The Day of Destruction Begins with a Great Master

This author is the same 🐮. The title of the book deliberately reads "Destroyed Day", but as a result, the content is not related to "Destroyed Day" at all, and then let readers who feel deceived argue in the comment area. Isn't this how popular it is~ Wonderful 🤐

No matter how rubbish the day of destruction is, the author can just lie down and live through it in his current world, right? And learning martial arts on Doomsday, isn't this a bit of a second-guessing move? Even if a grandmaster of the first generation can stand and fight against people all over the world, he can't break his defense, right?

Hey,,վ^վ,,. It was a pretty good book. From the so-called Warhammer to the current Linglong. Why can't I stand it? I always feel like I have no sense of immersion. . . . .

The combination of Chinese and Western elements is the most likely to collapse, because the sense of conflict is too strong. If nothing else, you just watch movies. Have any Chinese-American co-productions been successful? I was directly scolded by both sides, why? The feeling of tearing is too strong, so it would be better to choose a direction to write. The same is true for martial arts. Just like in the beginning, you write about martial arts and just write about martial arts. You have only written a dozen chapters. In the world of kung fu, it is still the Republic of China era. You learn martial arts from a master, and you also write about the Japanese invasion, the senior brother seizes power, and then there is a ghost blowing the lamp plot, and demons and monsters also appear. The question is only ten or twenty chapters. How many branches have you already divided? If a book is a big tree, it will branch into several branches before it reaches the seedling stage. It is no longer a tree, commonly known as grass. In the end, it looked completely different

We are not interested if you have three rivers but not three rivers. You update two more chapters every day, which is better than anything else

I just said, you want to go to Sanjiang. As a result, your update looks like this. What do you want us to do to support you?

No. 1: The first world is not handled very well. One is that the tomb robbing content is added to the martial arts world, but it does not have the core "weirdness" of the tomb robbing world. This makes me feel that the first world does not have a simple "opening point" and feels like a hodgepodge. Tomb robbing is like a temporary addition. It would be false to say that it is not attractive. After all, there will always be people who want to see what a world where tomb robbing and martial arts are together. However, the author did not deal with how the "spirit" of the world of martial arts and the "weirdness" of the world of tomb robbing are integrated. Instead, he chose to piece them together casually, which is a bit stiff. It is not that he does not want to see the mixed world of martial arts and tomb robbing, but that if the two themes want to be integrated, the balance point in the middle needs to be considered. No. 2: I don't ask the author to change it, but the title of your book starts from The Grandmaster. The first world is a hybrid world, which can easily cause some discomfort to readers who are attracted by the title of the book like me. I can try to read it seriously, but some people will suddenly give up. My personal opinion here is to practice the first two worlds and improve your writing skills. It is not that the hybrid world is not good, but that the setting of the hybrid world needs to be modified, which is usually a test of writing skills. For example, if you have hallucinations in tomb robbing, your martial art needs to find your own way to defeat everything with your will. So how can you defeat the illusion in the early martial arts? Isn't it just the blood and spirit you mentioned, the author? Then the weirdness of tomb robbing would be easy to solve. This is not the title you gave it as "easy" but "boring". That's all the book reviews I have given. I will also look at the next two worlds. If I feel that it still doesn't work, I will write another book review and tell the author which chapter I gave up after pursuing the book.

Why are you delaying the update? What a beast?

The writing is quite steady, and there is nothing wrong with the rhythm. I just rely on the steady flow of water in the front to hold on to the back.

. I don't know if anyone has taken a look at it with me. When they saw the Day of Destruction and the moon hitting the earth, they suddenly felt that the Day of Destruction was similar to that in Western religions... With this parallel world system, I thought it was an infinite flow story in which the protagonist travels to worlds that are about to be destroyed, and then acquires various abilities... Back to the topic. After reading six chapters, briefly share your thoughts. There are some highlights, the style is relaxed, and the reading is smooth. The framework of the entire story up to Chapter 6 is also well established, and there is a sense of expectation. In addition to these highlights, let me talk about some minor problems in personal perception. The story begins with a moon hitting the earth, which is essentially a time-travel, but the author uses this exaggerated method to superficially speed up the pace of the story. This operation, personally feels a little empty and overdone, but the effect is not bad. When it comes to the real beginning of the time travel, from about the first chapter to the end of the second chapter, I feel that various scenes are cut a bit too much and too fast. Especially in the first chapter, the feeling of just looking at the scene is particularly serious. If you skip a little content, you may skip a short transition, and you can't understand why you are on to the next scene. Moreover, it is no wonder that there is a big scene at the beginning to adjust the pacing. The pace of the first and second chapters is really slow. Even if the lady character who appeared in the first chapter will not appear later, I feel that the existence of this first chapter is a bit embarrassing. The story is back on track from Chapter 3 to Chapter 4, the plot begins to advance, and the various subplots are designed to make it quite comfortable to read. But from about the middle of Chapter 5 to Chapter 6, the pace slowed down again, or stagnated. The whole protagonist's practice session obviously didn't have many words, but it gave me a feeling that it wasn't over yet. Finally, let me give you some personal opinions. The author can indeed write things that are lighthearted and funny. I have also seen that some of the more boring plots are written in the background and environment to adjust them. The author also said that he did not want to write a book about fighting and killing, and wanted the style to be lighter. And it did. But the adjustment effect of simply laying the background is really limited. There are real hidden contradictions and conflicts between some characters. For example, in Chapter 7, when Ma San faces the old man's doubts, Ma San acts like a turtle grandson throughout the whole process and shows no performance at all. Can we leave a small "close-up" of something wrong to hint at Ma San's possible betrayal? For example, you can write the protagonist's threat to Ma San's status not just as a background, but as a real collision between the characters. The expectations for the subsequent plot will definitely be higher. There is also the golden finger of the background and the protagonist. The modern world with guns and cannons is not friendly to the golden finger of the protagonist. You can't say that the protagonist flies to kill the heads of Japanese people who are living a good life. That would be a masterpiece. I am very curious how the author will deal with it. If you have seen the 150,000-word version, let me know. That's it, slipped away.

I just read a book called Black Light Virus Martial Arts. You two are a perfect match.

This reminds me of that weird novel. The male protagonist has a supermarket on the sixth floor of his self-built house in the city. He has a girlfriend who has been a school beauty for several years. This girlfriend later despised him for being poor and sold his virginity to a gangster for 200 yuan... It almost made me laugh to death.

Why do so many people criticize you? Author I only want to say one sentence: "You use an atomic bomb as a pistol" It's that simple

Owning the Doomsday and actually practicing martial arts? It's like asking an Ultraman to cultivate immortality. It's too inconsistent. Goodbye. 😅

Doomsday learns Wing Chun, are you kidding? Selling dog meat on a sheep's head is in name only, but the co-author is just a traditional martial arts novel with the name Doomsday.

Ridiculous fuck, open the door for Ridiculous. Ridiculous is home. Let's learn Wing Chun on the day of destruction 😂😂

I am Doomsday who killed Superman. I just got off the plane and went to Foshan to learn Wing Chun from Master Ye.

I remember that Doomsday seems to have all the abilities of Superman. After all, she is also made from the corpses of Kryptonians. He has some Kryptonians, but I would like to ask the author, which version of Doomsday is yours? Mass-produced? From a movie? Or is it the regular kind in comics? Or can we evolve the Doomsday spores? Or does it evolve into a completely independent individual, with no organs, no cells, no specific characteristics of a living thing, and a completely single life? Still?

This book is really nailed to the pillar of shame, Wing Chun on the Day of Destruction, hahahahahahaha

In the ruins, facing Batman, Superman, and Wonder Woman who were waiting for him, Doomsday had eight hands in his legs, stretched out his hands up and down, and naturally spread out his palms in a posture: "Wing Chun Doomsday"

The background of Doomsday is a biological warfare weapon created by integrating and optimizing the genes of the nemesis. To put it bluntly, it is an optimized version of the super gene. You can basically output in tons and cruise at Mach numbers just by basking in the sun. Driving wood piles by snapping is known as learning skills, and the caterpillar can also teach the elephant how to eat grass.

After reading a few chapters, I was persuaded to quit, and I suggested changing the title of the book to "This Day of Destruction is a bit lame"

What to say about this book? If you take out the martial arts alone. It is a qualified martial arts novel. Each world can still be viewed individually. The key lies in the setting and the title of the book. The words "Doomsday" are really misleading! Even if you pick up "My Life in an Infinite World" casually, it will create a stronger sense of disparity than this kind of selling someone else's dog's meat over someone else's head. Reading novels is all about light novels. This is a feeling of fatigue caused by an old bookworm who has seen too many routines and settings. We don't need to be strong. No need for any settings to be awesome. What is needed is to express some worldview and values ​​through this setting. The difference between the Marvel Universe and the DC Universe is. Marvel is more inclined towards entertainment. The DC universe is even more different from a dark social style. What do you think of when you think of Superman? After gaining power, will you become a saint like Superman, or will you instantly become a citizen of the motherland? People who think this way are usually book lovers. However, the worldview of Superman's world is not like this. He prefers the kind of force deterrence and social contradiction in the Three-Body Problem. Suppose a superman appears in an ordinary world. No matter how kind he acts. But people will still fear his power. A person's mind is mysterious. It is a forbidden area that cannot be touched, and no one knows what the heart is like beneath the surface. An elephant will not feel guilty if it tramples an ant to death. Because it's a given. Just like the new version of the terrifying Superman "The Devil Boy". Same as the black robe pickets. The movie Batman v Superman perfectly presents his world view of the universe. The contradiction between God and man. Suspicion of strength and soul. And so-called preventive measures. In the words of Baldy Lai (We may not aim our guns at the devil, but we must make more silver bullets to kill the devil. This is a precaution that must be taken to prevent the tyrant from suddenly showing his face as a devil.) Express more of the things of the free country at that time. Such as terrorist organizations, era of deterrence. The conflict between superpowers and ordinary people. It's more about the helplessness of ordinary people facing superpowers. This is what writing these Superman genres and settings expresses. Instead of relying on your strength to act recklessly and achieve a temporary sense of satisfaction. Like a retarded child holding the button for a nuclear bomb. Everyone is serving you like an uncle, fearing that whenever you lose your childish temper, you will be so angry that you want to destroy the world. How is this different from those disgusting ancient tyrants? This kind of book is worthless. It tastes like chewing wax. How to set up a world view? Just avoid the things above. An old bookworm won't look at the buttons of your control box but operate them like a retarded baby. As far as humans are concerned, gods can also be killed. Just find his health bar. I won't be in awe of you because of your strength. To write this kind of book, you must first find your original entry point. Just like those sword immortals in Shushan, when they first started. The elders of the sect would say something. Why do you hold a sword? He is a hero who saves people from danger. Still be a pretentious person who pretends to be invisible. Or he is a mysterious guest who is carefree and carefree, both good and evil. What is mankind's most primitive dream? It's nothing more than the toxins left by evolution. It is an evil instinct that evolved in order to survive in that barbaric era. Genetic reproductive instinct (lust) Domination over human power (rights) Material power (money) To survive better (greed) Right to distribute prey (to enrich one's own pockets) What is superman's desire? If you became Superman, what would be your desire? Throw away these toxins left over from evolution. What other ideals do you have? It is to keep getting stronger and keep getting better. Or form a family and live a harmonious life. Or rule an era. Or wander and have adventures in the universe. Or you can set up an organization willfully and pretend to be the villain behind the scenes to play role-playing (Di Shitian in Fengyun) (The Xiling apostles of the Xiling Empire call them experts! They like to play this kind of cat-and-mouse game with the urban management). Or in the moment of gaining power, destroy this world that you once hated. Or hang those capitalists who have exploited you on the street lamps. Or suppress the world by force, become an uncrowned king, and then be overwhelmed by mortal politics and various documents, and finally go crazy. I'm not going to play anymore once my butt is slapped. Leave a mess behind. There are so many ways to write. Why do we have to cling to a system that uses power to suppress the world? Being invincible blindly will only be boring. Boring.

This book by the author can be regarded as the starting point of American comic novels.

I came here because of other novels. I didn't read a chapter. Just reading the comment section made me laugh to death. It's so interesting. There are so many pig noses 🤭🤭. The use of energy and skills in martial arts made me laugh to death. Superman's super brain can't learn anything after reading it. The use of energy cannot be learned by practicing martial arts 😁. The pig noses with low IQ made me laugh to death when practicing martial arts skills 😚😚

How can I write a thread about this setting? Stroke, hemiplegia, Parkinson's disease and Alzheimer's disease are so devastating that even a generation of great masters are invincible! !

Tsk tsk, the worst time Doomsday was hacked was better than Pangu playing basketball next door.

I have gained some knowledge. In the past, there was Destruction Day practicing Wing Chun, and in the future, there was the Immortal Emperor practicing internal martial arts 😎

There are legends about you everywhere in the world. Doomsday learns Wing Chun Hahahahahahahahahaha I'm laughing so hard

Is it normal to practice martial arts in the initial Doomsday? After all, if you are afraid of death or pain, if you are not afraid of death or pain, just jump into the lava and the martial arts value is worth it. It is very painful, so it is not strange to practice martial arts! If you use your own power flexibly, the opponent of the same magnitude as Doomsday will only be reckless and lose. What about infinite resurrection? This thing is too restrained. It will kill the evil eye and kill the soul...