Immortality Begins with a Constable

The protagonist was an extreme challenger in his previous life. I can guess two poisonous points. Either he didn't learn the lessons from his previous life and continued to be careless. Don't ask why. The question is that extreme challengers like excitement and fun. If you can get rid of these two points, becoming a god will not be a dream.

The protagonist and Chen Qi are good brothers. Every time he investigates a case, he takes him with him. Why don't you teach him better martial arts? Doesn't every protagonist have to have a useless supporting character next to him?

Let me talk about my thoughts. After reading four chapters, the pace is a bit fast, a bit deliberate, and the realm is vague. I feel that the male protagonist can kill anything. He is just a stronger person than ordinary people. Doesn't this special case need to be reported? What about this plug-in? You might as well change it to absorb merit, which can be redeemed from a plug-in. In short, the initial stage design is not rigorous.

Just read Chapter 10. You don't need to read the rest. You don't even know Lanruo Temple or Nie Xiaoqian, a modern person? Are you still writing that you are an extreme challenger? Do you use a mobile phone? Computer? Flying? Or does this extreme challenger go to places like Bermuda, the African Rift Valley, and Shennongjia on two legs?

The time traveler is not awesome because he is the protagonist. Let's talk about it. Many authors and readers of time-travel novels think time-travelers are awesome. I can understand when they travel to the ordinary world, but it's strange to me that some people who travel to the extraordinary world or even to the prehistoric world still think so. What is a time traveler? People in the world of cultivating immortals can live for hundreds or thousands of years. How old are you in Blue Star? Not to mention traveling through the prehistoric times, there is always a Yuanhui. I didn't carefully remember how many years a Yuanhui lasted. In short, it was so long compared to the twenty or thirty years of life of Blue Star like you... How developed is your Blue Star? Are you really kidding me? The world of immortality cultivation must not have existed for thousands of years. Are you comparing technology and knowledge with others? If there were no golden fingers, I really don't know what the advantages of these time-travelers are 😒

You can't read this novel. The protagonist's cultivation is the same as that of the ancient holy body. The gap between investment and income is too big. The resources are spent more than 10 times more. The cultivation time of one realm is 10 times longer than others, and then he beats people to death when he crosses a smaller realm? Doesn't it feel good to practice normally? I can accept fighting if you can't cross the boundary. At least the breakthrough is fast.

There are many Lanruo Temples in the world, but there is only one Lanruo Temple in Guobei County. Is the protagonist really a time traveler? I don't even know this.

Guobei County! Lanruo Temple! Can't you guess the protagonist? Or is the author just pretending to be stupid?

The writing is okay, but Wei Yi's shortcoming is that he is doing martial arts things as a cultivator, and he has no magic weapons and no spells. A PK, you strike with a knife and I strike with a knife, who is faster and who is better?

There are so many monsters, will all the people be eaten?