People in Tokyo: Starting with a Time and Space Gate

This writing style still feels the same as before, but I'm no longer good at it 😅

Is Xiaoshuai chasing a new show? It will be over soon. What about the new book? Still writing?

Author, have you forgotten your dragon brother?

The protagonist is no longer called Li Yalin, Ye Qingjie

Hey, Keli adult version

We are all travelers in different time and space, and they still want to make money. If we have more money, it will have no effect in the real world, especially in the extraordinary world. Learn more about various knowledge about different time and space. , Isn't it fragrant? Don't you know that knowledge is power?

The author's novel with Li Yalin as the protagonist seems to have been read two years ago when I first started reading online novels. I happened to read this book when it was on sale for free, and the author's name looked familiar. I read all the current updates and summarized the good aspects: 1. The protagonist is pseudo-invincible. He has never encountered anyone who cannot be beaten, and he has not deliberately made the protagonist suffer in order to improve his strength. This aspect is quite comfortable to watch, unlike Kamen Rider's new skin, which starts to shrink as soon as the protection period expires until the next new skin. 2. Although some of the worlds I have chosen so far are relatively unpopular, I have basically heard the names. At least there is no clichéd movie game world that starts with biochemistry. The anime game time is just swords and swords. In the past two years, with the increase of work and age, I used to watch more than a dozen or even dozens of anime a year, but now maybe three or five a year. Many of them are downloaded on mobile phones and only watched two episodes a year later... I have watched Slime and Shieldmaiden during the time chosen by the author. 3. It's a sense of nostalgia. There aren't many novels of this type nowadays, but on the other hand, novels of this type are no longer popular. As for this novel, there are a lot of complaints or poisonous points. 1. Open a harem at will. To be honest, it is really unexpected to see such stud men at the starting point in 2021. However, this way of writing can easily become boring. When I first started reading novels, I read all kinds of novels. I thought harem novels were really cool, and I read them all, including school beauties, nurses, teachers, beauty killers, etc. After reading three or five books, I felt that it was just like that. Almost a year later, I read this boring "This Man Is Sick", I Love You... 2. The IQ is obviously not online. Especially the protagonist and his harem. The protagonist has a cheat and doesn't work. No one suspects that he delivers food and drinks every day. He doesn't teach the cheat but teaches swordsmanship to the three sisters and the maid, especially since the maid is still an undercover agent. The younger sister of the protagonist's stepmother inexplicably wants to protect the protagonist. Then after seeing the protagonist's strength, she begins to think that the protagonist can protect Japan even if she is here. She also wants to find evidence instead of letting the protagonist solve the problem with force. When the evidence is found, she fails to do so, and the whole process is in vain. It's obvious that Xiao Da is a master, but he always plays the role of a supporting player. The three sisters of the Nan family live next door. It is outrageous that they can enter the protagonist's house at will without the owner's permission. What is the point of keeping the protagonist's secret? They can squat in the protagonist's house sooner or later. 3. The female characters are inexplicably nymphomaniacs. The female characters in it are as if they have no brains. The protagonist starts to fall in love with her if she exudes a little bastard spirit. For example, the female elf commander of the Orc City proposed to the protagonist on the spot because of her fruit candies. The protagonist's aunt, after being helped by the protagonist a few times, felt that it felt good to be taken care of by the protagonist. You are a generation older, and you are still there even if you don't mention your age. Is it really good for an old cow to eat young grass? The princess in Tanya Wars directly offers to work for the protagonist on the condition of marriage. The newest female general in this world heard that he would sacrifice his life for nothing if he could take her to Tokyo. These plots are really disgusting to watch, and many of the following chapters are skipped. Final suggestions: Don't open a harem at all. Think of dxd, New Girl Demon King, Demon Forbidden, etc. Although the protagonists open a harem, they use their own lives to protect the girls. It's not uncomfortable to watch. But for a heroine like Passerby, if she doesn't do anything with her, she'll just post it, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. There are basically no fans of Passerby heroines who don't like the protagonist. Another strength improvement speed should not be too outrageous, as it can easily lead to the collapse of combat power in the later stage, or the protagonist becoming completely invincible. The combat system becomes a decoration. The first ten chapters are A-level, and after only two hundred chapters, it is S-level and the Awakened Demon King. If it becomes stronger, it will be the original Demon King or become a god. It feels like if this continues, the protagonist will have basically no enemies to fight against.

The first part of Xiaoshuai's books always attracts me more, but becomes more and more boring at the end. The book that attracts me the longest is the Demon King of Another World. The rest of the books also have that kind of beginning that I really want to read. As a result, the more I read, the more I feel watery (not the number of words), it just feels like drinking water that is bland and tasteless. Xiaoshuai needs to write this book well and last longer. Come on✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

Why do some people always post weird hand-drawn pictures of homework papers for primary school students?

I totally saw the three sisters from the Nan family coming in, but I couldn't bear the mentally retarded protagonist who persuaded him to quit. Then look at the heroine and the supporting actress. This horse is a humanoid cannon. Say goodbye.

I don't know what to say

To be honest, the first part was pretty good, but then there were too many worlds traveled too quickly, and there was no follow-up to the previous worlds, including Akudama, Tanya, and Maple. . . Maybe it's because I skipped watching it, but when I got to that college, I had no desire to continue watching it.

Nam Xuanxiang

It's so cold that even the limited-time free offer doesn't even have any splashes.

Why do you choose to write about a niche fandom? I don't understand it at all.

It's too watery, I don't push the plot, I don't write about daily life, I'm just doing something with unclear meaning, and there's a lot of nonsense. . . The main reason is that there is too much nonsense. I write a long paragraph and then come back to it without doing anything 😥

It looked okay in the early stage. But the main character is a pure stud. See you one day at a time. Then there was no news, so I went to find the next one. Not interesting.

After reading Chapter 38, the protagonist is still thinking about running away with 3 seconds of invincibility. It's not that it can't be used as a life-saving trump card. The problem is that if the protagonist feels like this, someone wants to kill him. Even a character with B-level combat power will not have the time to activate 3 seconds of invincibility. Not to mention that there is a map to see the enemy and friends Every time in the book, when it feels wrong, he opens the map to see the enemy and friends. The author cannot write to improve the protagonist's combat consciousness before going out.

Stupid pig's feet have long been out of the mainstream. Those who say pig's feet are a manifestation of ordinary people have never been out.

At the beginning, I just said that spices are scarce and expensive, so why are you setting up a street stall? Have you ever read the novel before time travel? Don't you know how valuable glass was in ancient times? Why does it lower your IQ so much? He didn't even change his clothes. He clearly let others know that he was a visitor from another world. In the end, he asked others how they knew and could he not be so vicious and at least be normal.

Too low IQ😥

The protagonist is so greasy, especially when the protagonist is talking to a woman, it's so greasy that I can't watch it.

How to say it? That show is so fucking unpopular that I haven't even watched it. Then I concluded that it's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away.

The next one will be about daily life. I'll add Love Live 4, light music, the main character's strength is better, add some dragon maids, lolita, etc., As well as new series like Furumi-san, and also add a sports series, what do you think?

Write about something unpopular, I can't understand the rest at all...

Oh, forget it, I quit. This book is becoming increasingly difficult to understand and confusing.

It's May Day soon, will the new book be out soon?

Damn it, how could I end this book without paying attention?

What a defiant male protagonist. The last time I saw such a defiant actor, it was written by Sheen who was so eloquent.

It looked good from the beginning, but when the portal suddenly appeared and attacked the world that the protagonist had been to, it became uncomfortable to watch. When it came to the goddess, it was completely unbearable.