It All Started with This Ripe Watermelon

Author, you should find a job in an electronics factory!

The first few chapters of this novel were quite interesting, but it got worse and worse as it went on.

Sa Ri Lang~

It was alright at first, but it started to get toxic after a few transmigrators.

I couldn't stand watching anymore after seeing so many time travelers.

I was going to keep watching, since it was somewhat interesting, but when I got to that idiotic medic, my blood pressure spiked, and I couldn't continue. I can't stand incompetent teammates, so I'm leaving.

The beginning was good. But the team formation felt off. Then, the scene of a female college student being led into a yard with a dog, her clothes torn and exposing her legs, felt really bad. Then came the sports meet... Sorry... She died from poisoning.

The writing style needs improvement. Leaving aside the question of what kind of rural courtyard could cost 450,000 yuan and leave the owner with only 1,000 yuan, and then claiming the entire courtyard was spent on renovations, I initially thought it was because so much money was spent on renovations at the same time.

This is extremely poisonous. Goodbye! Author, you should find a proper job. With writing skills like yours, you'll starve!

I came here to read the novel, not to read Pokémon introductions.