Starting from Peerless Tang Sect, Poaching the Protagonist's Background

If it is a simple and refreshing novel about venting dissatisfaction with the third son of the Tang family, this book is a qualified refreshing novel. But some of the content is a bit lacking. The protagonist's character design is a problem, he is really a villain. Dare I ask if someone who does everything reasonably and uprightly can still be called a real villain? I understand that the author wants to coerce the general trend and make Huo Guaozhong betray his family, but please also maintain a good character... For example, the inner scene with Huo Gua and the referee scene during the first game. The reason for fearing that Mrs. Zhou would cause trouble was not valid, and the school rules and other teachers were not decorations. Subjectively, wanting to kill people and punish people's hearts is more in line with the villain's setting. Second. The game is a climax, and it seems really enjoyable at first glance, but there are a lot of shortcomings in it if you look closely. In the class teacher gambling session, it can be seen that the author wants to portray the image of a bitter old lady, but the logical processing is a little... Inappropriate. Joking and truthful protagonist group - Mrs. Zhou's cold face - Mrs. Zhou's opponent initiates a bet - the protagonist's head teacher reconciles - Mrs. Zhou is reluctant - completes the bet. If we stick to logic, Mrs. Zhou really didn't initiate this matter first. If I were the author, I would suggest digging into the relationship between the head teachers. Why is Mrs. Zhou the best teacher? After picking out all the defective products, who should they give them to... Of course the other teachers. Wouldn't there be a contradiction in this way? The head teacher accidentally observed the training of the real protagonists and deliberately acted like a Zhuangbuxiang? There is no need for diodes in this world, and besides, a little Arrancar can take away Shrek's holy halo. There is also the description of Xiao Xiaoli's heart, why are you looking at me? This is not the way he looks at his teammates. And then you cried? Ah? With all due respect, my expressions in this paragraph are of the subway, the old man, and the mobile phone. It's okay to write about fear. I just met a story and discovered the dark side of Huo Gua, so I was afraid of alienation... It was a good description, but it was ruined by superfluous details. As long as there is some foreshadowing in the previous article, it will not be inexplicable. For example, after Wang Dong was eliminated, he cursed "trash", and Huo Guanxin added a complaint. Write as much as you want first, and then look back to make additional comments.

I don't have high requirements 😢 Can you update it twice a day after it is put on the shelves? It's not enough.

When will the author update? Can it remain stable? The promise of updating has never been fulfilled

If you keep updating at this rate, you will never be popular in your life.

Author, in fact, what we care about is not the issue of whether he can kneel or not, but have you discovered a very serious problem, that is, apart from the previous game and Teacher Zhou's punishment, how long has it been since you had a good time and a climax? And the chapters after the release are not very attractive. Neither the Far North nor Huo Yuhao's return to school are climaxes. And with Huo Yuhao, you are suppressing it on the surface but actually hiding what you are planning, but you have already planned dozens of chapters, and you are even slower╮( •́ω•̀ )╭. Even if we are patient and wait for you to write it out, there will be some people who are impatient. Just look at the comment area and you will see that it has become more and more polarized. You can't keep planning these types of hypocrites who are similar to the Black Hand, and you can't keep having fun. You should at least have an incident in ten chapters or so, right? Otherwise, it would be a bit too much. You should understand, after all, you are quite smart. As a newcomer, sometimes when writing a book, you still need to grasp what some people like to read. You also need to know how to write in your own genre so that the shortcomings of this type of writing can be downplayed or even turned into advantages. It should not be too boring. To make the protagonist have a sense of existence, not everyone has strong thinking and spatial composition skills, nor Everyone can roughly guess the protagonist's plan and subsequent development and feel excited, looking forward to the big scene. There are also many students or grumpy people who don't think about this. At this time, you need to add some chapters that make readers sticky or attractive without reducing the quality. Come on, newcomer.

I hope the author can give a reasonable explanation, otherwise I really can't stand it: Why should Huo Yuhao be so tolerant when he feels a little uncomfortable? To put it bluntly, it is really cowardly to the extreme. Since everyone is so dissatisfied, why not suppress it to the extreme? After seeing the latest chapter, Huo Yuhao in the original novel showed no mercy at all and was forced to kneel down. The protagonist can tolerate this, so why not just stop writing the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion and change it to the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles?

Tang San, the madness of Guoman's combat power. A generation of god-kings, invincible in the world, unworthy of being anyone's opponent. Tang San, a milestone in the national comic's combat power, has set a new low in the national comic's combat power. The power is enough to shatter hydrogen gas, and the intelligence is close to that of Patrick Star. His thousand-year plan is more brain-burning than Teletubbies, The death of his wife is more tear-jerking than the midnight bell, His battle with the six god kings is more passionate than Boruto, His reunion with his family is more heartwarming than The Shining. No matter how weak you are, he is always beneath you. He, with unparalleled talent and strength, stands at the pinnacle of hydrogen people and is expected to be close to the working cell. He is more intelligent than single-celled organisms and more principled than Kohei Horikoshi. He is the sewer in Chinese comics and the Sunset Six in Gods. His power transcends the limits of human imagination, transcends cause and effect, and transcends the concept of "weakness". No matter what, you can't be weaker than him. Seeing his wife's death from illness, nine out of ten shed tears and one laughed wildly. The god who cannot even cure diseases has been the only one from ancient times to the present. Here, I dedicate a poem to Tang San: A hundred kilograms of huge force shatters the void, The giant cotton hammer fights unparalleled. The weakest character in Chinese comics is not you, The clown is actually you. The above is all my respect for the great god king Tang San. Copied

About the Silver Dragon King. The author just wants to ask, how much do you think you should do to alarm it. Under what circumstances will it give up recuperating and sleeping and take action! Everything is based on the original text, and any subjective assumptions will not be accepted! The main reason is that some readers are too worried about the Silver Dragon King. The author's explanation seems to be of no use, so he can only post for public discussion.

The author would like to ask, if the protagonist wants to form a force in the future, what do you think he can name it? The kind that is powerful and domineering, but not embarrassing.

Explain the updated question. Actually, there is a reason why the author updates the beast. In order to ensure the development of the characters and minimize subsequent bugs. The author is sorting out the plot of Peerless Tang Sect, and also sorting out the timeline of soul power and opportunities in the book, which is very cumbersome. I hope you can understand me.

I would like to ask if you have any plots that you would like to see? The author will brainstorm ideas on a reasonable basis. Thank you all.

The author is back! ! ! It's really difficult for me. I helped the author reply to hundreds of comments... I hope the author can add a few more comments to me...

Regarding the marriage system on Douluo Continent. Huo Yuhao's father Dai Hao is an example. There are two obvious reasons. The White Tiger Duchess's wife also has a side room.

Dai Hao is also a hypocrite. After Huo Yuhao succeeded, he let the Duchess take the blame while he knew nothing. You don't know what a twelve or thirteen year old son is, a ghost believes. I don't believe that if you have Huo Yun'er in your heart, you won't leave any eyeliner. It's clearly the kind of one-night stand. And Dai Yuner is also a female licker.

Now, the author and readers discuss a topic that is of great interest to you. Do you think how to get Zhu Lu to accept Xiao Xiao so that it won't appear abrupt? I hope you will actively leave messages and make suggestions. The author will consider incorporating some suggestions as appropriate.

It's so scary. It's been almost two years and less than 100 chapters have been updated. It will take years of the monkey to complete.

The writing is very good. The protagonist is not like other male protagonists in other fan fiction. He always tries to force your wits on you. Also, as a female, she has no brains to fall in love with the male protagonist. I almost vomited when I watched this. The only problem is that the author is a one-update beast and has no choice but to keep it. Anyway, school is about to start. I hope you will still be updating when I come back

About Chuangqun. It's too early to start a group now, I'll wait until I finish writing this book

Now, let's talk about something interesting. What undead magic or undead characters do you want to see? 🙂

To be honest, the protagonist went to Star Dou this time a little hastily. Although the protagonist needs to hunt the ten thousand year soul beast alone because of the special characteristics of Qiongqi Wuhun, Star Dou is not the only choice of location. The water in Star Dou is too deep 1. The auspicious beasts like to wander around in Star Dou and have destiny attributes and Tang San's layout. The probability of encountering the protagonist is not small, and the fortune will be unpredictable 2. The protagonist uses Qiongqi's bloodline to expel the soul. Beasts, and there are many ferocious beasts in the Star Dou, Qiongqi's blood and breath remain in a large area. Once a ferocious beast or even the Silver Dragon King notices it, it will be difficult to escape. Even if the protagonist is discovered after leaving the Star Dou, it will be detrimental to the protagonist's future development. If you reach too high a level, you will lose control of the situation and can only fall into a passive situation of taking one step at a time. Just like now - using the white tiger clone to fight against the auspicious beasts will definitely attract the appearance of the evil beasts and the attention of the Silver Dragon King, making it difficult to end. At the current stage of development, the protagonist should try his best to avoid contact with high-level things that he cannot deal with. He will try to contact them after he is fully developed and has enough trump cards. At that time, the protagonist will take the initiative and control it within the plan, which will give him an extra bargaining chip to resist the God King The author probably designed this plot because it is not yet time to go to the far north to launch the Ice Emperor line, and he wants to draw out the auspicious beast line and Tang San's layout, but I have to say that it is really too early to show off in the Star Dou with the protagonist's current trump card and strength If you don't like it, don't criticize, welcome to debate 🙂

The author would like to ask all readers, if you were only allowed to use an AK47, how many levels of soul masters could you kill to death? Discussions welcome.

Take Sister Xiaotao, take it! ! !

The author has corrected the bug regarding soul bones in Chapter 39. Thank you for your corrections. Please read it again and let each other know. Hope you can understand

And the brothers I replied to! ! ! The authorhas updated! ! !

I can only tell when it will be over. I lived for a few days and then died 😡

This book is well written, with a novel perspective and a good pace, but... Why did it fall apart?

It's been 26 years. Have you forgotten this novel?

When will it be updated? Hurry, why should I give you a message?