Starting from the White Snake, the Heavens Change Their Destiny

The harem novel takes people through time travel. This is the biggest failure of all new books. It cannot be popular.

The white snake described by the original author is a real monster, and Fahai is a good person. It was changed into a TV series, so I added love and then made Fa Hai a villain.

Has the author understood the origin of "White Snake"? How could Bai Suzhen, a snake demon who was about to become an immortal, not be able to tell at a glance that Xu Xian was the reincarnation of her savior? How can the protagonist win Bai Suzhen's favor before Xu Xian? If Xu Xian had not saved Bai Suzhen, she would not have been able to survive the disaster, and there would be no story of "White Snake". The cause is unclear, and she has no interest in the following content. I spent this dime to buy points just to ask the author what he thought.

The concept of the book is okay, but when I saw this maid, I didn't want to read it. Although it is a modern way of thinking, you travel to a world similar to ancient times and do as the Romans do. This maid was made to have no rules at all and almost did something bad. Why should I write it? Isn't it bad to be alone at the beginning? Really, give up.

Deadly rushing into the street, bronze is still bronze even if it turns over, the poison is so poisonous that it reduces intelligence and brainlessness.

This is trying to be a reckless hero.

There are too many common sense mistakes made by the authors of the Three Kingdoms World. If you are not good at it, don't write it. Wouldn't it be nice to change to a world that you are good at? Even if you want to write, you need to do more homework and check the information. Although you can buy an official in the late Han Dynasty, there is a threshold. People without status and background cannot buy an official even if they have money. Even if they can buy it, it is impossible to buy a state shepherd in one step. If you can buy a county magistrate, you have great skills. Also, when will the former general, a second-grade general, be able to become your turn as a state pastor? Do you want to rebel in advance? And now Zhuge Liang is only eleven or twelve years old, a little brat. You are here too early!

It feels like the author simply wrote in a perfunctory manner. One is the holy body, and the other is the fairy body. One moment, 37, one moment, 27, one moment, the golden elixir realm, the other, the elixir formation... I am simply speechless. I don't understand why I need to write a novel at all! Writing like this won't achieve much at all.

To be honest, if you don't want to accept women, don't write that kind of story. After a long time, those women like the male protagonist but don't want to accept it. It's better not to have any intersection in the first place. It was so painful to watch.

I gave up and got stuck when I got to Taoist Master Four Eyes. I don't know what the author thought. The protagonist in the alchemy stage actually worshiped Taoist Four Eyes who was in the Qi training stage as his teacher. It's too poisonous. The protagonist has a complete collection of dragon and tiger talismans. There is no need to study like Four Eyes. The master is not as powerful as his apprentice. There is no need to become a disciple in order to complete the task. There are other ways. It's poisonous. I won't read it anymore.

I can understand the appearance of the off-ground flame flag in The Legend of White Snake, but what does it mean if you put it in the hands of the centipede spirit? It would be better if you put this kind of treasure in a corner and be discovered by the protagonist than in the hands of the centipede spirit!

While killing people with morality, while using Xu Xian as a sacrifice to obtain system rewards, the moral level of the current author is really getting lower and lower. In the past, the purpose of changing one's fate was to fulfill others and prevent a sad ending. Your change of destiny is to plunder others' opportunities. How can a robber be virtuous?

By the way, does the apprenticeship in the new chapters have any significance? His aptitude is not good, his brain is not good, it would be fine if he could be pitied and given a cooking skill or something like that. Now he has become a nanny. What kind of protagonist aura does this apprentice have that even the protagonist has been deceived and reduced to intelligence? Or is it a foreshadowing, the kind that will be revealed in dozens of photos? But this is not a suspenseful crime novel, does it need to be done like this?

The author is still a newcomer. First of all, the maid is a poisonous character. In ancient times, you wrote the maid as a modern arrogant rich girl. This character design is not good. The second is that she dresses too fast.

This book must have been dug out from somewhere. Then he was fed with fucking feces. The protagonist is still in the middle stage of elixir formation (or maybe the golden elixir stage, as it appears in the book) and worships Si Mu as his teacher, which is awesome. This is equivalent to a professor at Tsinghua University worshiping a three-year-old child as his teacher. For that bullshit mission, the beggars in this movie are worse off than four eyes. Why don't you just become your disciples to those beggars?

After reading Chapter 6, I would like to mention a few things that don't feel right. The first one is the maid. The protagonist is raised as a younger sister in modern society, so don't let her be a maid. Can't you change her identity? One of the maids, no matter how big or small, looked very uncomfortable. The second thing is that the protagonist is already a warrior with some fighting ability at the beginning. How could his hand be cut by thorns? In theory, a knife cannot cut it. (This is a logical question) The third life span is only one year. This is a bit inconsistent like the second one, but it can also be explained by the system, but it feels a bit weird.

Without modern medical equipment, you will be blind. How can you be a miracle doctor?

Stallion. Holy shit. One moment he writes about being ambiguous with his maid, and the next moment he writes about being flirty with a female ghost. I don't even want to say anything anymore. He is 12 talents. Even in ancient times, people got married early. 12 Knows a hammer. Damn it

The power system collapsed a bit. The author failed to grasp the power comparison of different cultivation systems in different worlds. Except for the methods of dealing with zombie ghosts, the power levels in Mr. Zombie are not even comparable to those of low-level martial arts. However, the power level of A Chinese Ghost Story World is not weaker than that of high-level martial arts. Even A Chinese Ghost Story has cleared the level. Is it necessary to write about the world of Mr. Zombie? It's very embarrassing. It is a common problem for Zhutianliu to fail to grasp the power levels of various worlds, but the author must have written down the power levels too quickly. Especially when Mr. Zombie saw Apprentice, I vomited.

Either there was trouble at the beginning. The plot of A Chinese Ghost Story was passable, but the plot of Mr. Zombie began to collapse. I originally thought it would be better when I came back, but now I feel a bit poisonous. The early writing cannot attract those who read harem stories, and the later writing cannot attract those who read single female protagonist stories. The avalanche has already begun when the system requires the protagonist to become a disciple of Four Eyes. The previous rewards included the general outline of the Taoism of Longhu Mountain, and he still had to become a disciple of Four Eyes, and relatively speaking,. . . Forget it, there is so much to complain about after that episode. Anyway, I have tried the water. Before Mr. Zombie, the plot was good, but after starting Mr. Zombie, the plot became toxic. I took my leave and couldn't stand it anymore.