The Immortal Path of Mortal Immortals

I have been involved in online novels for many years. From the beginning of the villain to the later chapters of Zhe Tian, ​​Xian Ni, and Seeking Demon, I couldn't stop for a period of time. It wasn't until 2015 that I came across Wang Yuda's The Legend of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality. Many plots in the book are still fresh in my memory. So I have been planning to write a mortal cultivator novel since last year, and now I finally started writing it after work. This time I wrote a book at Qidian, hoping to write a novel about mortal cultivators in my mind while training my writing skills. Therefore, if anyone is willing to read my novel, I hope to give more opinions. I will combine the opinions of book friends to create a more realistic world of immortality that is more in line with the "mortal struggle process".

I really can't help but want to complain. If you think the book can be read, just read it, and if you can't read it, delete it. It's no use saying a few things in one day. Isn't an online novel just as long as the plot is readable, there are not many poisonous points, there are some refreshing points, and the segmentation is okay? I told you one by one that the dialogue should be like a literary work and the punctuation should be like a literary work. If you like to compare online novels with published literary works so much, just go read the literary works and don't disgust me. Finally, I would like to welcome communication to discuss the rationality of the plot, segmentation, and typos. Those who find fault after reading less than a chapter should go away. I am a newcomer, but I am not your punching bag.

I don't know how to be a eunuch. I'm really busy with work these days. I'll update a chapter tomorrow to prevent book friends from failing in their investment. After September 1st, I will try to do two chapters a day and make up for what I owe in the past. Dear book friends, please forgive me.

Let's talk about the updates of this book. There may only be about 2 updates of this book from Monday to Friday. The minimum limit is more than 5,000 words per day on weekends. If you are in good condition, you should be able to write 7,000 words. The important point is that this book will not be eunuch in 1-2 years, so friends who click in don't worry.

This is my first time writing a book, and I currently promise to update one chapter a day. The number of words in a chapter depends on the plot. I hope all book friends who have clicked in will give me more opinions, so that we can build a wonderful world of mortal cultivation together.

I would like to make a small suggestion. Paragraphs should not be lengthy and dialogues should be enclosed in double quotation marks. Otherwise, the reading experience of the readers will be affected.

I am not satisfied with the two chapters I wrote recently. I plan to delete and rewrite them. I will take a day off to think about the follow-up plot and highlight the plot points I want to express in this book. I hope all book friends will understand.

Woohoo😭 Newcomer, new book, borrowing the building to ask for attention, thank you all for coming to support me

Today, this book actually ranked 56th on the newcomer list with a weak score of 11 votes. I would like to thank several fellow Taoists in the comment area for their collection and voting support, and I would like to sincerely say thank you. I will try to do two updates tomorrow and the day after tomorrow. Thank you all for your support!

Let's talk about the highlights of this book. This book mainly tells the story of a boy with ordinary qualifications by the river. In order to survive, he entered the city as a servant. By chance, he entered the world of cultivation. From a low-level Qi practitioner, he gradually grew into the number one true immortal in Xiaonanzhou. You can read this book as a prequel to the story of Mortal Cultivation. Although this book draws on the Mortal Style system, it is a completely independent story. The timeline of this book is probably tens of millions of years earlier than the legend of mortals cultivating immortality. At this time, the interface of Xiao Nanzhou has not been lost, there are still only four major immortal realms in the true immortal world, and the heaven has not yet been established. At this time, the laws of the true immortal world have collapsed, and the interface war is about to break out. The three supreme laws are still in their infancy, let alone the three thousand avenues!

There's really no need to break off your arm, it's so painful to watch.

Typos, symbols... Affect reading

The author should update more

The first few chapters of this book are mainly foreshadowing, and they will not be airy from the very beginning. Book friends who like vulgar development and cultivation of immortals can read it, and you will definitely not be disappointed. Also, the comment section of this book will not be deleted regardless of whether it is good or bad. This is my personal attitude. Book friends who click in can read about ten chapters before deciding whether to stay or not. Anyway, there is no money now! (By the way, except advertising)

Author, I have a question, do you want to sign a contract? Or will you continue to write for the sake of love?

Is the cultivation of the five spiritual roots in the mortal world so fast?

Is this book rigorous? I haven't started watching it yet, please give it a try to clear up my confusion.

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I haven't opened it yet in other posts. I hope it's what the author said.

The recent updates are unstable, what's going on?

When is the best time to break your hand(´•ω•̥`)

I came from Asking for the Immortal Way 😏, and after seeing the author talking about it, I started to recommend the book hahaha

Has Taoist friend entered the palace? I originally wanted to keep it and watch it. At first glance, there are still so many

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I dare to recommend it everywhere with just over 100,000 words. I don't know if it's good or not. Are you sorry for updating the word count?

There were too many foreshadowings in the early stage. Now the protagonist has accomplished nothing and his cultivation is not on the right track. There are too many foreshadowings.

Does this have anything to do with Han Li's book?

In fact, I came here after seeing the author's self-recommended book reviews of other books. The content in the self-recommended book reviews is really in line with my reading orientation. I hope the author can really write the storyline he described.

It's okay to use a lot of talismans in the early stage, but try not to do it in the later stage. What's the point of throwing away a handful of talismans in a fight? In the future, everyone's realm will be high. In the later period, the direction of talismans is towards saving lives. They are of no use at ordinary times. They are used to save lives at critical moments.

Damn it, I finally thought of a good name today, but it was rejected by the official 😅😅