. Even after hundreds of thousands of words, Nagato is still walking a tightrope. This way of writing makes me think you are insulting the reader's intelligence. Give it up, bye.
It's so procrastinating, it's disgusting to watch.
You are so verbose, I can write so much in Konoha. There will definitely be a lot of water behind!
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