Hogwarts: The Weasleys Are Our Kings

I think the protagonist clearly knows that there is a huge chance of death in the future but does not improve his strength At the beginning, he accompanies George to cause trouble. No sense of crisis at all

Come on!!! Having fun exploring and making money is important! Especially the twins focus on pranks!!! What kind of heroine is a brat to the twins and the time-traveling Fred? Think about it as an adult.

Why not go to Filch's watch room and get the Marauder's Map. And I feel like the protagonist doesn't have much sense of crisis and just keeps playing without trying to improve his strength. Even if there are many books in the library, you can slowly find what you need. If you are bored, you can study by yourself. What's the point of hanging around school at night.

You know the ending clearly, but you don't feel the crisis. It's either because you're arrogant or you're acting up.

After he left, George Weasley could no longer use the Patronus Charm - because all his happiness was related to him

Don't forget that they are both alchemy geniuses and potion geniuses

George's role is too small... Is it possible that the author plans to let Fred go on adventures with the heroine alone in the later stage without George? Or is it an old bloody love triangle routine? I came here because of the title of the novel, and I would rather see the adventure and business journey of the two twins than the emotional line... If you want to write a love story under HPparo, you can completely create the male and female protagonists.

Come on! The heroine could be a Slytherin who has been in love with each other since the first grade, which would be very interesting.

Not many people write about the Weasley brothers. It's a new subject.

The issue of George's small role has been criticized by everyone, so it is still necessary to explain it to my friends. First, from the author's writing point of view, one must choose the most important narrative angle. If the perspective is frequently switched, it will be very uncomfortable, the friends will also look uncomfortable, and the sense of immersion of the protagonist will be lost. Secondly, Fred cannot leave George behind. Without either of them, it would not be called a Gemini. The third solution I have is to write more of George's scenes from Fred's perspective. This is the solution I came up with, and it is actually what I have been doing. I will continue to try to improve George's scenes in the future. A book cannot be perfect, and neither can a person. I hope everyone will bear with me. Finally, I would like to thank everyone for your support~