Junior Sister, I Really Do It for Money

There are a lot of girls, but the male protagonist is still a bachelor, right?

The writing is too complicated, and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do later on. You are a rebel. It is wrong to say that you are doing it for the common people in the world. After all, the royal family is not a dissolute and immoral person. The common people in the world are suffering and rebelling everywhere. If you really do the right thing for the sake of the people, maintain social stability, and don't let war break out. Is it true to betray the city lord? Being a spy and cheating money is not the right way. If you say this is a story about hegemony, there is actually no problem. The main thing is that if you say this is a savior, that is too cheap 🤤.

I feel like the protagonist loses that sense of freedom and ease after getting married. He needs someone to accompany him in everything he does. Although it is because his Qihai meridians and other things are disabled and he needs someone to protect him, but the length of the article is too long. I hope the protagonist can recover soon.

(This book) is very well written. I prefer reading books that have an overall view. Complete the division of forces and the structure of the power system in the book in advance. (This is very good) (Other books) I don't like the feeling of defeating monsters and upgrading. It's like people next to you will follow you regardless of the level of the protagonist. It's like the protagonist defeats a level 10 boss and a level 20 boss appears After finally defeating a level 20 boss, he is beaten by a level 30 boss. In the early stage, it was said that level 50 was the strongest, but later it was said that level 50 was the strongest, which was bad. (Authors of this kind of books write whatever comes to mind) There is another good thing about (this book) The villains and heroes are written with distinct personalities. Each character has different living habits and different personalities. This is the best. (Other books) I don't like that the villains are all bad people. Writing the villains feels like they are portrayed in one panel. Everything is insidious and cunning Except for the protagonist, I feel that the whole world is a fool, and those who have a bad relationship with the protagonist are all bad people.

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If you don't have enough writing power, you don't need to write so many supporting characters. Just like Lafayette, you can't describe the characters well and write a good story. Now you have to write a Xiuxin. How can you write a feeling with your little writing power? It's also awkward to draw a batch of whole character portraits with awkward dialogues. I don't know if the author has read The Devil's Coming. The character descriptions and settings are very good.

I prefer to read about daily life. I don't need to write too hastily. I can write more stories and just travel around the world and write more plots. The book describes the world in which the protagonist seems to have never been to many places. (Automatic subscription turned on)

Now it seems that it is better to have a single female protagonist 🤓

There are so many powers and things are too complicated. When I read it in a few days, I forgot all about the relationships between the characters and couldn't continue, so I gave up the subscription.

The male protagonist and Ning Ning are making good progress, but Su Rou feels that her cultivation level is low. When will Liu Yan'er become an immortal? She can't just be a vase!

Code quickly! Not enough! ! !

There was a bit too much melee at the end. To be honest, I really didn't like watching those scenes. But I still fully subscribed and supported it.

Not bad, why is the exit index so low?

Not bad, it's easy to write, it's ok! But one or two confidants are enough, don't open up a wide harem.

The first dozen or so chapters weren't engaging enough, so I just skipped and read the rest before I realized they were really good.

It's okay, but I spend too many points on women, ugh

The update speed is probably too slow. I'll have to watch it after a month! Otherwise it will be a little uncomfortable 🙂

It's nice to read, but it's still too little. The author may have too few outlines. I hope the next book can be better.

I feel that the writing is very messy, with hammers here and there, and there is very little interaction between the characters. The protagonist is just doing daily work, and somehow conquers the army (it seems to say that it helps cure diseases and save people, but it is just a sentence, no specific people, no reflection). In terms of the plot, it is probably because of the problem of writing power that I can't empathize with it. And just looking at the front, it doesn't even seem to have anything to do with the title of the book. To sum it up, it just feels like a running list of who did what and when. I have no sense of the character's personality. I can't even recall most of the plot after watching it. I don't know what the hero wants to do and why he does it (including starting a harem. I don't see any deep feelings for other people and how he came about it).

After opening about 200,000 words, there is a female protagonist, she is destined to be cool

Do you have daily update 1w? If not, I will keep it for another year.