Live Broadcast of Hand-To-Hand Nuclear Fusion in the Wilderness

I have been reading this book for a long time and have been following it for a long time. It is good in the early stage. The author has also checked the information. The technological advancement is normal and the plot is well advanced. However, in the later period when satellites are launched and controllable nuclear fusion begins, the article describes too much about the setting. The plot often fails to move forward in several chapters, and coupled with the author's update speed, it is really difficult to keep up with updates. It has developed beyond the current technological stage of the earth. Spending a lot of words to describe the technological architecture is a bit excessive, and it will affect the viewing experience. I hope the author can change it. In the stage of beyond-earth technology, no one will argue with you about whether the process and results of technological development are right or wrong. Everything is unknown. There is no need to spend so many words describing and constructing it. Also, don't describe the protagonist's inner thoughts and activities with so many ideological descriptions that assume they are useless. Overall, the early stage of this book is very good, it reads smoothly and is comfortable. However, in the later period, the author spent too much text to build the unknown technological structure and the psychological activities of the protagonist, which seriously affected the perception and plot advancement. I hope it can be improved...

As an old bookworm, I can't even remember how many books I have read. I have seen books and authors of all kinds. I admire the author's continuous updating. Whether the author wants to make money from writing or to have a place among top authors, writing a good book is inseparable. After all, few people are stupid enough to reward and subscribe to a junk book, a book that attracts readers in the early stage. , The readers want it to continue more than the author, right? Here I would like to mention a few of my opinions on writing a book. I would write wherever I want. Writing should be centered on providing readers with emotional value. Just like the novel themes in the early stages of the book, such as survival, making inventions, chatting and farting with water friends, don't they provide readers with emotional value? There are many readers, so why are there not many readers in the later stages? Most of the things written are academic, and it is difficult to resonate with readers. Novels are about stories, not academics. What readers want is the satisfaction of psychological needs. An invention only lasts for several chapters, and there is less interaction with water friends. Is it because the author is not good at writing this aspect or does he not understand the inventions he writes about? Doesn't the reader become more awkward and confused the more he reads? ? How many chapters does it take to write something that can be written in just a few sentences? ? The author should consider how to invent a thing so that readers' psychological needs can be satisfied. In this regard, you can refer to the book The Prodigal Son of the Ming Dynasty, and the setting of the story components must be reasonable. I have seen many books with poor results like this. For example, in order to make the pig's feet look awesome, forcibly creating conflicts, or opening an invincible golden finger. When I saw this, I didn't want to read it. I felt that if the pig's feet were invincible, wouldn't it be equivalent to finishing the book? ? Of course, there are some unreasonable things in this book. For example, the pig's trotters obtained the system. What the pig's trotters do with the system is nothing more than improving life or realizing the value of life. But I didn't see that the pig's trotters don't require money or status. It's like the author suddenly wrote it without thinking too much about the setting of the novel. He might as well give me the golden finger. I can at least make every reader a rich man. Readers can't find what the pig's trotters do to get the golden finger. Has this book become a suspense theme? ? This is another mistake and not rigorous. This type of subject matter is actually very easy to write about. There is nothing that has not been written. The imagination must be big but reasonable. You can read the novels written by Chen Dong. The imagination is very big. Remember to write to meet the psychological needs of readers, such as excitement, vanity, novelty, funny, etc.

The first one hundred and fifty chapters were okay. After two hundred chapters, maybe the author started to get into trouble for the sake of convenience. After the 400th chapter, you can basically jump to read. Usually a technology is divided into several chapters. It is convenient for the author to write and for the readers to read. You can just jump to read. It is not clear in the next few hundred chapters whether the author is writing a novel or an introduction. If the author is writing a novel, the priorities may be reversed. At this time, the irrelevant introduction occupies the main part, and the plot can only advance a little in a few chapters. This means that you can spend a small amount of time reading quickly, and you can see that some of the explanatory text has appeared in the previous article, and it is also a detailed copy and change, just like these two paragraphs. For science fiction novels, too detailed technical introduction is not a good choice. Theory and plot are the main ones. Detailed technical implementation is not needed. You and I both know that it is false, and the readers' enthusiasm will be wiped out in the falsehood. Refer to the milestone Three-Body Problem in Chinese science fiction novels. The technical description is only a theory plus a brief theoretical implementation, and then the plot is advanced. Overly detailed explanations are useless. Readers are reading novels. The most important thing in novels is the plot, and they don't even need to follow logic. For example, a few years ago, the theory that the human brain utilization rate was only a dozen or so, now more and more people think this is false, because technical theories are updated so fast. The first few paragraphs can be abbreviated as: The author is getting more and more confused. I don't know whether the author is writing a paper or a novel. If the author writes an introductory and explanatory article and doesn't care about the loss of readers, writing this is just a hobby, so you don't need to care about my opinion.

To be honest, this novel is not very good. Doesn't the author feel that his novel is not attractive? The more I read, the more boring it becomes. It's like a game. I keep doing tasks and have no passion for PK. How can I retain players? If a novel can make readers skip reading, then there must be something wrong.

Let's talk about your feelings. So far, the book is relatively hard-core. Basically, the author has checked the information, and a few loopholes are no problem. After all, there are too many and insufficient consideration. Then there is the issue that many people discuss that it is impossible for one person to climb the technology. Before electrical appliances, one person could actually do it. After all, there were no big projects, and the knowledge reserve was provided by the system. Later, starting with machine tools, manpower consumption was simplified. Many people think that it is not possible because there is not enough manpower. In fact, Wenzhongpan Technology does not make everything in every era. It only needs to make basic materials to ensure that it can be climbed later. Also, starting from electrical appliances, the system will gradually provide raw materials for redemption, and then basic finished product materials. Greatly simplifies the issue of raw materials - this is necessary, otherwise one person will not be enough. The protagonist's physique is similar to that of Superman (compared to ours), plus some other assistance, so I won't spoil it. So I think there are no big logical problems at the moment. I believe that what I have read so far feels similar to mine. The overall article has minor flaws, but the problems are not major. I think it is still worth reading. Tie up at 4 o'clock in the morning. It's not a shill, no one pays. I just feel that many comments in the book review section are made without reading a few pictures. I like this kind of thing better, so I will post a more optimistic comment. The above is purely a personal opinion and does not accept criticism!

I really can't help but want to complain, can one person think of developing technology with his bare hands? Not to mention in the wilderness where there is nothing, in modern society you cannot make any progress alone. Just maintaining the operation of some existing equipment will consume all your time. Do you have any energy left to pursue technology?

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel a little skeptical. Can one person create nuclear fusion? Can a complete nuclear industry system be built by one person? Does it have to be purely manual?

Say important things three times. I beg all the book lovers to read it and just turn to the latest chapter every day. If you can go to Sanjiang, it will be on the shelves at least ten times! Or you can give me a number, as long as I can do it! I stayed up all night writing it for you!

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I don't think the author has been to a tropical rain forest. There were a lot of bugs in the rain forest at the beginning. Yunnan people said that the tropical rain forest is very humid and there are not so many dry dead branches. Even if it doesn't rain, you will feel hot flashes and you will get thirsty quickly.

Westerners have become fatter, and foreigners have become stronger and can be robbers.

Choose Chinese language programming instead of growing artificial intelligence. Is this how patriotism is now? It's a waste of time. 😅

The book is very good and the author's knowledge is really broad! ! But the author is too greedy. It would be a failure to return to the earth. It is better to travel directly and make a cut with the earth, with only network connection! ! Because as long as you write about the earth, it is easy to get 404, and it is thankless and the readers don't like to read it. The author also feels uncomfortable writing, and he has to be reasonable and has too many worries! Because he can return to Earth, the protagonist seems extremely aggrieved, acting like a thief!

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It is necessary to assume that this planet has everything that the earth has ever had, except for humans, such as dinosaurs. Let's do something exciting! For example, a saber-toothed tiger emerges and chases the protagonist around, and the whole world is shocked by the live broadcast, or a dinosaur appears. There are also rewards for the number of people in the live broadcast room, and rewards for these technologies. Otherwise, if you rely on the protagonist to develop high technologies and atomic bombs alone, you may not be able to do it in ten thousand years.

I feel like the author is a brainwashed Techno Without Borders, and we deserve to be blocked anyway.

This Korean won looks like it has been taken to the underworld.

What does this kind of writing mean? Live streaming? Lao Tie 666? You might as well have a protagonist who travels to an alien planet and carries a technological library with him to survive on an alien planet, and everything about the protagonist is broadcast live to the earth by an unknown entity, but the protagonist does not know that the people on earth are watching him!

The earthquake has been revealed, and it must have been exposed. In the era of big data, if I want to find you, I can still find you if I take the time to find you. Every time I start a new live broadcast, I will travel back and forth. According to the number of people who have not appeared during this time period, it is still a whole year. Then, the young man with pig's feet can calculate his age based on his age. Calculate the year he went to school. Use facial recognition to see how many people look like pig's feet. Then search him. Then, there is no such person. Do you think the country will vigorously search for him in this situation? Who knows what you are going to do when a person appears out of thin air? There are so many talents in the country, big data, and the anchor has signed with Douyu Live Broadcasting Platform. Isn't it necessary to sign a contract? How to solve the ID card? Pig's trotters themselves also said that if something unexpected happens, they should leave some money for their parents. The anchor has been broadcasting continuously for a year. There are more flaws in this. So many conditions, all added up. You said that if the country wants to find it, it can't be found. If you still think it can't be found, won't the anchor continue to broadcast in the future? When nuclear fusion is built in the future, don't you think that countries will ignore it? Then it won't be China looking for it, but the whole world. But do you think we can't find the pig's trotters in reality? If you can't find it, you're kidding me.

It was okay after watching the first mission, but it became boring after the second mission when you could return to Earth at any time. Are you still in the wilderness? Can you go home and eat every day?😰

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The Eunuch is finished, at least the plot is worthy of the title of the novel. What I like to watch the most is the beginning of the plot. It is clear and exciting. In the middle stage, it is good to see the hope of the country's rise. In the later stage, it becomes a bit boring. The science fiction plot and the popular science plot are not very clear. Also, I wonder if the author has been banned and the plot is not suitable for description... In general, it is a good novel, but it is a pity that it is a eunuch. I look forward to the author's next novel being more beautiful and exciting, and not wanting to be a eunuch, so that it can be completed.

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There are still a lot of holes yet to be filled! ! !