Red Mansion Jia's Mansion

A very special Red Mansion fanfic. The starting point is mostly the harem, and the charm of the story is also concentrated within the Jia family. The struggle for imperial power is mostly just a child's play. But I read Chapter 240 of this book and found that it is very different from other Red Mansions fans. Although the protagonist has traveled through time, the subsequent story has little to do with time travel, so without those time travel golden fingers, the overall history of fortune reads more like a historical novel. The Twelve Hairpins of Jinling are also in line with women's sense of real existence. A younger sister is a younger sister, a sister-in-law is a sister-in-law, and Baoyu is not deliberately belittled. Everyone is more vivid and real. The only regret is that many women don't seem to accept it, but I think this is normal. And Lin Xue, who is very popular, has already taken it, and Qingwen Xianglian should also be married. I think this is about the same. It is too exaggerated to really think that all the female family members of the harem are taken away. On the other hand, the layout of the story is not wordy, and the foreshadowing is relatively obscure, so if you don't read it carefully, some character stories will feel that they are not explained clearly. There are also many riddles in officialdom conversations. It seems that there is not as much nonsense about psychological background as other Red Mansion novels. This makes the article more compact, and of course it is more like a historical novel. However, the author's writing style is indeed ordinary, and the language is not beautiful, unlike some Red Mansions novels where even the writing style has the flavor of the original Red Mansions book. Overall, this is a very good novel. It stands out among all the Red Mansions fanfics. I hope the ending can be good. Many Red Mansions novels are very casual and embarrassing, whether they are emperors or kings of the opposite sex at the end. Come on, author

A modern person doesn't have a golden finger, so he travels back to ancient times and has to run to the battlefield? It's not like you can't live any longer. Do you think you live a long life? No matter how you put it, it doesn't make sense.

What can I say about this book? It is a rare good book for me. At least I didn't skip reading this one. I haven't come across a new book like this for a long time! Nowadays, most new books can be read in one glance and ten lines without remembering anything! I don't know what's wrong! I still remember when I was in high school and college, most of them were classics. Internet articles were really getting more and more degenerate and they were all assembly lines! Recommended if you come across something worth watching! Cherish what you have at the moment

The writing is all good and worth reading, but there are still some poisonous points. They all opened the government and came out, and they kept cooperating with the pig teammates in Rongguo Mansion, and they have been acting like little grandsons. It is they who need to rely on you, not you who have to rely on Rongguo Mansion. Sooner or later, they will be tricked to death. Wang Xifeng's loan sharking forced everyone to die, and Baochai's family was beaten to death by the Jia family's relationship. The female family members who have not left the court have been hanging out with Baoyu's servants, and no one dares to take advantage of them! Baoyu is as good as Longyang. All of this is fine. The poison point gave the old lady the rights in his own house, and also gave him the right to mobilize private soldiers to fight against the enemy. It's not like the old lady was ignorant of her stupidity. If she didn't capture the enemy and collect the evidence, she would set a trap for the old lady, or Baoyu. Baoyu would throw the jade and blackmail the old lady into giving him the right to fight against the enemy! When something goes wrong, it's not the protagonist's fault.

Jia She in this novel fits the role I imagined of a future leader of a political family. Even though his official career was hopeless due to political reasons, his family was suppressed by his mother, and he became lustful, the cultivation of the eldest son in feudal society is still worthy of praise, and Jia She's ability is still undoubted.

Everything else is fine, but I feel that the hostile forces are too powerful. After all, the former prince has been involved for so many years, and the people are gone. How many people can still be loyal to the former prince is a problem in itself, and how many people were loyal to the former prince and how many were opportunistic is also a problem. In the book, it feels like the power of the former prince is everywhere.

From the beginning of this book to the present, I feel that everyone has normal IQ, ability, and power, but the emperor is the worst. How can a person who can be an emperor be led by so many people? He is still a person who succeeded in seizing the throne. Does the author seem to think that the emperor is too incompetent? If you want to say that he is a fool, I will admit it, but it is obvious that he is not a fool, right?

This book is really good. It is above the standard. There is only one thing. The portrayal of the two brothers Jiahe, Jia Zhen and Shi Jia is not in line with the original work. In the original work, Jia He is a nanny who even spies on her mother. Everyone knows that Jia Zhen will not let go of her daughter-in-law. She is simply crazy. The brothers Shi Jia's cousin, the Marquis of the Marquis Mansion, let his wife and niece work as prostitutes to supplement the family income. Can you believe it? I think since you are writing a fanfic, you should not distort the original work at will. You can interpret the person from different angles, but you cannot just change the character as if the original work does not exist. There must be a transition, right? For example, when Jia Zhen did something bad for the first time when she was a child, she was taught a lesson by the protagonist, so she did not grow crooked. In the original work, Jia He actually pretended to be crazy and acted stupidly. The real Jia He was very awesome, etc. So I have to give readers an explanation, and I really can't force it on you!

Isn't it a bit bizarre to command an army of 100,000 at the age of seventeen?😥

😔I don't like attackers, so I did her for 100 points! Commission is paid in full!

Writing about Red Mansions is not just about girls, career lines and everything else are written around girls. You haven't had much interaction with the Twelve Hairpins of Jinling in these ten chapters.

In the end, if he is not the emperor, the Jia family will definitely be liquidated. For example, when Jia Yuanchun sees that her son is old, he will liquidate the Jia family. Compared with a minister like you who has so much military power, such a high reputation, and is a fucking king, the emperor will not be at ease unless you die.

The heroine Daiyu, what I said is useless to anyone.

In this novel, people are killed in the streets at the foot of the imperial city. The rebel army kills people and sets fire everywhere. They besiege the Marquis of Wu. Killing the chief minister is just like playing for fun. Bad reviews.

The protagonist is not Jia Baoyu, and it is impossible to hide in the inner house and live and drink. You must have enough power to enjoy it. The Jia family has already fallen. If you don't fight, it will still be as white as the original...

It really ended in a hurry, and the Jia family didn't even explain it. . Especially the pardon master is a rare highlight of this book. . Not a word was said about Sister Lin becoming the queen. . The male protagonist is very native from beginning to end, a very dull person. . It doesn't matter if I only accept one sister Lin in the end. The love between children is just an embellishment, and the garden drama is ruined. . . It has nothing to do with Red Mansion.

In times of peace, righteousness will overwhelm you and the building will be dominated by the weak and the strong. Waiting to be dragged to death for playing tricks on those civil servants. The person you support will have to wait until she has tasted the taste of power. Over time, you will see if she is convinced by you. Jia Yuanchun will have to think about his own children and want to take power when they grow up. If you don't clean up, who will you clean up?

Why do they always write about Jia Zheng, he is so stupid, and let him be a high official, what the heck, this is a pig teammate, he is not afraid of being cheated by his pig teammates, it is really a waste of energy, speechless, I feel that Jia Qi does not have the domineering power of a prince. In ancient times, people were generally proud of their titles. At home, the servants said he was the second master, not the prince.

This book has reached chapter 200. I wonder if Sister Lin can get engaged? With the character of the male protagonist (I don't know how to describe it), he still wants to develop multiple relationships? . . The Jia family has determined from top to bottom that these two are a couple, but the male and female lead look confused. . . I'm used to seeing Wu Liang's novels about boys and girls with spring breeze blowing on their faces and the whole screen full of dog food. Jia Qi really needs to cheer up. Hey, don't be embarrassed to chat with Sister Lin. . Travelers, don't be too indigenous.

It's a pity that it didn't end well. Actually, the plot behind this can be salvaged. . . . It should be no problem to write another three to four hundred thousand words.

I'm going to say, "It's poisonous." Jia's mother is so stupid that she still believes in him after she ruined the Jia family like this!

I thought the book was good, but the protagonist was promoted too quickly. He became the governor at the age of 17. It is difficult for you to be the general manager of a modern company in your teenage years. Can a 17-year-old really subdue these arrogant soldiers? Bad reviews for the emotional drama. I have the guts to try it out crazily, but I don't dare to go beyond it. Overall, I give it a bad review!

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There are a lot of holes that have not been filled, and there are ambushes in the southeast, northwest, and Jia Qi will have no problem succeeding, but the strategy for firearms, food, grass, and soldiers should still be written down, otherwise it would be too hasty to end like this. One pitfall, apart from leaving edicts, temptations, and entrusting orphans, those two emperors should have talented people before they died. Yang Zhi has already rebelled. I don't know the details, and I don't know who else is there? Pit 2, you should explain the ending to those beauties in the Red Mansion. They have been ambiguous for a long time. Pit three, many forces have only a beginning; the Jurchens should not be thrown away after use, and will be played out in the end; the Tibetans in the northwest, or that force, have also mentioned that they will not participate in this war? ; Small overseas countries and Western forces are already counterattacking and invading. In the end, there will be no naval battle; Nanzhao has already participated, why not give a process and ending. Pit 4, you have arranged the backgrounds of many of the people who appeared and have participated in your great cause. Their choices and final roles must be explained; the choices and endings of the old forces such as the four kings and eight princes, as well as the nobles should be given; your caravan power is too vague, it supports your entire great cause, and it should also involve the future blueprint, which should be written down. Those who are involved in your great cause and those who are knowledgeable should play a role again, be more detailed, and give the ending a perfect ending. Please don't end it with the next one.

It's a pity that I finished this book in a hurry. I look forward to planning the next one carefully.

The magic reform cannot be changed too much. After all, we still have to respect the original work. If Yuanchun does not attack, where will the Grand View Garden come from, and where will the Qingxu Temple come from. If Yuanchun is changed, the move will be too big.

I heard it's coming to an end, which is a shame. I also read your book live every day, and another one is sent away!

I have read seven or eight Red Mansions, and this one is still a pleasure, especially the battle. I would like to read some similar novels, about the entanglement of multiple forces.

The Shuyuanzi play is a little awkward, but the story of Chao Zheng's strategy is brilliant. I have read too many popular articles about brainless hip-hop that can reach the top, and this one is considered to be a standout.

Wang Ziteng participated in all the battles and never won any of them, but Xiaoqiang could not be beaten to death.