Atlanta

This Atlande is really well written. I felt deeply attracted. Although the results are not that outstanding now, I hope the author can persevere. I think this book has great potential. The last time I had this feeling was when I was watching the end of Song Dynasty and the beginning of it. Come on, author! By the way, does the author have any previous works? 🌹🌹🌹

Personally, I think the author's narrative is rather grand. You need to slowly calm down and look at it. It will definitely be more exciting later. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you, 😘

I feel like there are a lot of multiplayer machines in the comment area. Is this my misunderstanding? 😵🤤🥵

To be honest, I sent a book that was on the list of rubbish books and could be read instead😡

After reading for a long time, I didn't see the introduction. I thought it would be introduced slowly in the first ten chapters.

Really not many people have watched it, otherwise just cut it, don't wait until it gets exciting later, it will be even more uncomfortable Don't criticize me, I am being honest, not many authors can persist in this achievement

It's rare to see a novel written by a person with such characteristics. The male protagonist in the novel has his own personality is my favorite. The plot is wonderful. This novel is worth reading. I highly recommend it to everyone.

This book feels a bit pity. The writing is good, but it is too slow and even a bit boring. Even if it will be exciting later, I think most people don't have the patience to read it. The introduction is very attractive, but the plot in the introduction is probably far behind the content.

This introduction is quite attractive, but the previous content has nothing to do with the introduction, which is a bit of a trick. This will make many people who are attracted by the introduction leave after just one glance.

A group of people said that the author should cut it, saying that no one would pursue it, but why should people pursue it after writing so much? You can cut it if you want after chasing it. There are a few novices who are popular from the beginning. Those who write new books and are chased, don't they pursue it because they have accumulated book virtues for so long and know that they won't cut it?

In recent years, most natives who write Western fantasy have become less popular. If it is time travel, it is best to show it in the first two chapters. After reading two chapters, I don't understand why.

It seems that the writing is really good so far. It's a long-lost reading experience and I stayed up all night again.

How should I put it, I don't know what the main plot is?

Fellow veterans, please recommend, collect, and invest 🌹...😠

This introduction reminds me of a book by Lan Jing. I forgot whether it was "The Thief" or "The Magic Apprentice". It's so interesting.

The author must persevere :)

The biggest joy every day is to read a few chapters before going to bed. It is really well written and requires patience to read each chapter (I don't read very fast, so I can't catch up on the updates!). It makes me regain the happiness I had in reading traditional novels hhh Good luck to the author, although not many people read it, but I believe that gold will definitely shine! I like your stories very much, and as long as you keep writing, I will keep reading them! Come on! Come on!

In fact, this book's writing style alone can beat those on the monthly popular list by several blocks.

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I also have a character solicitation post/item solicitation post Character Name, age, appearance Ability Is there a background story Item What is it Ability Is there a background story You can write both, or just one, and I will use it if it fits 🤭

It's not that slow-burning books are not popular, but that there is currently too little content, especially a good book. Many people worry that it will run away after a while, which is really uncomfortable.

Did you stop writing or secretly opened a new account?