It All Started with This Ripe Watermelon

Author, find a job in an electronics factory!

This novel seems quite interesting in the first few chapters, but then it gets worse and worse.

Sa Ri Lang~

It was okay in the beginning, but after a few time travellers, it started to get toxic

I can't stand it anymore when I see a lot of time-travelers.

I wanted to continue watching it, it was interesting after all, but when I saw the mentally retarded medic, my blood pressure went up and I couldn't watch anymore. I can't stand my mentally retarded pig teammates anymore, so I'm leaving.

A good start. When I formed a team, I felt very inconsistent. In reality, a female college student was brought into the yard with a dog in her arms. It also feels bad if my clothes are torn and my legs are leaking. To the sports meeting. Feel sorry. Death from poison.

The writing skills need to be refined, not to mention what kind of country yard can cost 450,000 yuan. I only have one thousand yuan left, and it is said that it is a full flower yard. I also thought that I spent so much money because I also spent money to renovate it. After reading two chapters, I found that it is really a pure flower yard. Good guy, the door of the 450,000 yuan country yard leaks and jingles, and the mud soup boils in the yard when it rains. Do you think this kind of plot is interesting? It just shows a mentally retarded protagonist. In addition, the plot is very exciting if you open the text to read it. Even reading it together is as boring as drinking tap water.

Toxic, farewell! Author, please find some regular work, you will starve to death with your writing skills!

I came here to read the novel, not the introduction to Pokémon.