The Police of Hong Kong Comprehensive World

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Off out of school Dragon 2 saw the plot, I feel a little incomprehensible. The protagonist and the senior police officers clearly knew that the terrorists were going to attack the school and knew that they had heavy firepower. The protagonist was even very relieved to let Teacher He go to work normally. The senior police officers also made no arrangements for their children and allowed them to go to school as usual. This was despite the fact that dozens of people from the Political Department had died before. Don't say that in order to lure gangsters, you can only commit a thief for a thousand days, but there is no such thing as guarding against a thief for a thousand days.                                                                                                                                                                                       " Is this reasonable? You can't force your wits down just because of the development of the plot!                                                     Even if you want to develop a plot, you can write that the male protagonist asks Teacher He to rest for a few days first, and the children of senior officials take leave, while the children of ordinary people stay. This is actually unreasonable. The normal reaction is that the senior officials know that a group of people intends to take action against their children, and first let them stay at home for a period of time, and then put pressure on the police force, even if the people below are willing to risk their lives to eliminate the threat to their children.         😔，

I have to change the protagonist's face to An Zhijie, otherwise I will always think it's the boy with four eyes Slim version Police uniform version

For me, as long as the author has an idea and has made preparations, it is fine. Sometimes there is no need to be too picky. As long as the basic logic is not broken and the writing is smooth, I feel it is quite OK.

Director Chen (Crime Unit)

The details are not controlled well, and the writing is too out-of-the-box. You know what you are writing, but we don't. The scene changes are even more outrageous. They change scenes inexplicably. Once or twice is okay. If you keep doing this, you make us uncomfortable. Summary: Self-pleasure

The protagonist's butt is getting more and more crooked. He makes friends with Li Hugua. He shows mercy to the gangsters. He helps the drug dealers clear their name and go ashore. Others write about Hong Kong Zong. The blood is boiling. But this protagonist is becoming more and more indifferent between black and white. It is not profitable. Many clues are forcibly ignored. Many plots are too lazy to participate. After watching Zhuo Jingquan's plot, I decided to give up. I can't hold on anymore.

Le Huizhen

I have read so many novels, but this one is super weird. After two or three bullets, it turns into a dog and collapses on the spot. It's so disgusting. I can't move the next day. In other novels, I can shoot with 100% accuracy and jump around, but I can't always hit 100% of the shots. What's the use of this fun skill? It's simply a burden. It's simply incomprehensible that there are no teammates present to shoot two shots and then be slaughtered. Do the marksman masters in this world rely on energy and physical strength to activate bullets?

Caini (Mouse Danlongwei)

Many of the plots are too blunt, almost made up for the original plot of the movie.

It feels like it's just a matter of forcing together various movie plots, and then the protagonist appears with a headshot. There is no investigation at all, it is gradual, and it is useless to know the plot of the movie. What is happening now is the climax of the movie, and the main character only needs a headshot.

The self-interest is obvious, and the character control of the protagonist is a bit unstable. The author has watched a lot of movies, but the background is the background, and the story is written by the author, not copied from the movie script, so it will lose a lot of meaning, and it will start to drift away from the original movie plot.

After reading a few chapters, I found that the author has integrated all the characters played by the same person. If you have the same personality, they will blend together. The Killer King Xiao Fu and the Mouse Dali Dragon Wei Li Jie, the Killer King E Lao and Infernal Affairs Han Chen have completely different personalities and experiences. How can you combine them?

Hehehe, from the lack of common sense in the content at the back, it is obvious that the author is a virgin 🪖, a kind of self-pleasure vent, if you catch a woman, you will know the content behind it.

The author offended so many people, I think it's pretty good. I've watched a lot of Hong Kong dramas, and most of them just wrote about the main character and then disappeared. They all went to write movies haha. Either the protagonist is a psychopath, working as a policeman and a masked killer at the same time, and the masked killer has to do things that can be solved by being a policeman.

With your dark police setting, you really want me to retreat.

Is there anything to watch since the protagonist killed Deputy Director Zhuo Jingquan? It's like a movie, there's nothing about the protagonist

I can save any kind of pleasure and lose my popularity. Goodbye.

I obviously slept with Li Xin'er in Japan, but then she didn't go back to her again. Can I be more serious?

I just feel that the author has somehow lost the sense of enjoyment, making it boring to watch. When he took up the post in the Major Crime Division, he could obviously write that he was welcomed and admired by everyone, but he wrote something that was inexplicable and that everyone opposed him. After handling so many major cases, are everyone else idiots?

The protagonist is a puppet of the system. After receiving 100 million U. S. Dollars, the system gave the protagonist 100 million Hong Kong dollars. Afterwards, he upgraded the gift package space ring and took away the 100 million Hong Kong dollars from the protagonist. This is a rubbish system.

I would like to invite CTRU Supreme Commander, Senior Superintendent Sir Zhang to speak. Everyone applauds👏🏻Welcome!

Teacher He

In fact, when I started the book, I thought that the integration of characters was not a big deal. Otherwise, in such a small place, there would be twins, triplets, and even octuplets. So I made two special settings. The first is that the characters in the movie and the actors only look about 30% or 40% alike. The second is to try to integrate the roles as much as possible. The main point of controversy among everyone now is the two expressions. Let me explain it in particular. The first is the fusion of Han Chen and E Lao, which is very awkward. I don't know if you have watched Infernal Affairs Part 2. I mainly came here based on this. In it, Han Chen is loyal and loyal, and he can be friends with the police (it's also possible that the police fell in love with his wife, lol). In short, he became the hero in Infernal Affairs because his wife died and he was betrayed (have you ever met such a person, who never knows when he will be nice to you and when he wants your life - Han Chen). So in fact, in my opinion, there is not much difference between Han Chen and E Lao in the early stage (except for the daughter, but Qiqi is so beautiful.) The second one is Xiao Fu and Da Da (Li Jie), which is actually easier to understand. Xiaofu said that he had served as a soldier in the Golden Triangle, and he just wanted to make a fortune and then go back to his hometown, and then not attack ordinary people. He was decisive in killing, had strong reasoning skills, and knew strategies. The sum of these characteristics, in my personal opinion, is similar to Li Jie (bold). Especially their purpose. At the end of the movie, Xiao Fu made a lot of money, but he did not choose to return to his hometown, and even chose to continue being a killer. So I put him into Li Jie's background, which is actually very easy to explain. When he first arrived, he chose to join an underground organization as a killer, secretly inquiring about information and concealing his identity. The actual purpose was to seek revenge on the person who killed his wife and children. I won't go into details about Li Jie's background. Everyone should be familiar with it, otherwise there wouldn't be any controversy. The above is purely done by hand. Don't worry, I won't combine everyone's characters. The main thing is to make them as reasonable as possible and interesting at the same time. In order to study some of the main characters carefully, I have to watch each movie several times. Coding is not easy, so I beg for your support. Thanks, little shrimp.

Since writing about foreign countries, the protagonist's existence has basically disappeared. The writing style feels like it was written by someone else. I just skipped and read.

A novel with no bright spots, there is no shining point, and there is no useful plot. The only good character is the heroine, but it still grinds and misses one thing after another. The plot is originally a batch of rubbish. Apart from the attractiveness of the heroine, there is nothing else that can be used. As a result, it still misses one thing after another. The system is rubbish and useless. It is better to have nothing. It is a pitfall and there is no need to exist.

Annie

Eight hundred and fifty-two, the protagonist is so disgusting, the undercover policeman is risking his life, and you are there to destroy people's feelings.

Author, keep writing, I voted for the only monthly vote in February! Just keep the rhythm, don't think that most Hong Kong comprehensive shows have a broken rhythm (by the way: don't miss nv and give nv 😁)

The writing is okay. It's rare to see such good works. It's just that there are too few and it's not enough to read.