Dragon Raja: Killing Herzog from the Start

The part about the Ryoma family was truly toxic; the author's lack of popularity can't be attributed much to that part.

This is the second time I've seen such a clever way of writing a character, replacing Tachibana Masamune. However, a large age gap makes them a bit too much of a couple, so a master-pet relationship would be better, hehehe. I have an even bolder idea: to have the main characters be gay...

All I can say is that the author has been trying to imitate Jiangnan's style, attempting to capture the unique flavor of Dragon Raja. But the attempt backfired, leaving readers feeling that the writing was both weak and unpleasant.

I read fanfiction because the original work was too depressing, but this is almost identical to the original, so why should I read it?

That's what everyone's saying in the comments section. Instead of the moderators trying to persuade the author, they're just leaving in the comments section saying "goodbye, good riddance." Do you really not want the author to get in the spotlight? These days, who's into writing angst?

The protagonist is best described as someone who acts like the biggest show-off and gets the worst beating. The wind stops, the rain stops, and the protagonist is back to his old self. He can pull off a grand show of bravado, but upon closer inspection, he's utterly clueless. His bravado has completely vanished.

The writing style, just like the author's name, is too much like The Riddler. The Riddler should get out of Gotham.

The protagonist was shocked to lose his virginity in a single day in the grove, to three women. Open the xx APP to watch the sequel I just burst out laughing. Are there no women left in Japan?! The patriarch of the Yagi clan is having an affair with a girl more than a decade younger than him?! Where's the female lead?! If you'd done *that* to her first, I wouldn't say anything, tsk tsk tsk.

Chatting with the author, we discovered we both read Dragon Raja fanfiction and had both found a promising new book. After getting permission, I recommended it. 😜

This is incredibly drawn-out, the invincible protagonist isn't invincible at all, and the plot and intelligence of the behind-the-scenes mastermind are also lacking. Let's see if this novel will flop.