Become a Game Character and Travel Across the Heavens

We came to the wrong place, this title belongs to Shu Ke, the kind of shameful pendant 🙂 In addition, don't change the protagonist to a female protagonist in the next world. The miko lady looks great already. Since the miko lady written by the author is too beautiful, having more female protagonists in the future will not make the male protagonist look bad (like Chen Hansheng), but it will make the whole book collapse.

The main purpose of the role-playing stream is to write about the chemical reactions of different characters, abilities, and personalities in other dramas. It has nothing to do with writing according to the original work... I think there have been a lot of magic changes recently. The male protagonist obtained the skills of Kensan from the ruins, and also discovered the bones of the sword demon. The setting of Horai Island is also different from Inuyasha's original work

After reading the introduction, how do you calculate your power system? Can the author control the emotional line?

I think what you wrote is pretty much the same, but the local monsters you wrote are too weak. Regardless of monsters or mythical beasts, they are all inherited in the local area, while those in Japan are basically wild. Japanese big monsters can only be regarded as ordinary monsters in China, and they are small monsters without inheritance, and their powers are mixed.

I was thinking that Beiluo was Jinyun in his previous life, but the Jinyun family has a very high status. One said it was the nickname of the Yellow Emperor, another said he was a descendant of Emperor Yan, and another said it was an official name. Even Taotie was the son of the Jinyun family. But no matter what, according to the first chapter of this opening, it is obviously involved in the prehistoric period, so at least a Da Luo cannot escape.

Is there nothing else to start from but love?

Let's review it as a rule. It's not suitable for old readers. It uses a mixture of written and spoken language. If you have been reading online articles for two or three years, you can try it. It's not very good, at least it won't make people angry enough to start scolding.

Although the subject matter is old, the writing is not bad. At least the part about falling in love with Platycodon is very comfortable to watch and exciting. Keep it up. I hope it can be used by others in the future. Also, the sugar candies will not last long. I need to do more magic corrections and other things. Come on, I have made a lot of money. (Why does it smell like the hedgehog next door? There is also a man dressed as a monster next door and falling in love with Platycodon. The writing style is somewhat similar)

The reason for the magic change in the timeline of events is that it is considered appropriate to introduce the plot. If you cannot accept the magic change, it is best to go out and turn right. After all, the author's personal habit is to write a book based on the original work, which is impossible.

Very well written, author. Although the writing and plot design are still a bit immature, I like the protagonist's freedom and sense of justice. Justice.

Those who have a strong sense of looking for trouble, combine it with other people's comments, and then look for trouble to set the pace in a weird way, will not stay

What did the grandson of the Slippery Ghost say? Thousands of years ago, there was an onmyoji named Seimei. He was the descendant of the Hagoromo Fox and humans. He witnessed too many tragedies in which humans were persecuted by monsters and their families were destroyed. Seimei had a dream, which was to drive the monsters out of human territory and create a world where no one would be harmed by monsters. With the help of the Hagoromo Fox, Seimei completed this dream and brought the monsters to justice. The monsters were driven out of the human territory, but Seimei's actions violated the interests of the monsters and the onmyoji family (the monsters were driven out of the human territory, so what would the onmyoji do?), So the Hanakain family and the monsters joined forces to kill Seimei. When Seimei died, the boundary between humans and monsters was broken, the monsters began to return to the human world to persecute humans, and the human onmyojis began to hunt monsters. In short, what should be done is what should be done

I have tried my best to develop the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists as quickly as possible without making it feel abrupt or rough. And every time, within a few chapters of daily life, there will be a new conflict, transition, etc., Or the explanation will hint at some settings in the later chapters, such as Xie Yunliu and the monk who wants to do something to give them the Nanke Mirror. The author's writing style is insufficient. If he wants to create an atmosphere, he must write some adjectives, so that he will not seem to do so. And the introduction also mentions "The Love of Spirits and Demons". The chemistry between the witch lady and Wang Bixie is one of the highlights of the first world... (So if you really feel that there are too many emotional dramas, then I can only ask you to go out and turn left. This article may not be suitable for you)

I feel that sometimes the words in the hash marks are too disruptive to the atmosphere. Reading that was originally smooth suddenly seems to be stuck.

Why are you looking for someone stronger? I have to find the god of Japanese comics. Weak ones are okay.

Now it has been ignored. Although the Liaozhai side is Dawei, it has nothing to do with the Three Kingdoms side. Kagome's problem will be patched later, because it involves the underworld, so no spoilers

The male protagonist in black clothes

Looking back

When I see one of the rules being escaped, my head hurts and I want to be speechless.

In fact, the system plays the role of manifestation and complaint, which is equivalent to the manifestation of the protagonist's talents and magical powers. It does not have the function of traditional system flow. We don't know where the label of system flow came from... There is no talk, it should be the "King of Talkers" Because I am preparing The National Examination is in November, so I will update it every day for the time being~ Because the title of my book was originally called this, but later I found that Jiehu and other things are usually Siheyuan, so I changed it... The introduction was also written when the book was released. I didn't think much about it. It has been revised now and is being reviewed.

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When I write articles, I usually use ## in the form of narration or rants that I think are lively. It's one thing to be honest or not, but I guess you won't be able to understand or feel it when listening to a book.