Hogwarts Shippuden

In the early stage, the combination with Naruto was wonderful, but in the later stage, the balance seemed not to be grasped. It felt like watching Naruto with a layer of HP skin. It would be great if we could maintain the level of the early and mid-term

How about these two

I don't understand what the protagonist, a time-traveler with normal thinking, would have in mind to give a lot of arms, including RPGs, assault rifles, and sniper rifles, to two 13-year-old children, the Wesley twins, who like to cause trouble and naughty things...

This female supporting role is a bit sharp

First of all, the ninjutsu in Naruto is a very complete system, whether it is mental or physical, relying on chakra includes many aspects 1.Yinjutsu-including spiritual ninjutsu , such as the Yamanaka clan's mind-turning, mind-confused, and the Torture Club's brain-reading skills, as well as genjutsu, the Kurama clan's control of the five senses, mysterious ninjutsu, the Nara clan's shadow secret technique, blood inheritance b>, Sharingan - the eye of spiritual reflection, all the way to the Eternal Kaleidoscope is Yin Escape, and to the Kaleidoscope it is the pupil technique that makes all wishes come true, (for example, Uchiha Obito wants to escape from the world, the Kamui Sharingan appears, Shisui wants to change the minds of his tribe, etc. God), very buggy, the Samsara Eye is the eternal kaleidoscope mixed with Hashirama cells, it should be the product of Yin and Yang escape 2.Yang escape: Medical Ninjutsu, wide range of treatment, The depth of treatment can penetrate deep into the cells and strengthen the body, such as the Akimichi clan's doubling technique, Tsunade's strange power (this is my personal opinion, Yang escape does have the effect of strengthening the body, if it is just a strong control, it will not be just Tsunade's strange power) hand developed) 3.Escape Technique:In fact, Escape Technique should be divided separately, but that would be too many, and it is true that most Ninjutsu can be divided into five attributes Wind Escape b>The damage is strongest at medium and close range, and the main attributes are cut, such as Danzo's Vacuum Wave and Vacuum Jade, which I personally think are the most suitable ones in Harry Potter. The first fan-shaped attack surface has a large attack range and the second is faster; Fire ReleaseThe performance of Naruto is not good enough, but the attack range is definitely large. The high fire ball, high fire extinguishing, Phoenix fire, and Asuma's ashes are okay, but it seems that it is not easy to kill people. Maybe the fire escape movement speed is slower Water escape Regarding the applications of water, there are quite a lot, such as water shark bombs and five-eating sharks. It may be easier to shape and be more flexible Earth Escape. Focus on it, because it is usually on land, and Earth Escape is more practical, such as Escape's Heart Decapitation Technique, Strengthen the Body's Tu Ling Dango (the focus is on strengthening the body, not throwing big rocks), Hardening Technique, Invisibility's Rock Hidden Technique, Change the Terrain, promising transformation (can turn the drawing on the drawing into a real maze, feeling like you can build a house), control the enemy, Huangquan Marsh (turn into a swamp), explosion type large-scale output, Deidara, detonating clay, many types and wide range , Control gravity, the art of light and heavy rock (can go to the sky, create a gravity area, double the exercise, and can crush the enemy to death, or control the enemy to stay still) Thunder Escape, can strengthen the bodyspeed , increase reaction speed, thunder escape armor (should also be able to strengthen physical fitness), add debuff to the enemy, paralysis, ninjutsu attack speed is very fast, and the hit should still be high temperature Sealing Technique has many functions, sealing scroll storage, sealing fire seal target, four purple flame array enchantment, Yin seal storing chakra or magic Power is widely used. In addition to the frontal destructive power, the damage is not bad. You can find Forbidden Techniques anywhere else. There are many, and the principles cannot be analyzed well. There are various types, such as Flying Thunder God, Reincarnation of the Earth, Yamata no Orochi, etc. The zombies can be sealed Attributes can be used in combination, including bleeding, wind + water, ice escape, thunder + water, mist escape, etc. Personally recommended, earth escape, wind escape, speed and control are all available, others will be needed later.

10 Copies of HP and 9 copies of Hermione! Speechless🙄

To be honest, you said it was hp. It was too dramatic when I watched it. Is this what the original character is like? In some places, I feel that the author got too excited by writing and wrote jokes for the sake of making jokes. The male protagonist, a time-traveler, was probably a junior high school student who traveled through time. In the early stage, he was able to play gangsters and do underground business. Even if you have superpowers, I don't believe that gangsters can play with it so easily. After all, the protagonist is not bulletproof. To put it simply, there is no logical self-consistency😑

This is the most interesting novel I have read recently! Under the author's play, Naruto's jokes are not jerky at all and can be smoothly integrated into the world of Hogwarts. He often smiles knowingly when he is watching it, making people call him a good guy! Not only Naruto's jokes, but also other jokes come out of the mouth. For example, Justin Hanmo's joke was something I didn't expect at all. The more I read it, the more interesting it becomes. Anyway, I will keep ordering it. I don't know what the author thinks. The last book had too few words. I hope I can write more in this one. The writing is really good. If it continues with this momentum, it will include how to transition from a naughty child to a black devil, the growth of the protagonist, the love and hatred of Gerden, the second generation of the real devil against the second generation of the fake devil, etc. With the author's writing style, I can definitely expect to keep writing. Come on, don't be a eunuch, I read the review after the author said that the book is a book to be nourished, so I followed it. If you read the review, you can read this book. It is relaxed and enjoyable, not too brain-consuming, but the setting is quite reasonable, but the emotional scenes are a bit awkward. The protagonist has no golden finger and no system (at present, there is no one), but has a lot of chakra (magic). The magic world uses imagination to create ninjutsu, which is very interesting and worth reading.

Dear author, can you sign a contract with me

The author, please take a look at the first few pictures. If I hadn't been a second reader, I would probably have been told to leave by those who said your writing was not good. Just delete what should be deleted. It's too easy to drive people away

My mentality is a bit broken now 😭😭 I hope all readers can don't just collect the book, read the latest chapter, so that I can increase my level by reading 😭😭 Now is the critical period for PK recommendation position. I can't advance to the level without reading. 😭😭 There are still 3 days left for the postgraduate entrance examination. After the postgraduate entrance examination, I still have graduation thesis and graduation internship to be busy Now writing a book depends on my passion If the book hits the street, no matter how passionate I am, I can't sustain it 😭😭 Everyone, please catch up on the latest chapter

In the later period, I started to write group portraits, and they were too Naruto... It just became boring when I looked at them.

Hermione Emma smells so good(๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

It's really disgusting to read. Just write it well. It's disgusting to leave it here to corrupt it, right?

Dumbledore's mother is so beautiful

In my opinion, this book is not very rigorous in its logic among HP fans. So he doesn't quite fit HP's worldview, and the descriptions of his characters don't have the pure European flavor of the West. Huh? It is a very authentic Chinese fan fiction. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is also very out-of-the-box, and the novel setting is still very interesting. The overall style of this book is quite funny. If you don't like this style, you can read other books. If you like it, then this is a rare "little dessert" article. There are still many good HPs from other fans in our starting point.

Protagonist: Kyle Dumbledore. Grindelwald It's hard to find a pretty boy with blond hair and heterochromatic eyes, so let's make do with it

I just saw it recently. Let's just say this... Emma sucked it, right? The breasts are so big at the same time. Why are these barren pictures like this? These forehead lines, these nasolabial folds, this bald spot, give it to Hermione, and these people. I can't even look at them

This book was very good in the early stages, but in the later stages it was too Naruto-y, almost like a Naruto fanfic.

Hannah's looks are actually okay if you just watch the movie Sophomore Room. . . The extra character who appears in the fourth Goblet of Fire is quite ugly. I'm not sure if that one is Hannah. After all, Hannah's name is not mentioned in that plot in the movie or the book Then let's just assume that it's not. (Don't argue with me!Suppression warning⚠️) 🥱 Golden braids + medical magic + strange power +36E, just think of her as Tsunade

When a newcomer saw chapter 236, he suddenly said that Hannah was no longer the heroine, and then he scrolled down the table of contents and saw Hermione proposing? ? ? Didn't you say that Xiaonan is your favorite? Isn't it Hannah who had the most interactions in the front? ? ? Why did these two people suddenly skip? ? ? ?

The more I write, the more it looks like Naruto, and it feels like a replica of the Naruto anime! The front is good, but it just replicates Naruto's power system. From the back, it feels like the plot of Naruto has not been changed much. Basically, HP characters are used to cover up Naruto's skin, and then the plot of the Naruto anime is followed. It feels like reliving the plot of Naruto!

Brothers, here is a picture for you

Since it is spiritual magic, can I create a cheat? Is science plus magic having a head start? Computer programming + magic idealism + reality modification = heroic core, the power of the galaxy is online, the most amazing loser in the known universe

I am here from Daily Guide to Poison. Is this book a good read? 😎

In the Naruto story, shouldn't one of the trio drop out in pursuit of power?

As far as the protagonist's status is concerned, you want to find Hermione as the heroine because you want to do something, but the protagonist still has to look at Hermione's face when doing something? Is this the Dark Lord?

Although this book is not the best HP fanfic, it is the most interesting one!

I often tighten up the key points and then arrange for the male protagonist to do other things. After declaring war, he suddenly said that he had to live his life as usual and go to class as usual. Then he went to find the person who had plotted against him and continued his class... Hiss... It felt a bit like the Headless Horseman. Patients with gastric perforation should carefully consider collecting this article.

Only fifteen readings in two hours is too pitiful. For the sake of youth, please update it