The Magic Monk in the Second Dimension

The author's imagination is unique. What is the first thing people think of when they mention the devil? He commits all kinds of evil and deserves to be punished with death. It is too numerous to describe. The world has a common enemy. The devil is cruel and easy to kill, but what if the target of the massacre is changed? The demonic element that people say everyone can kill has turned into a great hero. Although I haven't read a single word, I just read the introduction, but now I feel that the author will become one of the few novels that I put on the top of my list. Farewell, this pig can be killed, let's kill it

If you put it this way, the protagonist can indeed be regarded as the disciple and grandson of Styx.

The starting point was in 2015. In 2016 and 17, there were many free novels at that time, but most of the novels with a large number of words were mainly two-dimensional. Including the two-dimensional themes written at that time, the main tendency was to modify all aspects of the original settings to suit the audience who had read the original and wanted to have personal thoughts and plots. The overall writing style of this book is inclined in this direction. However, the description of the original work is much stronger than the previous description, but the same problem as the previous routine writing still appears, that is, the plot development is weak. If you remove the original plot, it will be difficult to develop a new plot, and even difficult to maintain the logic and original character settings. Once the writing style is not high and the plot ideas and details are not well grasped, it is very easy to overturn. So I guess this is Shuangwen's routine all the way to the end.

The first part is okay, he is a decisive and decisive devil, and he has established a good character image. The later part becomes more and more erotic, and it completely changes into a different style. Really.

Note, only say important things three times: no heroine, no harem, no stallion Don't write things like a heroine that are a hindrance. You can write a female supporting role. Writing a heroine also requires a lot of emotional drama. Some of those rookie authors don't even have girlfriends, so they just write emotional drama randomly, and there is no reason to write "a woman's heart is a needle in the sea" Write all kinds of trouble-making or procrastination The plot is tired of the male protagonist, letting the man take all the shopping, saying rubbish like "you don't love me" at every turn, being strict with his wife in his private life, and using the name of love as an excuse to disguise his inner fragility; as long as the female protagonist dies, he will destroy the world at every turn. The world did not mess with the protagonist, nor did the world let the villains kill the female protagonist. The world nurtured the protagonist, noRetributionEven if it is retribution, it will still be destroyed. If some worlds did not give birth to the will of the world, I am afraid that the protagonist will be killed by God as soon as he gets his name There are also those who specialize in writing about the heroine's sister or younger sister. In addition to the desperate environment in apocalyptic novels, they can fight In order to break the inner defenses of women and make the male protagonist more responsible, in other genre novels, those female sisters and younger sisters can all "ride" on the male protagonist's head. I really don't understand why I write like this. I have read too many Japanese comics. Although the plots in Japanese comics exist in reality, this is really disturbing in reality. I'm disgusted. After all, the drawings of the sisters in Japanese comics are very beautiful. Watching anime can be eye-catching, but it's different in real life. Writing like this in real life feels very straightforward and ideal, especially when reading novels without pictures. You have to make up your own mind. It's easy to bring yourself into the protagonist of the story, which will subconsciously be very important. I feel disgusted, and as long as a normal person is doing his own thing, and someone like his sister disturbs him, unless he is a girl-controller, as long as he is a normal person, he will have a temper to some extent I also have an older sister and a younger sister. If I really want to behave as deliberately as in the book, I think I will get angry! Women can write, but not female protagonists. Male protagonists can be scumbag, but they cannot have female protagonists. Male protagonists can have partners, but not to the level of female protagonists.

Others are entering into two-dimensional love, but you are here to purchase goods.

Only those in the golden elixir stage can have the power of a thousand catties. This cultivation system is really weak.

From the beginning, I felt like the author of God Eater had changed. The more I read, the less interesting it became. I already had dozens of them undecided. After looking at the chapter titles, I no longer had the desire to subscribe.

When are you going to advance to the dark bullet?

The demonic monk written by the author is about to become an immortal. Has he never seen a woman? Aren't the female fairies and female devils in the protagonist's previous life in the immortal world beautiful? Have you become a demon and still talk about relationships? With the character of the protagonist, he must have left at least a thousand women in the world of immortality in his previous life. When does the author plan to have the protagonist return to the world of immortality to receive the women left behind in his previous life?

While others are opening a harem, why don't you put in the purchase? (ಡωಡ)

Delete my comment, right? Then I'll post it again. If you don't know how to write about harem, don't touch it. It's outrageous that your writing suddenly turns into a bulldozer. What about the plot development? Just take it all with you, right? If you don't know how to write, don't write. Do you really think people in the second dimension are fools? Or do you think we are fools so easy to fool?

I looked at the comment area and told me my understanding. I guess the author also saw that the protagonist's combat power was low, so he introduced the concept of the Great Desolation in God Killer, setting Luo Hao as a descendant of the Shangqing Sect. At this time, it was clearly stated that the protagonist was from a small place, and his cultivation was not orthodox, so the orthodoxy should be closer to the Great Desolate side, otherwise it would be too difficult to even go to Xingyue. In addition, this book did not set Luo Hao's Woban to be open at 50-50, so he could stop and stop.

Does covering the sky count as two dimensions? 🤔

I saw you using goblins to make swords, so I voted for this recommendation. I had this idea when I first watched the anime. You are welcome to greet them all, including the Ten Thousand Ghost Flags, the Bone Demon God, the Blood River, the Son of the Blood God, the human skin robe to replace disasters, the soul-refining oil lamp, and the soul-seizing and soul-purifying magic weapon to refine the spirituality!

Author, do you really have an outline? At least you have to set a main line for yourself. According to my experience in reading books, the Infinite Stream that can successfully complete the book has its roots. Either there is a main world that pays attention to upgrading the main world, or it is following the main god space and other things, and then finding ways to occupy or leave the main god space. Author, you are like a duckweed, floating back and forth. It was okay in the early stage, but there is a small main line about the recovery of strength. After arriving in the world of God Eater, the strength is fully restored, and it feels like there is no direction. The subsequent chapters of the world are still short, so we won't dig into them in depth at all. The latest one is outrageous. You have no real strength, but you are still playing in this ultra-low magic world.

This volume of Harry Potter is really not that good. The plot is bland and drags on for a long time. Moreover, the protagonist pursues Hermione without any foreshadowing. I feel that the character of the protagonist is a bit broken.

To be honest, the plot is not bad, but I can't stand it anymore. My hands are sore after killing 20 goblins in the foundation building period? During your Qi refining period, you are still killing people everywhere, but building a foundation is still expensive? It's hard to understand

Read the reviews first and then read the book. . . . . It doesn't feel good! Author, did you really set the golden elixir monk's strength to be one thousand kilograms? If you are so obsessed with cultivating immortals, please show some respect to us Xianxia lovers! If you don't want your strength to increase too quickly, just write the second and third levels of Qi training. There are twelve levels, which will last you a long time!

Limited exemption? I haven't read even one chapter. You can only get one piece of yarn for free. Please take out the stock and dry it, otherwise it will become moldy.

Not interesting. The low-level world does not overwhelm the protagonist's strength. Even if it is invincible, it is not interesting to be weak. Everyone is here to see the protagonist's show, not the behind-the-scenes footage. The giant scroll is poorly written and meaningless. In summary, the protagonist gained some flesh and blood and lost it. The new volume, Demon Slayer, is not as meaningful as Giant 😴 Xingyue, the protagonist is too weak, it made me laugh to death 😁

Judging from the protagonist's combat power, the protagonist's original Tianque world level is not high, let alone those top worlds such as Perfect World, Tomb of Gods, Eternal Life, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Prehistoric World and other worlds, it is not even as good as Xingyue World, Saint Seiya, Dungeon and Warriors, etc.

His golden elixir was indeed broken and he didn't need to wash it. Let me share a novel that I read several years ago. I had forgotten the name. I only remembered it when I saw some book friends saying that the golden elixir was the best. It was on a female channel. The protagonist also cultivated the golden elixir. He seemed to be in a city at the beginning, but he forgot why he was flooded, and then! Main character! It was flooded too! At that time, I looked stupid. She wanted to save someone, but she ended up saving him! No! Arrive! At that time, there was no such thing as a subway old man's mobile phone, a gold elixir, someone was flooded, and no one could be saved, a female channel, it was so scary.

As expected of an author with Teddy in his name! Won the hearts of the people

So the protagonist is so much better at killing Goblins than Goblin and can he still kill Goblins like in the original work? Isn't it because you can't write without copying?

I couldn't stand it anymore when I saw the King Wu in The Godslayer as his sworn sister. This is starting to introduce a prehistoric system, and it's also starting to take a racial and national stance. How is it different from the previous online game writing and fighting against the Neon Kingdom? It's too cliche. I thought it would always be a two-dimensional picture change or something like that. Goodbye.

Absolutely, I just finished talking about Hokage, and I didn't expect another one to cover the sky. Goodbye, my dear.

What's going on with the author? The quality has plummeted since the God Eater volume. I've only read 10 of the latest chapters more than 20 hours after it was released. It's better to cut it off and write a new book.

In the later stage, it was all about clones. This is why clones are poisonous points. This book can be regarded as an example.

In the second world, Kabane seems to me to be the best material that can be continuously produced. The protagonist can forcefully reproduce the humans in that world, and then take the people with no labor value and infect Kabane. When the number of Kabane reaches a certain target, they will be harvested. If the cycle continues, the resources that can be obtained are unimaginable. The author made the protagonist throw away so many resources and go directly to the third world. In my opinion, it is extremely stupid.