Omniscient and Omnipotent Starting from Pirates

The content concept so far is very good

I am Shen Nong. I tasted hundreds of herbs here. I first heard that this herb was very wonderful. When I ate it, it was as soft as mud and smelled inaudibly. My eyes gradually became blind, and my seven orifices were bleeding. The smell of blood was so strong that I suddenly realized that this herb was poisonous. I wrote a book to tell everyone about it, and I hope to take this as a warning.

A typical studio novel. The protagonist's intelligence is below the level of slime. I can only say that the author has done a good job. How can devil fruits be placed together with slaves, famous swords and guns? Also, the physical level in One Piece is such that a burly man guarding slaves actually died with one shot. What's even more outrageous is that even if you have an inner world and an ordinary body, you can still survive after being hungry for thirteen days. Being able to walk and talk normally, especially being able to leave, but actually toughing the enemy. The most ingenious thing is that after saying a few words to the woman, friendship started, and then he exposed his inner world and the fact that he escaped from the auction house. The most important thing is that even the empress, as long as he is a slave, must be marked as a slave before entering the auction house, while the male protagonist can be said to be smooth sailing except for being starved.

I feel like the writing is messy and too plain, just like a loser. To put it bluntly, when you are in your twenties or thirties and go to another world, looking at an eleven or twelve-year-old girl, you feel that you can make a lifelong agreement with someone. You are awesome. You plan to write about omniscience and omnipotence, and you must be sure that the heavens are the highest. What is the use of these procrastinating things you write? Look at the pig's feet, this little guy is a monkey, just act like a monkey. No main line at all

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It's already a very good new book

This book is so embarrassing. It doesn't feel like a novel. It was written purely out of the author's imagination. A bit like a reader, without any writing skills. At the beginning, it is clearly set that the door's ability is one hundred meters, but in the next second it is teleported back across the sea. Is it okay to have a single start to foreshadow the world view? The golden finger also needs to be limited, it is too sharp.

I can't bear to see the general equal to the emperor's deputy. The navy's highest combat power is not just talk 🙂

It was normal in the past, but when I founded the Hunter Guild, I just let myself go. My inner thoughts were much more extreme, and in the end I simply added a D to my name to euphemistically carry the luck of the D family. Good guy, you are still the only one in the world, and you still have to rely on the luck of the D family? The creativity of this book is good, and the author's writing style is superb.

You can modify the memory, and you have your subordinates learn and practice slowly, which makes me speechless. Can you just modify them directly in the memory?

The deputy of the emperor is equal to the general? Marshal equals the Four Emperors? Isn't this a title? Why is it a strength level? How can you say that Garp is just a sender? Roger was also a demigod, and he was beaten like a son by a mere lieutenant general. 😁

When you go to Pirate World, use the system of Pirate World. If you use any other system, it won't sound good at all.

The protagonist with a diaosi mentality looks disgusting. This alone is worthy of omniscience and omnipotence.

The introduction says "pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger", and the comments section also says "The Holy Mother". These two things are from hundreds of years ago. Now one of them is a bad book. You have taken them all. You are really awesome.

If you plan to write a time-travel novel that travels through various worlds, don't abandon your name at the beginning, and return Ellen, your mother,

I just saw the division of strength and lost all desire. The general, vice-emperor and shadow are on the same level, the marshal, the four emperors, and the super shadow are on the same level. It's funny.

It can only be said that the author's IQ determines the protagonist's IQ. The author's low IQ is nothing to complain about.

The book was okay, except for the chapter 5 about making friends with childhood sweethearts. I felt that it was not a poisonous one. After I calmed down and looked at it with a critical eye, I thought it was just a lick of a dog. In fact, the author can make Jill the protagonist's longing for the beauty of first love, use the excuse of escaping from death to slow down, extend the time line and slowly cultivate the relationship, it will be much more natural, and it will only be more than a thousand words of sweet text.

The first ten chapters before the start are all about explaining that the protagonist is a virgin. Are you ready for everyone to get used to it? There is no market for Hail Marys anymore

Devil fruits, martial arts, gene locks, runes, domineering, there are so many things messed up in more than ten chapters

Why should the omniscient and omnipotent act like Yhwach, you...

Will Crocodile be domineering? Well, that's good. This kind of mindless writing really only needs hands. And if you don't respect the original work, why would you write a fanfic? The first half of the Grand Line was stretched so much. Can Luffy pass Novice Village when he goes to sea? I really admire you!

This book is very good, the imagination and creativity are very good, the character design of the protagonist is also perfect, and the protagonist's abilities are also great. In other words, the protagonist uses his brain to open a new book quickly. The most important thing for entrepreneurs with this ability is imagination

It's a hodgepodge of chaos, I've never seen a woman, I'm embarrassed, my childhood sweetheart has no business with you, and you're not afraid of killing me in your sleep, so many people have changed at once,

As soon as Golden Finger Sharing came out, he was persuaded to quit, and even Shen Nong couldn't stop him. The strongest and best is always the only one - Lu Xun

Most authors are on vacation, so why don't they publish a new book?

What a great idea! I read novels just to see if their imagination is big or not, 👍🏻

I said earlier that those slaves should not be allowed to know the inner world! Then what? As soon as I saw the woman, I immediately forgot about it. Not only did I tell her about the inner world, but I also forgot about what I said before about not letting the slave know about the inner world. I feel like the male protagonist was killed by his original body and then learned the memory. When I first met that woman, I knew how to pamper and pamper her day by day.

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The most annoying thing is being a dog for the characters in the plot.