Seizing the Deer at the End of Sui Dynasty

He is 1.92 Meters tall and weighs 158 kilograms. Is he Ma Gan or a military commander? You must weigh at least two hundred kilograms.

There has been no update for thirteen hours, and the donkeys in the production team dare not take such a rest.

I just finished reading it. The writing is really good, and the level is far higher than those of the current fast food historical novel writers. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of beauty coming and going! Nowadays, authors like to add some random things when writing, making it look different and have no taste at all. As they are written, it becomes a mythical novel. I hope the author can stick to this old wine-like taste.

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Historical literature, not for power, profit or sex? Some people choose power over women? Eunuch?，，，，，，....，，，，？ How many bosses fighting for power have fallen under the skirt of a beautiful woman? Because this is history. Why does beauty mislead people? (Author, am I not good at writing?) Don't keep saying that you don't want women. Whenever you see a novel with a female protagonist, you despise it. I wonder if you hate women so much. Could it be a psychological problem? Although some authors are terrible at describing emotions, it would be strange to have a story without a female protagonist, right? Even if you hide the heroine, it's okay

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After reading more than 30 chapters, it can be seen from the chapter about the woman named Du that the author does not know how to write emotional dramas, which is toxic. A little suggestion for the author, if you want to write ten sentences for an emotional drama, condense it into one or two sentences, write a chapter, and condense it into ten sentences. This way, you can use your strengths and avoid weaknesses, and you can slowly make progress in the emotional drama. If there are too few words, as long as you don't open your eyes and lie down, it will be hopeless. Readers will scan it with one or two eyes and won't worry too much about any problems. This way the emotional drama won't drive away the reader. I'm afraid that the author is amusing himself and gets so excited by writing that he writes a big movie, and there are emotional dramas in the movie. Readers can't skip it even if they want to. In the end, the comments are all disgusting. Final advice, don't be lulled into self-confidence in emotional dramas. How many authors have good main lines but let the emotional dramas be ruined? You can slowly improve.

I feel it's okay. Fighting for hegemony in the late Sui Dynasty is relatively rare. I hope this is a good book, not a cool novel, and the character relationships and behavioral logic must be tenable. It would be better if there was some research. It's not that I don't like cool articles, it's that I only like reasonable and cool articles.

First of many times, does the author feel my love

Chapter 84 is extremely poisonous. I don't object to routines when reading the article, but I object to meaningless pretense that cannot advance the plot. Buying a small gift and then drawing a sword with someone, making enemies for no reason, and not showing the worldliness at all. The author must have hired a ghostwriter starting from Chapter 84.

I have read a lot of books about marriage, but this one is the worst. Some people regard marriage as a step for promotion and describe dozens of Zhang's struggles, which is exciting to read. Some authors write marriage as a transaction of interests. Crisp, this book is the only one where the main character is written about marriage. He builds an archway in a brothel and loses face and dignity. He starts out as a brave and resourceful young man from an aristocratic family, but suddenly he becomes a loser. It was a good book, but he insists on spreading poison everywhere.

The more you write about it, the more you feel that marrying a princess is a piece of shitty chess that has no value other than being manipulated and that you think entirely with your lower body.

Women are just embellishments in historical hegemony articles. What you write about is not only about women, but also about women. Are you still a student, the author?

I feel that it is unwise for the protagonist to marry a princess. A few concubines are enough at this time. The main wife is too awkward and is a complete burden.

Why does the protagonist look like a fool

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, and one hour is 3,600. There are 24 hours a day. You sleep for 6 hours, eat for an hour, wash your hands for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but what do you mean by only updating two chapters?

Being too obsessed with women is not pleasing to the eye.

The protagonist has a clear goal. He has set the goal from the very beginning, to be the emperor. This is quite good. He is direct and decisive, without too many comparisons.

Sure enough, there is a saying that is right. When it comes to emotional dramas, 90% of the time the author falls for the street. The protagonist of this book has no emotional drama, and ends up falling for a woman. If there were not those pretentious scenes between wanting a woman and not wanting a woman, the score might be doubled. Let the emperor grant the marriage, let the grandfather arrange it, what a good reason, what a good arrangement. If you don't know how to write about a woman in a hegemony novel, then it will be natural and you can just let the elders arrange it, or ask for it out of interest assessment. You have to say you want someone you know and is famous, and make it the same as the male protagonist in a romance novel. Even if you say you have higher pursuits and want a princess, it is better than this.

Yes, the protagonist has a clear goal, which is better than some people who travel through history and just want to be salty fish.

Write the protagonist well, a passer-by throughout the whole chapter, and a lot of obscenity, it's too much of a loss.

After reading the first 40 chapters, I found it to be a good novel overall. It has two poisonous points. Maybe the author himself didn't realize it. The protagonist he wrote was both upright and upright, and he lost both face and dignity, leaving only self-comfort. The first one to be cut off was to avenge a dozen people, but in the end hundreds died. Yes, tens of thousands were killed, but why didn't he avenge these hundreds? 20,000 People directly pacified Goryeo, which saved the endless loopholes. They simply said that after the end, the future credit would be too small, and they had to fight a battle. Wen Qing's illness was too serious, and Du Ruo's girl was in the room. She was swaying back and forth and had not yet accepted her. She called her brothers, but there were no girls, and I couldn't ask for them. So in this case, she should be kicked out when she first came in. In this case, she would have a reputation, but she insisted on staying in the room. I was not happy, but I also lost face and reputation. This is not a good and gentleman protagonist like Picking Up the Emperor. There is no need to portray a gentleman who does not deceive himself. Moreover, if he truly does not deceive himself, then he should not tease him verbally. Why should he have a premonition? If he does not win today, he will not be embarrassed in the future. When writing about women in Zhan Hegemony articles, they should either take them down happily and simply use them as daily adjustments, or they should write about the kind of truly wise and wise empresses of the generation, and write about this kind of light and romantic women, but still not take them down. You keep your mouth shut and become an emperor. You are in your 20s and you don't have any sons. Don't you know that fighting for hegemony in ancient times was a serious problem? For example, some people who compete for hegemony are very straightforward. They have a child at the age of 17, so they are straightforward. They are not writing about daily life, nor are they writing about brainstorming, and don't do those messy things. If the content of the book were not really good, I would have abandoned the book long ago. I hope there will be no similar ones in the future.

If you can write it, the author will continue writing and start a harem.

I don't like watching people become emperors. Being an emperor is too tiring.

Sui Dynasty Territory

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What about the chapter where I owe four thousand words?

This novel is very similar to the novel in the late Sui Dynasty. They are both Goryeo. They start off with a great start to attract attention, then make military exploits and marry a princess. Post-break plots are present in both films