Immortality Begins with Catching a Quickie

The protagonist was an extreme challenger in his previous life. I can guess two poisonous points. Either he didn't learn the lessons from his previous life and continued to be careless. Don't ask why. The question is that extreme challengers like excitement and fun. If you can get rid of these two points, becoming a god will not be a dream.

The protagonist and Chen Qi are good brothers. Every time he investigates a case, he takes him with him. Why don't you teach him better martial arts? Doesn't every protagonist have to have a useless supporting character next to him?

Let me talk about my thoughts. After reading four chapters, the pace is a bit fast, a bit deliberate, and the realm is vague. I feel that the male protagonist can kill anything. He is just a stronger person than ordinary people. Doesn't this special case need to be reported? What about this plug-in? You might as well change it to absorb merit, which can be redeemed from a plug-in. In short, the initial stage design is not rigorous.

Just read Chapter 10. You don't need to read the rest. You don't even know Lanruo Temple or Nie Xiaoqian, a modern person? Are you still writing that you are an extreme challenger? Do you use a mobile phone? Computer? Flying? Or does this extreme challenger go to places like Bermuda, the African Rift Valley, and Shennongjia on two legs?

The time traveler is not awesome because he is the protagonist. Let's talk about it. Many authors and readers of time-travel novels think time-travelers are awesome. I can understand when they travel to the ordinary world, but it's strange to me that some people who travel to the extraordinary world or even to the prehistoric world still think so. What is a time traveler? People in the world of cultivating immortals can live for hundreds or thousands of years. How old are you in Blue Star? Not to mention traveling through the prehistoric times, there is always a Yuanhui. I didn't carefully remember how many years a Yuanhui lasted. In short, it was so long compared to the twenty or thirty years of life of Blue Star like you... How developed is your Blue Star? Are you really kidding me? The world of immortality cultivation must not have existed for thousands of years. Are you comparing technology and knowledge with others? If there were no golden fingers, I really don't know what the advantages of these time-travelers are 😒

You can't read this novel. The protagonist's cultivation is the same as that of the ancient holy body. The gap between investment and income is too big. The resources are spent more than 10 times more. The cultivation time of one realm is 10 times longer than others, and then he beats people to death when he crosses a smaller realm? Doesn't it feel good to practice normally? I can accept fighting if you can't cross the boundary. At least the breakthrough is fast.

There are many Lanruo Temples in the world, but there is only one Lanruo Temple in Guobei County. Is the protagonist really a time traveler? I don't even know this.

Guobei County! Lanruo Temple! Can't you guess the protagonist? Or is the author just pretending to be stupid?

There are so many monsters, will all the people be eaten?

The writing is okay, but Wei Yi's shortcoming is that he is doing martial arts things as a cultivator, and he has no magic weapons and no spells. A PK, you strike with a knife and I strike with a knife, who is faster and who is better?

The protagonist and Zhang Tiansi are walked around like dogs by the White Lotus Cult and it has no practical significance at all? Are you still writing a novel? Come into the factory, really

Zhangtiansi, which has about 20 acres of land, has three halls and three staff dormitories, which are definitely independent buildings, right? There are four levels of military force: A, B, C and D. They can't all live in the same place. There are also three major office buildings, a martial arts arena, and some ancillary areas, as well as gardens and pavilions. Wait, what can 20 acres be used for? 1 Mu is 666 square meters, and 20 acres is more than 13,000 square meters, which is less than 120*120 meters of space. How can you fit it in?

I traveled through the past, but I didn't recognize Nie Xiaoqian. You traveled through time and space.

You might as well write about the aborigines. You don't see the use of a little time travel.

Your skills in writing novels are worse than going to a factory to tighten screws.

It feels like the protagonist is like a machine without emotions.

This fox scene is so crotch-stretching that I can't stand it anymore.

I really can't stand the mess, so I just spliced ​​those messy stories together.

After reading a few chapters, I seem to have lost interest. The recent books are all about weird monsters, and you get rewards for killing them one by one. I'm tired of reading them. . .

I just found out that the author has published a new book, and I'm speechless!

I gave up immediately when I saw Lanruo Temple. It would be better to go in and tighten the screws.

Either it's a fiction, or it's a homologue. It's so mixed that I can't read it.

The White Lotus Sect is meat, and the protagonist is a dog. Dogs can go wherever they are told, and thieves are obedient.

Kill the demons in Lanruo Temple and fall in love with Nie Xiaoqian.

It's a mess... It doesn't read smoothly, was it written by AI?

9 Out of 10 books of this type are about cults, and even list them as the main villains. Every time I see something like this, I give up the book!

I read Chapter 20 and the writing is rough.

Generally speaking, the people of the White Lotus Sect are a group of academic masters, and the people in the government are a group of mentally retarded people; the White Lotus Sect will just come out and walk the dog when there is nothing wrong.