I Created the Myth of the Great Old Ones

Isn't this book a masterpiece? How come so few people have read it?

After seeing 700, the copy is indeed getting better and better as it is written. The Brilliant Realm section greatly adds to the exploration of the world view. It is really shocking to witness that even if a great civilization has been completely destroyed, it can still use her relics to kill the great existence of the present. But the writing of the main world is getting more and more outrageous. I could ignore the previous box office data as a common problem of Internet writers. It was weird from the beginning of the script killing. I really don't know what to say about the current VR game. I even call this game an industrial innovation. In short, it is all kinds of nonsense. The fourth natural disaster game in a foreign land is even more hilarious. Where have all the people's brains gone in the main world? The more I watch, the more I feel that the main world is just a false world surrounding the protagonist, with only Feng Yu being barely real. The upgraded magical ability of Last Words is too broken. When you write about the hard-core genre from the copy, you should know that you have screened out most of the novice readers of Shuangwen. They have been driven away by All Quiet in Spring. Although this volume has indeed made this article successfully sublime and become a god, it also confirms that your article can only be positioned as a niche article. In this case, stop writing these intellectual plots to try to catch up with the mindless and cool articles. This will only distract your main fan group, traditional genre + serious drama lovers like me. Of course, if it turns out that the main world is just a dream of the protagonist, and the people in the main world are all brainwashed by the protagonist/family members, etc., And these are all foreshadowings, please ignore the above suggestions and work hard.

One Hundred People's SongHongye, can you listen to the song you mentioned last time that can bring good luck to me again? [Haruhi All Quiet] Kohaku Lu Jian, I'm sorry, I'm sorry, I'm sorry... [Grudge] Shia Now, it's time for that ending to come.

Taking advantage of the half-price event, I read Chapter 430 in one sitting, which felt strange. The book is good, but I don't know what the author thought. It gave me the feeling that he didn't know what he wanted to write, especially the part about All Quiet in Spring. My personal problem with this novel is one of style or theme, because I only realized after reading more than 300 chapters of the novel that the author wanted to write a novel with a strong Cthulhu style. However, the first part gave me the impression that it was a relaxed horror novel in Cthulhu skin. The most important thing is that it failed to express the despair of Cthulhu. Therefore, even though the author emphasized that this is a Cthulhu novel, combined with the protagonist's psychotic personality, it is difficult not to classify this novel with those funny psychotic horror novels. So All Quiet Spring felt very abrupt to me. It suddenly changed from funny and light horror to a very pure Cthulhu style, which made people unprepared. It can be seen from the author's very early poem "One Hundred People" that the author is well prepared for the plot of All Quiet Spring. However, the author's previous style of foreshadowing gives the impression that it is just an ordinary horror novel with Cthulhupi. There is a sudden change in this article, which makes people feel very uncomfortable after reading it (not in terms of writing, but in terms of structure, as it is said in the novel, prepared and unprepared, watched in advance and not seen before, the feeling is different when watching a horror movie, All Quiet Spring suddenly makes people unprepared to come into contact with the real Katsu) Lu, coming into contact with a desperate world, I feel a little unspeakably uncomfortable) Summary: Although the author has already foreshadowed the plot line, it does give me the feeling that the style is inconsistent. All Quiet in Spring is a good article in terms of Cthulhu style, but the previous part only emphasizes Cthulhu on various backgrounds. No sense of despair The psychotic character of the protagonist makes people even more unprepared (for this sense of despair) Another point is that from the perspective of pure Cthulhu text, I read All Quiet Spring in one sitting, and I felt that the emotional drama between the protagonist and Kohaku was still a bit lacking. At the end, I kept saying the protagonist's name, which made me feel a little bit... It was abrupt. Maybe I was a follower of the book and didn't feel it after one or two chapters a day. For someone like me who read it in one breath, I felt that my emotions were developed too quickly. I suddenly became intimate with just one or two things. I felt that I should have spent more time writing about the progress of the relationship between the two. The ending later made me feel even more desperate. I said earlier that it was a bit uncomfortable, and it has something to do with the lack of emotional foreshadowing. If ten more chapters could be devoted to describing the relationship between the two, it would not be a little uncomfortable for me. The reversed despair and pain are huge. In that case, All Quiet in Spring can definitely be considered an excellent running script/novel volume.

It is indeed a good book, and the ending is not delayed. Although it can be seen from the author's writing style that he is not very skilled in writing, I think it is worth learning to finish the book decisively when it is time. I saw other book friends saying that the world view did not expand too much. I personally think that the world view of the Cthulhu mythology system is very mature in this family. Most works of the Cthulhu world view are ultimately implemented in a people-oriented concept. In other words, the height that the protagonist is in and can see is the world view that readers can access. However, the actions of the protagonist in traditional Greek works do not actually affect the external gods. Rather, the author is describing the struggle and survival of small people in this big world view. Therefore, for me, a lover of light-gram books, this book is a good spice. It is also suitable to be recommended to friends who like grams-type books but are not in-depth.

The book is very good, but I haven't read it much since All Quiet in Spring, and I'm still very disappointed. Maybe it's because I'm too fragile inside to see the knife? I ordered it all just to see the if line, and at least I feel like Kohaku has a decent ending. It may have been three or four years since I came to Qidian. To be honest, I really can't stand the knife like this one. I feel like this is one of the most unsettling novels I have read. It turns out that when I watched the Cthulhu Mythos, no matter how crazy or miserable it was, it was just a story to me, and I didn't feel anything at all. But when I watched this, I felt like I couldn't stand it. Facing this desperate and crazy world, even if she has the desire to live in her heart and the people she loves, Amber still has to accept death helplessly. Maybe this is the essence of the Cthulhu myth. Human beings are like tiny bugs, unable to resist everything, and the underlying logic of the world is chaos, nothingness and despair. There are 1,000 Hamlets in the hearts of 1,000 people, and I don't plan to watch it again after finishing it. At least in my heart, it's like the story will always be fixed in the If story line where Amber lives with the protagonist after she is resurrected.

See the present in one breath, Chapter 372. Although the author has some flaws in his grasp of rhythm, the flaws are not concealed. When it's time to show despair, I can "show you beautiful things." The royal plot, the shaping of the protagonist and supporting characters, and the setting of the world view have all been written out, flesh and blood, and emotions. I have also seen some book friends criticizing or abandoning the book (of course there is support). Yes, this may also be related to the label of "light-hearted" deceiving people into it, but the author should note: it is good to write some sadness and depth in a light-hearted tone. There is no need to rewrite to cater to some people's ideas. The first priority is to write your own story well and not to collapse it. Finally, I am not targeting some book lovers. If you don't like it, you don't have to read it, and there is no need to say unwise words.

I couldn't understand it, but I was shocked. KP is not picky about food these days.

I felt fine for the first twenty chapters or so, but starting from chapter 27 or 26 when you start acting like a narration in the video, I felt like it changed! Good horror video play and decryption

To be honest, this is my first time writing such a long review, so I don't know where to start, so let's start with this book. In fact, this book is generally well written. I like the author's writing style very much, but it is quite smooth compared to other novels. I watched it from beginning to end without stopping, but somehow I felt it was a bit rushed at the end. Everything else is fine, and the setting is actually pretty good. It also has the heroic sense of implementation of the setting from another world. There is also that sense of powerlessness in a closed loop. The ambush pen feeling of one ring within another is quite good. Then came the author's recently published book. It feels better than the first book, and the writing is much better, but it just feels like it's lost its flavor, and it's not particularly good. Overall, this book is quite good and highly recommended. The character Lu Jian, I don't know how to put it, he does seem to be very serious at the beginning of the previous novel, although there is something a little bit wrong. But after san returned to zero, he became really crazy. In the words of the second book, he was crazy, but he couldn't tell it himself. Then the protagonist in the second novel is simply crazy. I can't quite tell. Of course, it may be because the protagonist can see more prompt information, so he pretends to be crazy. But I have to say that Lu Kan is one of the protagonists who left a deep impact on me. The whole dead man Lu Kan gives people a sense of inhumanity. It is actually great to match the setting of the novel, and it is also consistent with San Gui Ling. Several supporting characters such as Shia, Drizzt, Kohaku, Momiji and even some characters with whom we only have a one-sided relationship are deeply affecting, especially Shia's transformation into Luo Ying, which shocked my heart. The author really intended to write a closed loop. Also, when I first learned about the closed loop, I was thinking about the meaning of the existence of the author of Abandoned City. Now that I think about it, I guess it is to give the protagonist a reminder to rely on the omnipotent God to complete the eternal suppression. Also, this novel has a relatively big shortcoming, that is, the appearance of many props has no practical significance, and it feels that it does not promote the future. Although it is quite good for the creation of the protagonist and other characters, in general, it looks very weird. I thought it was going to appear later, but it actually didn't. It was the so-called pistol that appeared in the first scene, but it wasn't fired until the last scene. Judging from the second part, it's actually pretty good. Many of the easter eggs from the first part appear in the second part. In short, I hope the author will work harder. I am very optimistic about the author. In terms of plot and imagination, it is not much different from many leading authors. Although I feel very comfortable with the writing style, it is a bit rushed in combination with the plot. The second part is more obvious. The second part cannot be said to be rushed. I can only say that the protagonist is too powerful, giving people a feeling that it will be over after just one glance. I can't say enough about it after thinking about it, but please let me rest. 2024.3.22 Yang Xianliu

The girl Amber is gone. What a human being the author is. It makes me feel bad. I originally came to see pirated copies, so I ran over and downloaded a starting point. I logged into an account, topped up 50, and received all the rewards. This story about Amber, I feel very complicated and uncomfortable. I feel the same as the protagonist. No, no, no, the protagonist is in more pain than me. I feel so uncomfortable. . . . . . . . .

The essence of the book is "copy exploration + movie shooting feedback"

I rushed to finish the manuscript on the last day of March, and I found a work read aloud by one and only one anchor team among the books with relatively high subscription points. I didn't expect it to be this one, because I've been reading the author's new book "Player Please Close Your Eyes" recently. Authentic, worth looking forward to and worth reading. Going back to the topic, the most important thing about Grammar novels is the flavor of Grammar. Can Mr. Shijin's team read it? Let me have a listen. ⭐This post only represents my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, please leave an explanation in the comment area or make a separate post♪ Anchor voice: Shi Jin's voice is very upright. It is a kind of voice that sounds very effortless. It is magnetic and slightly nasal, and the articulation is very clear. It is very suitable for people like me who can't read TV dramas without reading subtitles. Background sound: Relatively speaking, it has a sense of atmosphere, mysterious, deep and unknowable. But in terms of coverage, it's still a little bit worse. As for the dubbing of the text descriptions in the article, such as fingernail scratching, although it is effective, it is a bit abrupt and stiff, unnatural, and does not fade in and out. System sound: Rare dull male voice processing, unique, but without losing the sense of technology. Other aspects: The introduction time of the opening advertisement is about 22 seconds. What is relatively rare is that there is a short advertising introduction at the end of each chapter of the audiobook. Although it is understandable, it will still have an impact on the overall reading experience. This should be considered comprehensively. Overall evaluation: The quality is okay and I can listen to it. But for a single anchor team, the small problem of lack of sound quality still exists. The later stage of the Grammar essay is particularly important. A perfect score would be around 75. Book Title: "I Created the Myth of the Old Dominators" New Book: "Players Please Close Your Eyes" Author: Golden Dreamland Anchor Team: Mr. Shijin Opening Introduction Length: About 22 seconds {"TopicId":"894890053301174272","TopicName":"Listening to books"}{"TopicId":"911806161065213952","TopicName":"Listening to books"}

The author will become a god one day, I have no doubt about it.

In the prequel to Chu Guang's World, a great being from a distant star brought disaster to the world, and then Lu Tiaojian went on a mission to help the former professor establish consciousness-forming field technology. He also got him the helmet and sent it to a pollution-free world to recruit players. You can get a few side stories on both sides. Chu Guang's side is the story of the doctor: the world is destroyed and he struggles to survive. He encounters bottlenecks in research and development, encounters mysterious help, enters another world, and gets helmet technology and ghost express delivery. On Lu's side, he went to a newly destroyed world to complete a mission: to create Vault Zero and help the doctor complete his research. The two sides only need to agree on a few unified clues to link up with each other in the plot.

🤭 Come on, it feels okay, let's just let it go for a while.

Why is it said that air friend is amber? Chapter 104 Description: Air friends... In Hejima, it is a kind of filth that exists in ghost stories. It usually comes from one of the twins who died young, or the remaining obsession after the death of a close friend. Its existence itself is a kind of pollution! ! ! The air friend described in Chapter 106 behaves like a puppy and is very affectionate. This is so contradictory!

I present my monthly ticket. It's well written, but it's too little.

It's pretty good. There are currently over a hundred chapters and the author is here to fight🥧 Strong support

Don't read novels with a gay background with the idea of ​​family fun, as it can easily break your defense. There are several reasons why Ke novels are incompatible with Wenxin's painting style. 1. Everything is fragile. In Gram novels, nothing is eternal except Azathoth. 2. As long as it comes into contact with supernatural power, it will be distorted. Human will will never be able to compete with existence that exceeds the physical limits of the human body. Calling out the names of certain beings in the Ke system will cause oneself to be distorted. The only way for humans to use power beyond their own is to check and balance, taking advantage of the entanglements between gods. Maintaining a delicate and fragile balance to slow down its own distortion is, of course, like drinking poison to quench thirst. 3. The powerful "insect" in the K series will definitely end badly. Because when you come into contact with supernatural power, you will inevitably fall deeper and deeper, actively and passively move closer to God, which will eventually lead to the death of the "worm". This is the tone of a Christian novel. The final ending about Kohaku and Hongye is in line with the tone of a despairing crime novel. It is a relatively good ending that Amber can finally accompany the protagonist as an air friend. In the game field, the official endings of the Zero series and the Dead Souls series are both tragic. Unless the protagonist can resurrect them through God. But the Ke gods are "arrogant" because humans are not worthy of their attention. Paying attention is more of a mentality of teasing bugs. It's actually very difficult to write a genre novel if the protagonist is too invincible and doesn't have that sense of powerlessness. If the protagonist hits a wall at every turn, the reader will feel frustrated.

Hmm

This novel All Quiet in the Spring Day, from the beginning I thought I was lucky to catch up with an arrow to get out of trouble, but in the end I found out that there was no such thing as luck, it was just a greeting, a look at the world but I couldn't find it, and then I said "I found you" thousands of miles and time away. In the end, I may not be reconciled because the ending is so tragic. I looked away, but everything was destined to be as weak and pale as the sentence "I didn't do anything". Just watching her walk towards the destined god, the attic on the high platform, there was a sentence you couldn't hear: "In the end, he didn't curse or resent the world, he just said I was sorry and wanted to look at him." Ps: It's been a long time since I've been back to read it. After all, I've had it for too long. One look at the bookshelf with more than 200 books seemed outrageous. When I saw it, I remembered this paragraph and wrote it down. After all, it left such a deep impression on me. 😭

This novel is actually positioned as a light novel? I feel it is comparable to Lord of Mysteries, comparable to many masterpieces. The imagination, combat, plot, logic, background story, and horror are all very good, especially like I Have a House of Horrors. There are scary copies in the early stage, and then it is a very relaxing person to show the saint. I think it is a very good novel, and the author is awesome

Wonderful novel, which boss is opening a trumpet?

I feel that the script of "All Quiet Spring" is well written, and the powerlessness in the Ke-kei background and the sadness at Kohaku's death are both reflected. But due to length reasons, I felt that Kohaku's charm and the relationship between the two were not fully shown, so in the end Kohaku's Death Knife was a bit shallow, melancholy but not painful enough. If there were more heart-warming descriptions of the two of them in their daily lives, and more depictions of Kohaku's change in mood due to the protagonist, and finally the killing of Kohaku's sadness, it might have been more profound.

Is there a female protagonist? I can't stand it anymore. Qin Tiantian and Feng Yu Amber, why don't you just open a harem and stop hanging on? It feels like poisoning on both sides The writing is really good but... There are more and more strange female supporting characters (main characters), and they are poisoned and die

After reading over five hundred chapters, I must admit that the author has a thorough understanding of the essence of the Kexi myth and has written it brilliantly. He has brilliantly demonstrated Kexi's alienation from daily life, the irresistible despair and oppression of human beings, and the indescribability of the senses. All living beings under the great existence are just ants. The universe is indifferent and grand. The more you understand, the deeper you sink and the more powerless you become. In my impression, there are only a few online articles describing the myth of Ke that can compare with this book. The author is indeed It is really powerful, but I still want to say something. Even if it is a Christian article, it should not become more depressing and more censorious. Doing so will only make readers numb after being constantly stimulated, and their expectations for this book will become lower and lower. In the end, this book will become more and more niche, and its performance will become worse and worse. After all, what everyone reads is an online article, not a real Christian article. The author must understand that the real Cthulhu is niche, not mass, and online articles are fast-paced. It is read in fragments. From the moment you turn on your mobile phone to read, the reader's viewing intention is determined to be smooth, refreshing, and can be read in one go. Some plot blades can sublimate the theme and detonate foreshadowing and suppressed emotions. Emotions, but not too much. Too much will make you tired and numb. Just like the red leaves chapter and the amber chapter, I can feel the vibration in my soul, but when it comes to the wasteland insect swarm chapter, I can only produce some ripples. The author's next writing direction should no longer be devoted to such How to show the despair and depression in the background of the Ke system and how to make the knife hurt more, but to think about more interesting and refreshing plots, and return to the main theme of online articles, such as how to make the real world "lively", how to make other foreign lands more intertwined with the real world, and how to make the characters created before bloom more colorful. These are the next writing directions. Please put aside those grand and indifferent things. After all, we all still prefer lighter stories.

I'm halfway through it now, and I only have one thought. Author, don't worry about your entertainment. Your writing is like shit and full of loopholes. If you are so good at writing scripts, why do you have to split it 50-50 with entertainment writing?

Let's talk about the concerns and problems that I personally see at the moment. First of all, as the protagonist's abilities are displayed in various videos, such as "vegetative", which is used in Jiji, the greater the fame, the higher the possibility of being connected by the audience if it is used in reality. Although generally no one takes it seriously, even if you play it too much, you will subconsciously think of the possibility of this coming true, not to mention that the protagonist's daily behavior is so consistent with the appearance in the video. Secondly, this journey will be made into a movie, and the protagonist will find an excuse to say that it was filmed in a foreign country. So should it be a foreign language, or should the whole world speak Chinese? Again, if this movie becomes a hit, people will inevitably be curious about the production process of this movie and the non-existent creative team and actors. How will this be explained then? From now on, the protagonist is surrounded by more and more dangers, although I know this is to make the novel story more interesting. But with troubles and disasters happening everywhere, it's easy to collapse the background world. As more and more troubles are encountered, it is easy for readers to feel that the humans in this world don't know anything, and that hundreds of ghosts are walking around at night every day. It is really outrageous. Finally, I personally strongly recommend expanding the territory. The area of ​​​​one city is too narrow. The only way to convince readers that the world is still peaceful while the protagonist is causing trouble is to tell readers that most other areas are fine and are just the protagonist's disaster. (And don't write everything in a gloomy way) By the way, during the trip to Wajima, the scene that most caused the audience to lose their SAN value, shouldn't it be the scene where all the living creatures in the field of vision turned into aliens and still participated in the festival?

Ahem, I heard that some people want to know how many people are in Director Lu's family, so let's do a census (?) Of the Lu family, and by the way, we'll also do a program to reveal the secrets of Director Lu's family! First of all, Director Lu expressed his sincere welcome to my arrival and hoped that I can spend a good life here. Haha, Director Lu is so enthusiastic. How can I be embarrassed? Director Lu's two close friends (?) Feng Yu and Qin Tiantian also welcomed me and invited me to have a packed lunch in the evening before leaving. I was touched by the fact that the family was very hospitable, so I agreed In the living room, I could see Director Lu raising a cute Corgi. I squatted down and waved. It ran over in a flash, and I couldn't put it down to touch this little cutie. While it was enjoying my massage, it drooled at me as it looked at me. You greedy little guy, I don't have much to eat, but you can ask Director Lu for some dog food later. Food We came to the bathroom, and first of all we saw a handsome and bright little brother in the mirror. He might be inspired to be a magician. Look, he took off my head and nothing happened to me. It was a wonderful splitting magic! Why is the shower curtain in the bathtub next to it open? Wait for me to open it and take a look. Ah, I didn't expect to see a cute little girl in the bathtub. She shyly got into the sewer pipe. I'm sorry. I quickly closed the shower curtain and disturbed the little girl from taking a bath Getting ready to get out of the bath. When we entered the room, there was a black, foggy guy standing at the door. Was he about to go to the toilet? I said to him: There is a little girl inside who is ready to take a bath. Please wait a moment Next, we sneaked into Director Lu's room. What kind of bedroom would this famous director live in? How exciting! Oh, I didn't expect to see a pretty girl wearing a witch costume sitting on Director Lu's chair as soon as I entered the door, helping Director Lu to work. The beauty is hidden in the golden house. I didn't expect that Director Lu likes this style. I seem to have accidentally learned Director Lu's little secret. I'll cut this off when the time comes~ Next, let's take a look at Director Lu's wardrobe and see what clothes there are in Director Lu's wardrobe. Hey, why is there a kitten? Here, it must be adopted by Director Lu. He is really a person who likes small animals. Hehe, let's look back at Director Lu's wardrobe. I didn't expect that Director Lu made so much money and the clothes he wore were quite simple. After closing the wardrobe, I couldn't wait to get ready for the next step, exploring under Director Lu's bed. I didn't know what secrets Director Lu would hide under the bed. I leaned down and saw the bed. The place was exceptionally clean, with only one Lanlan Lu doll placed there. He waved to me and smiled warmly, and I smiled back at him. Back to the living room, I saw a gray-haired girl watching TV on the sofa. I sat next to her. The TV was showing Director Lu's movie "Crying". The girl was watching it very seriously, so I decided not to disturb her. I went to Director Lu to ask him about his journey of making a movie After hearing about it, Director Lu took me to see his collection, including a suona, a crowbar, a rat tail, a few fish scales, a women's hairpin, a piece of glass, a Halloween pumpkin, an autograph from an ancient capital, a ranger's name tag, and a gold crown blackened by fire. He said these are all unforgettable memories Good! Recording is over! I sat down at the dining table happily, and everyone was sitting together, ready to eat~