The Mysterious Half-Creator

Congratulations on signing the contract ^_^♪, investment arrangement

The content is very good. I suggest you optimize the language so that it doesn't feel like a Western fantasy, but more Eastern elements.

Some people say that this chapter may be gone because the paragraphs or sentences in the comments were modified by me. I only noticed this phenomenon today 😭

If you have nothing to do, you can talk and make suggestions.

I feel like the time in the comment area is a bit messy. I didn't see the person who posted the comment at midnight until the afternoon, and I didn't see his reply until the next day. 😭

There is a feeling of going high and going low, but also a feeling that the weak is seeking death. The sense of chaos is uncomfortable. It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings, but the feeling of guessing the ending is uncomfortable.

It's so unfriendly to people who haven't seen my girlfriends before.

Already collected, hope to receive from each other, new book "The Strongest Emperor Respects the City" Thank you

Klein

The protagonist looks pretty much the same.