Everyday Vampire

Read all the way to Chapter 9. It is worthy of being the one who occupies the two recommended spots for new books this week, and it is also the first recommended book this week. It is also worthy of the title of this daily book. The treatment of daily life at the beginning is really good, and the style and laughter are very stable. If you tell me that this is something that a newcomer can write, I will definitely not believe it. The title of the book focuses on daily life, and the beginning of the book does respond to the expectations of readers who clicked in. However, looking at the subsequent chapter names, it seems that the proportion of daily life becomes smaller as you go to the end. It should be based on daily selling points to attract readers in the early stage, and then gradually move towards a formal promotion of the main story. But currently, the overall relaxed and funny daily style should be maintained. Up to Chapter 9, there are two things that feel a bit off. First, the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, both in terms of appearance and development, is a bit too fast. There is even a feeling that the daily life after Chapter 5 is almost dependent on the emotional drama between the two (in fact, the length is indeed not small.) This is undoubtedly rapidly consuming the life of this emotional line. Looking at the situation in the book review area, the phenomenon of starting a harem has indeed appeared in the follow-up. Readers who have opinions on this may want to consider it. As long as it doesn't overwhelm the protagonist, I personally have a good relationship with the protagonist's female friends, partners, and even lovers, and it's okay if I don't meet these acceptance levels. It's not a bad point, and the author has dedicated a separate chapter to explain it, but I don't know if there is any overestimation in the text. (I'm not just referring to the scenes.) Readers who see the follow-up can also tell them about it, so that they can feel reassured. Besides that, the identity of the protagonist is raised all of a sudden in Chapter 9. I didn't get this operation at once. If it were not necessary for the subsequent plot, it is completely enough for the protagonist's identity to stay as a child of a wealthy businessman family. It feels a bit strange to raise it too high at once. To be honest, the sense of substitution created by the style of this book is not very strong. The distance between the protagonist and the reader feels further... I don't know if there will be any bigger poisonous points in the follow-up. Readers who see the follow-up can tell me. Generally speaking, it is quite good. If you like the daily lighthearted and funny style, you can definitely follow it. The author is probably not a new author, so you don't have to worry about new authors being prone to problems. Just like that, slipped away.

It's still an internal problem, the characters feel very repetitive, although people from each region will have personality characteristics due to the influence of the surrounding area Although it is a stereotype, as is often said, Northeastern people are bold, Shanghai people are shrewd, Sichuan people can eat spicy food, etc. (Don't go out if the area is dark) Sorry, thank you. I mentioned Beijing after reading the novel, and a bunch of comments started to get mixed up. It's really a shame), but it's a novel, and it's better to characterize the characters a little more. To be honest, I now remember the male protagonist Doubi, the female protagonist Gundam, and Bian Bianling. Sister Long, I feel that these three are more outstanding in character, and the other relatively better ones are the main plots in the recent chapters, the serious and good teacher Zhang Yan, the class teacher, and the new teacher (who is really annoying, because I have encountered this kind of teacher) And dirty The frequency of words is a bit high, although it seems real. After all, in reality, most people still have a few swear words. But once a swear word is used in a novel, because it is not like the impression in reality, it is all imagination in the novel. Once a swear word is said, you will subconsciously think that this person's character... Emmm? I can't say what I feel, anyway, I just feel it, I know it. By the way, I almost died laughing, the writing is really fun and interesting, the protagonist is really cheap, and together with my sister at home, I feel like I saw Liu Xing and Xia Xue, who have children in the previous TV series, author, come on, I just hope that the character portrayal will be more distinctive,

Wo Ri, I only realized that Poison Egg was written by you after reading the acceptance speech. The Poisoned Egg book is quite special, it's hard to describe. It's probably similar to the Hamburg Sun Monkey book. It feels like there are poison spots everywhere, but there is an antidote to the poison within a hundred steps, and the cool spots can suppress the poison spots. It is also supplemented by straightforward and refreshing spots that are different from other books on the same subject. Therefore, it has maintained good results and reputation among HP fans despite frequent mistakes. The author of this book is even better at spreading sugar and driving, and I found that the author is really good at creating exciting moments, and he also understands what the current readers want to see, and rarely makes mistakes in a plot that should be enjoyable. Moreover, the daily plot is interspersed with candy, school, and driving, so it will not feel boring. It can only be said that the author has made great progress. In the book "Poisonous Egg", the plot control is obviously very immature. He twists it left and right and can't walk in a straight line. In that book, the author who was still a immature newcomer has already shown a level of basic skills and plot control in this book, which is quite rare. The performance of the first hundred chapters of this book should be between good grass and fairy grass. The writing style is smooth, the characterization of some scenes is very vivid and appealing, the plot and writing have their own characteristics, and there are few poisonous points, and the characterization is above average. It is suitable for readers who have already passed the middle school disease but have not completely passed it but have passed it.

If there is no update, I will use mysterious means to go to your house and give you a buff.

I've already gone to Sanjiang, so I'll add an update!

From December 1st to now, a total of 65 chapters have been updated, a total of 42 days, with an average of 1.54 Chapters a day. If you write two chapters a day, you owe 19 chapters. Well, come on.

The book is a good book and enjoyable to read, but the cover is a bit unsightly. When I first saw the cover, I felt like I had read a novel in 12 years, and I almost didn't click in.

Next time if something happens, just ask for leave, don't mention the chapter name! I'm so afraid that you're going to talk about entering the palace! Poor guy, let me go to the helmsman to comfort you first! Although I don't need any experience, I would like to add more skills 😏

As shown in the picture, I have a total of 1238 comments. Is there anyone who has more comments than me? (=^.^=)

There was a big boss before Qidian named Fenghuo Chenglin. Only one copy is finished, and the rest are full of ideas but cannot be broken down. Just disappear now. Brother, let me ask you to make an outline.

Brother, brother, I beg you, be sure to stay steady. I saw it all the way from the poisoned eggs. No matter what, I'm really in trouble.

Su Ying

I just don't understand, why do all the people like single female protagonists now? Although I don't like mindless stallion stories, I have always liked harem stories with good emotional scenes. I can accept this kind of book even if it has weaknesses in other aspects. Why don't you like it? Is it because there is no substitute or because it is a female reader?

It's a pity, the front part is really good. I remember I started reading when the heroine transformed into a fallen angel. After reading it, I lost interest. . .

You are curious about why there are no vampires in China, until you read this article in ancient Chinese classics: There is a ghost in Xiling. It looks like a human, with red eyes and fangs. It lies in bed during the day and emerges at night. It likes to eat human blood... Eating can prolong life...

Very vivid

Pinch his head...

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I'm speechless

I usually watch pirated versions, and only come back to resubscribe if I find something interesting. Now that I have replenished the full subscription, I can't add more content?

Recently I like to read this kind of daily books with supernatural powers. I think this one is quite good.

The daily routine and dog food in the early and mid-term are well written! In the later stage, I lost touch with my daily life and my writing became a bit broken.

Why has the new book been taken off the shelves? I c

I want to know what the author's big number is called 😍

Are there any new books? That copy was cut, so why is it still off the shelves?

The writing is very good, the content is humorous, and the writing style is lighthearted and pleasant. Personally, I think the first half, especially the part before the school speech, is the best. It's a pity that it deviated from the daily routine, and it's even more pity that it ended unfinished 😭 But I still support the author. This aspect (referring to the daily series) is really well written, keep up the good work. Looking forward to the author's future works😁

I felt bad when I saw the author said that the cat was gone, so I thought about ordering the whole book? For Mimi! Then not long after, he raised another one... With mixed feelings

I would like to ask if this pigeon spirit only has two groups? I see it's full of people, I want to join the group 😂

Author, why didn't you finish the book?

Is this the only complete book?