Technology Changes Daqin, Starting from Me

The subject matter is very good. Subscription is not recommended. I couldn't stand it during the free trial. I can only read the first few dozen chapters, but not the rest.

In order to have a story to write, he forcibly kept Yi Xiaochuan and made a big fuss about the protagonist's wedding. The protagonist lost all his face and just beat Yi Xiaochuan.

Xiang Yu is also a very disgusting person. I used to like him, but after seeing the Qin Empire and deliberately looking up information, I really don't like him anymore.

I don't want to read the introduction. You are no different from Yi Xiaochuan. Apart from wanting to change the Qin Dynasty, what else is there? Why change the Qin Dynasty? It's not yours. You really have such awesome strength to build your own country. You authors are really speechless sometimes, just like those who went to the Three Kingdoms to help Cao Cao conquer the world. It seems that without you, there will be no third generation and you will not be able to be the emperor.

What are you writing about? You say trash Yi Xiaochuan is like this or that, but your protagonist is not as good as Yi Xiaochuan, the Holy Mother. Galaxy Gene is also written in a funny way. For mortals who have just awakened, they are at least invulnerable and invulnerable. Even if your world is magically changed, it still behaves like a world with low martial arts. Why did you let the bandits escape twice? Have your galactic genes been watered down?

The protagonist should first focus the main story on education and recruiting apprentices, first spend ten years educating the natives of the Qin Dynasty, and then based on these talents, add the protagonist's understanding of technology to change the entire Qin Dynasty. Either release the technology and let hundreds of schools in the world make changes, thereby driving the entire Great Qin to change. As for you, who writes without beginning or end, buy a book. What kind of book, paper book or bamboo slips? Do you know what the result was when paper appeared in Da Qin? Scholars will go crazy. I guess the author doesn't even know what writing was used during the Qin Dynasty. I guess the author doesn't know the social status of Confucianism in the Qin Dynasty. According to my feelings about your book, you are suitable for writing novels about picking up girls and pretending to slap them in the face to start a harem.

Stick to Chapter 9 and say Holy Mother to others. My mother is like a saint. Goodbye poisonous hair

Is the author a primary school student telling stories? The whole story is casual and childish.

The book has been signed and the contract has been sent. As written above, the status will change in two or three days, so brothers let me see you. A true newcomer, the first signing in history.

Qin Yi

Let's go, my writing is so bad 😅

The writing is messy and boring.

When I read the title, I thought it was on the pure science fiction side, about a whole country traveling across the stars, but it turned out that you added the Yin and Yang family, and it was also a self-proclaimed article by the author.

Typical of starting high and going low, having a good idea but not controlling it, tell a joke (there are scenes in many martial arts novels. You are a martial arts master, you are so awesome, but you are killed by a poisoned arrow). With the power of the galaxy, you can already be said to be very awesome. You develop slowly, and the follow-up will not be too bad as long as it is not too exaggerated. Except for the ridiculous hierarchy (what about playing games?), You are not at all. Loyal fans of the Super Seminary don't have a first-generation divine body at all. The third-generation super warrior is already a god, but the genetic engine is not loaded. In addition, the author is not very old. You are either a high school student or just in college. A normal adult will not think like you. Also, your description of the protagonist's image does not have any masculinity. (It's cool to eat a peach) That's probably it.

When Yi Xiaochuan was sick, there was Lu Su. When he first came, there was Xiang Yu. When he went to build the Great Wall, there was Yu Shu. When he came back, there was Meng Tian. But what Zhao Gao has is just a body with defects. Yi Xiaochuan harmed Gao Yao, cheated Xiang Yu, betrayed Gao Lan, betrayed the Emperor of Qin, betrayed Meng Tian, ​​provoked Lu Pheasant, deceived Lu Su, was dishonest to his friends, unjust to his brothers, unfaithful to his master, disrespectful to women, thought of staying with a married woman forever, and jumped out of the halo of the protagonist, he is a complete scumbag

Shao Siming

So many levels, the lowest military commander. In decimal terms, what is the population base? Bragging without drafting

Is this background the mythical Great Qin? I always feel that writing about extraordinary things is a bit redundant.

Alas, it feels like writing essays when I was in junior high school.

I feel like you've mixed up too much of the world. It would have been better if you didn't write fantasy in the beginning. I feel like writing history and developing technology might make it acceptable here! I don't know how many people like the hodgepodge world, but I don't like it anyway.

It's better to just write about the construction of super-god technology. Taking the earth as the starting point, directly establishing the system of science and technology, and writing to a certain extent, directly connecting to the super-god universe, writing about super-mundane plus technology, which is a headache to read. The key is that the author's writing style cannot control multiple systems, which makes it uncomfortable to read.

Isn't it about combining science and technology with military force? I've read Chapter 56 and I haven't seen the protagonist practicing martial arts. What's going on? In the previous fights, pistols were used, but they couldn't hit anyone. Moreover, the fighting scenes did not depict the power of the warriors.

Can you write a novel about anything now?

Isn't it nice to grab a nuclear bomb with your hand, hammer a Gundam, build a spaceship and battleship, and climb the technology tree? Women only affect how quickly I draw the knife

Are you trying to blackmail Yi Xiaochuan?

At 12 o'clock, there may be less than one chapter, so I will post it around 1 o'clock. Continue coding

The power of the galaxy is considered a god. Why can't he resist damage and hide and hide? Why can't he be beaten to death? He can't even break his defense and hide. It's so boring to just beat the opponent until he is crippled. This is so cool. Support.

What is written here? Dancing around, the plot is so inconsistent

Shouldn't it be possible to climb up from basic technology?

This protagonist has the ability to rebel, so he is not far from death, right?