Since I Am Dashachun

The previous plot seemed okay, but once I returned to the real world, there was a burst of incomprehensible manipulation. Zhu Tiao was cheated by a classmate who started a business together. They took his money and ran away. He couldn't even pay the rent with the money he had. Fortunately for him, the first thing he did was to send a WeChat message to express his love to his female classmate. How many heartless people have to do this? In my opinion, such people deserve to be cheated, or they are cheated too lightly.

For the time being, I don't feel that the author is of any use. It makes no difference whether he is present or not. There are so many original words that I might as well just copy the script.

The writing style is okay, but the task is not free, like a nanny, without spiritsoul

It was okay when I first watched it, but the richest man in Xihong City completely copied the plot. Wouldn't it be nice if I went to watch the movie again? Depends on you

I really can't figure it out. Is the protagonist legally illiterate? I didn't call the police the first time I was deceived, and now I come to a party to eat and pretend to be slapped in the face, and I vomited

It's quite rubbish, it doesn't make you happy, it doesn't do anything about the classmates who tricked you into bankruptcy, and it was stepped on by the other party. You pretend to be innocent while not rejecting it, and even said that your girlfriend is Bai Yueguang. The author may not have even been in a relationship.

What disgusting thing is written? Find a factory to work in and get it done.

Alas, so many people are complaining A few points: the protagonist has no own style in the film and television world. Since it is your novel, don't let the film and television protagonist be the protagonist. The same is true in the real world. Feelings are thrown away, and slaps in the face are harsh. You, the author, can feel it yourself.

Let's start a business together. The protagonist has a college classmate. His family is very poor and he has a lot of unnecessary self-esteem (the kind of guy who wants to stay away from me if he is poor). The protagonist makes various accommodations, helps him find part-time tutors, helps him deal with relationships with his classmates, and then starts a business together and uses all his wealth. The college classmate acts like you owe me, and I don't want to start a business with you, so I took all the money and ran away. This protagonist has a tendency to forgive💚 when talking about relationships. It's so addictive.

The writing collapsed🙂🙂

Not much to say, give up

The urban drama is really poisonous. The protagonist is a master of Wing Chun and kills seven in and seven out in the dungeon. But in the urban drama, in order to pick up girls, he was beaten to death by a drunkard. Celebrity scenes: Classmates dressed in work clothes, beautiful school beauties love beggars. Forcibly changing the plot for Niu, Kung Fu Master was beaten violently. This morning the protagonist had a nose bleed, and in the evening beauty 13 had a bleed.

I really admire people who can watch it. Calling it a poisonous weed is an insult to poisonous weeds.

The movie world written before was pretty good. Once we get to reality, the writing is very boring. It's really boring to forcefully find a female protagonist.

Pig's feet are awesome. Your business partner embezzled public funds and you yourself are bankrupt. Why don't you call the police? And you don't tell your friends about this. Are you afraid of something? If someone misappropriates your money, why don't you expose them? And cover him?

No more, I persisted until chapter 48, I just couldn't stand it anymore! Sorry guys, I was killed.

Basically, now I write the plot of the movie as if it were a novel, and just keep copying the dialogues from the plot. Also, this system quickly makes the protagonist a robot.

Wouldn't it be more profitable to find a construction site than to write a book?

The plot of the copy is good because the author copied everything from the movie he saw. At most, he added a name and nothing else changed.

Chapter 40 is too toxic, isn't it? When you meet a business partner who cheats you, it's like nothing happened? Did you learn Wing Chun in vain? Is it popular to take revenge overnight? Every other month? The next year? You prevent others from pursuing your female classmate, but you spend your time messing with the stewardess. It's shameless. In the end, the ending of the plot world is too hasty. Why are you anxious? There are only a few sentences that should be explained and you are too lazy to do so? All in all, this book has a lot of room for improvement.

The author's writing style needs to be improved, especially the relationship between the characters. The logic is confusing. He also likes to clean others up. Just clean it up. Can you please stop being inconsistent? With Chu Bing, in the early stage, you set the stage for making money and running away. In the middle, you explained that it seemed to be to treat my mother's illness. In the end, it reversed into a reward for the anchor. You hate the anchor lady so much. I'm speechless. I suggest newcomers just watch the first two worlds and give up later.

I abandoned it when I read Chapter 65. It's a mess. Can you please sort out your thoughts before writing? Also, don't explain again what I explained before. It's like you've lost your memory.

Nothing has changed, just one more bystander

They say the first three chapters are golden, but your first three chapters are terrible.

It's so disgusting. I can't stand it. My head hurts.

After reading Chapter 85, I really couldn't stand it anymore. It has become an urban supernatural novel from more than ten years ago, and the writing is quite retarded.

I can watch the real-life plots that other people have mentioned, but I really can't stand the changes in reality. Farewell! ! !

It's like watching a simplified version of the game's clearance guide! ...

I thought it was quite novel, but the system removed it when I saw it.

Actually, it wasn't that good after the second time travel. It was a bit interesting at first, but then it became boring. Anyway, it wasn't to my taste.