Versatile Mage: I Am the Ancient King

The writing is too embarrassing and middle-school-aged. Qin Shihuang is written as a middle-school boy. His identity is too low-priced! Thank you for being embarrassed

I'll give you some advice: 1. The protagonist's speech must have a style as early as possible, otherwise you will speak like a modern person at one moment and like an ancient person at another 2. If it is a harem novel, quickly enter the main line of the Pearl Academy and write about the girls from the Pearl Academy, such as Mu Nujiao, to attract readers 3. You have written too many chapters in the front that are not very attractive, so you have to rely on your later efforts. It would be best to have colorful chapters to make up for it if there are exciting fighting sessions 4. The generals during Ying Zheng's lifetime can also be arranged to be resurrected, which will help early growth 5. The eight dead kings can also communicate with each other. Even if they can't do it themselves, they can send some powerful undead to help the protagonist 6. If it is going to be put on the shelves, it is better to update it more. I think you should have saved the manuscript? 7. It is best to get yourself a holy totem. It is very useful whether it is showing off or beating people.

The Qin Dynasty was dominated by black color, so this is quite suitable.

Don't write randomly because of your identity as Ying Zheng.

Qin Shihuang, a figure who once reached the pinnacle of power and status. Does your nose bleed when you see a woman? ? ? I have to say, I was shocked! What's the difference between your Qin Shihuang and the fat mansion from time to time?

To be honest, I really can't grasp Ying Zheng's writing. One Emperor through the Ages is really not easy to write.

Can you change Qin Shihuang's character? I feel like I have nothing to do with Wang. He looks like a wretched man.

The first emperor of Yingzheng would be there, so he would lose his identity and slip away.

Don't write about the First Emperor, it's too cheap

I'm speechless. The ancient king's 5 series of forbidden spells (can be the hard steel emperor on the roof of the world) will beep here. Why don't you go to the ancient capital to get the royal robe?

Mun Ningxue

Don't ask who this is, it's appropriate, just look like it

Now that the ancient king has been reborn, what about Wang Jiang (Wang Jian, Wang Ben), Meng Jiang (Meng Tian, ​​Meng Yi), Li Jiang (Li Xin), Zhang Jiang (Zhang Han) and others?

The Ancient King

Since when did Ying Zheng become such a bad guy?

In fact, this idea is good, starting from the ancient king

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I suggest you open a new Quanfa fanfic and learn more from other Quanfa fanfics to write, such as White Tiger Pendant, Magic Talent, Control You to Death. These Quanfa fanfics are very good. Start writing from a low level and improve step by step. Readers will like reading them This is just a personal suggestion. If you don't like it, you can delete it.