Servant of Douluo Sun

I can't stand it anymore. The world is a delicate gray instead of colorful black. A novel with only one tone won't get far. Growth not only requires suffering, but also joy and happiness. People who grew up under the oppression of darkness will never be able to bring light to others because they have never seen the light.

There is nothing bright or exciting about it. I can't help but want to curse people. Besides writing about the darkness and misery of society, what else would you do? I suggest you write some philosophical articles instead of fan fiction. I don't know how to read it. Can you please stop being sensational? Is the plot 30 years in advance just to expose the darkness? ? ? ? ? ? ? The protagonist is really miserable. He can't protect the one he wants to protect. Even if he's about the same strength, there's someone stronger. I'm done. If the author wants to comment on the book, just delete it. If you want to scold me, feel free to scold me. Anyway, I'm done venting. Goodbye.

When I first watched Fate, I really liked the character Karna. The things I compiled at that time only recorded some general aspects, and I don't know if they have been changed. The poor man's insight The ability to see through the opponent's character and attributes, and will not be deceived by verbal excuses and deceptions Ride The ability to freely control all animals and rides. Except for the level of fantasy beasts and mythical beasts Uncrowned martial arts The ability to use various types of weapons proficiently and not recognized by others for various reasons Magic external release (fire) Injecting magic power into the weapon, using blazing flames to turn it into magic power and attaching it to the weapon. This skill is activated frequently, and all weapons held by Karna will have this effect. Divinity As the son of the sun god Surya, Karna merged with Surya after his death and has the highest divine fitness. Against a Heroic Spirit of the Sun God system whose divinity is B or below, this spiritual suitability will bring out a high level of defense. The Sun Disk, turned into armor Type: Anti-person (self) Noble Phantasm A powerful defensive Noble Phantasm that is integrated with Karna's body and emits the rays of the sun. It can reduce all hostile interference (physical attacks, magic, curses and other interference concepts), so that the damage suffered by Karna is only one-tenth. Because it is an existence formed by light itself, it is difficult for even the gods to destroy it. It has a sufficient supply of magic power and has the ability to heal itself. Even fatal injuries can be repaired. Brahma, cover the earth Type: Anti-army, Anti-national treasure When using a bow, you can track the enemy by shouting the name of Brahma and get an absolute hit When using a gun, the Immortal Spear (Brahmastra) has powerful physical attack power No equipment or the like is necessary. A true hero kills enemies with his eyes A move that releases beam attacks from his eyes. Brahma, curse me Type: Anti-national Noble Phantasm Give the projectile Brahmastra the heat effect as Karna's attribute and launch it. The effect range of the anti-army and anti-national Noble Phantasm Brahmastra, which already has a wide attack range, is further expanded and the power is significantly increased. Inject magic power into the "Immortal Spear" (Brahmastra), and project the divine spear to release a destructive light like an avalanche. If you use your full strength, it can cause a wide range of destruction Sunrise, obey death Type: Anti-army, Divine Noble Phantasm A light gun that can defeat even gods with just one hit. A fatal spear made of lightning. It appeared at the cost of stripping off the golden armor, sacrificing powerful defense in exchange for an absolutely destructive blow. Its concept is described as destroying all existences as "the only one" - living things, non-living things, and even any objects, including monsters, fantasy beasts, mythical beasts, people, shields, armies, cities, barriers, gods... It can burn and dissolve any existence as "the only unit". But only "the world" can resist. PS: The true name of the Liberation Language is "Understand the mercy of the King of Gods." "O Indra, watch carefully." "Destruction is a stab here." "Burn everything - 'Sun Disk, submit to death (Vasavi shakti)'!!"

The writing is too depressing, and the protagonist still wants to save others after suffering these things. Normal people who suffer these things will either become abnormal or commit suicide, and the plot arrangement is too deliberate.

How can I put it this way? Let's briefly talk about the first seven chapters. I don't remember anything. I just remember that the protagonist was beaten by a young soul master, beaten by gangsters, met with conscripts, and had to wander out of the city. He was knocked unconscious by a wild boar when he was out of the city. Then he recognized his grandfather. He was beaten by a wolf again when he went out. When he was about to die, a golden armor appeared to save his life. Then he was beaten by a trafficker, but he couldn't be beaten and was sold. , The protagonist is so miserable in just seven chapters... I read the introduction because I wanted to see a cool story about the protagonist possessing Karna's abilities and treasures and enjoying revenge in the Douluo Continent. It turns out that the author wanted the protagonist to become a hero who has suffered a lot but still helps others, a replica of Karna... Then it is better to read Karna's epic story directly.

In fact, I think why not join Wuhun Palace? Logically speaking, he is a beggar now. He has nothing to lose. Joining Wuhun Palace can change all the current situations, so why not join?

After reading about 20 chapters, there are no highlights or excitement, and the plot arrangement and scene switching are very messy. Not writing about Long Aotian doesn't mean that you want to abuse the protagonist, right? Ever heard a saying? If you are poor, you can be alone, but if you are rich, you can help the world. The protagonist has traveled through time. Don't you understand this? It's closed. Please take your time, author. I hope to see you in the next book.

It's too deliberate. Little Yang is so talented and yet he was bullied all the way. Are everyone in Wuhun Palace blind? Either use it for your own use or get rid of the protagonist

I originally thought it would have the epic feel of FGO, but in the end it didn't look like anything other than tragedy, the battles weren't good, and the characters didn't have a three-dimensional sense. The greatness of a hero does not mean that he is great simply by saying he is great. Looking from left to right, the protagonist feels like a small person. I can't write meaningful sentences, nor can I express deep thoughts. Just trying to show a hero through the plot is not enough, and the plot is not very good. It feels like literary youth living in their own world and being moved by themselves. Writers are not that simple. How can they inspire and move others if they cannot speak from a certain height. I originally wanted to quit directly, but seeing the author's previous timeline with such care, I decided to make a few comments, hoping to go further and further on this road.

Why don't you join the Wuhun Hall after awakening your martial soul? It's better than being a beggar. And when you find out that there's going to be a conscription, joining a force is better than wandering around

The game starts as a refugee and poor person, and two empires are at war in the background. With a top talent, you don't immediately choose a powerful force to protect your life, but instead go wandering? What the hell is this?

Why is the character of the protagonist so unlikable? It's because most readers nowadays like to read cool stories, like to push everything aside, and like to get without giving anything. If the character of the protagonist is too upright, it will reflect the selfishness of the protagonists of other books that readers like, and readers will naturally be unhappy. But let's talk about things as they are, if you can't do something yourself, it doesn't mean that others can't do it. So don't blame the protagonist of this book too much.

Author, you are suitable to be a war reporter, but not a participant. The abuse of the host is shameful

I feel more and more that you are writing about your miserable life of scheming and fighting in Douluo Continent, rather than about practicing and becoming a god in Douluo Continent.

In the Holy Grail War, if the master's magic power is sufficient, Karna is the perfect choice for a servant. There is almost no one like him. He is extremely strong and very obedient. He will basically not disobey the master's orders. If Director FZ summons Karna instead of Brushes, he might be able to win.

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The protagonist is Little Sun, so I read it. To be honest, I don't have much desire to read this book. It has no highlights and the writing style is average. It only attracts Karna. The main reason is that there are very few articles about Karna.

I don't think it's necessary to force a soul fusion skill, the sun and the spider have nothing in common, even restraint

Keep it first and wait for at least one or twenty before you can see the quality.

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You started to fall in love with Bibi Dong inexplicably and became disgusted with the master. Your protagonist has his own personality. He will not hate a person subjectively. You can even forgive evil people. Why don't you experience the psychology of the master? You just follow the crowd, and the protagonist's thoughts make you write poorly. It felt very abrupt all of a sudden

The irrational moans of the scumbags at the bottom of society

My cat is stupid, keep it and raise it, it's gone

I was beaten in seven of the first ten chapters, and I was speechless.

This is very well written. Is it inspiring? 😭

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Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The author is not a eunuch. It is rare to write about Bibi Dong.

What about the author's first chapter? Why are there so many previous chapters missing?