Advance into the Marvel Universe with Fantasy from All over the World

Why do everyone like to write about Hogwarts in Marvel? Some of the magic in Hogwarts is indeed magical, but the upper limit is too low, even lower than Marvel's Mystic. The Mystic may one day become a creditor (such as Dormammu), but what about Hogwarts, which is similar to the Blood Wizard? What is it? What's the future?

The cowhide and the strong breeding armor were given away directly. This is an interstellar warfare unit, an antimatter particle cannon, powerful enough to directly destroy stars. Even if it is given to one's own subordinates, it is better than given to outsiders. Block directly

The author didn't write about the control over the extraction of props for the treasure-giving boy. Anyway, I feel that the people he trained now just took out any one and he didn't need a second move. He couldn't even react. Except for some small props, he gave away all the powerful ones. It can be said that unless he has strong control over these props, 1. He cannot be harmed. 2. Can be withdrawn at any time. 3. And it can passively cross half the world to provide him with passive defense, otherwise he is just a sb...

After reading more than 20 chapters, please share your thoughts The author's story is very creative, but there are some shortcomings Personally think: The first thing that needs to be improved urgently is the writing style. The author needs to find ways to polish his writing skills (including environment, atmosphere, people) Character image (clothing, posture, behavior, language), etc.); The second step is to grasp the character and language of the original character and try to match the original character. Of course, there can be changes, but the cause and effect of this change needs to be shown in the article (even if it is just one or two paragraphs). Attached below are the first few paragraphs of the novel I rewrote (of course I can only be considered an old bookworm, I have never written a novel and do not plan to write a novel) I hope the author can make rapid progress and present wonderful stories to readers.

I have a problem. The author likes to make digressions when writing. It is a bit difficult to read one sentence after another and is not very coherent. The scene changes are a bit fast and it is easy to get confused. There are also a lot of typos. I hope it can be improved.

Dear friends and readers, please don't miss it if you pass by, and come and criticize my words. If you don't scold him and he doesn't scold him, when will the author make progress? Please that!

The magic in Hogwarts is similar to that in Marvel, except that one relies on blood, and the other relies on backstage, wizards and warlocks. They are not really traditional fort mages. It is better to add mages from the entire DND worldview or World of Warcraft to Marvel.

Why are all the artifacts given away? . . Even with this knowledge and props, it is not easy to develop. I don't study knowledge, I study props. Your potions and alchemy skills are a bit useless. Hope to see magic reform. The protagonist studies the props that are drawn. Study him thoroughly and accumulate knowledge. In the wizarding world knowledge is king. There are great sage cheats, but you still don't study hard. . . I hope the protagonist will be more sensible

Does the Marvel Universe still need a promotion? The movie universe is just a parallel world of the big universe. Its overall level is the ceiling of all current fictional and fantasy works. It is similar to Cthulhu and Prehistoric. The original transcendent alone is on the same level as Astus. Promotion to Marvel might as well be said to be promotion to Marvel Earth.

I have read more than a hundred chapters. Firstly, it is too expensive and secondly, I am still in Hogwarts. Third, the IQ is low and it is too depressing. There is no exciting plot, but I cannot play with the IQ. Oh, I really like this subject, but it's too expensive.

😰The beginning of Harry Potter world is ridiculous. The magic inside is just like that of Karma Taj from the Marvel movie. 😒 In addition, except for children, anyone who has read a few fantasy and fantasy novels will not be able to stand Harry Potter. Watching this is not as interesting as watching Spongebob Squarepants!

Can you travel through other worlds? If you do, I will scold you. Are you Marvel?

Sorry, I still want to complain 1. I have watched all the anime written by the author, but I still feel it is too confusing (see Just Arrived at the Lighthouse) 2. What is the character of the protagonist? The characters are so changeable, it's a headache to watch 3. I don't quite understand the main line of the story, there's a hammer in the east and a stick in the west. The various plots seem to be mixed up depending on the mood 4. The climax is excessive and daily life is filled with a lot of complaints from the author. There's nothing wrong with complaining, but it's too long and a bit awkward, so it's hard for people to feel involved. You probably don't want to feel good about yourself!

When I got the Strong Breeding Armor, my first reaction was not to study it but to give it away. Earlier I had the nerve to say I like knowledge

To be honest, whoever comes to read Marvel likes to see a bunch of main plots that have nothing to do with Marvel. . . I thought the main character was just a prop from the universe and causing trouble in the Marvel world. After watching it for a long time, I felt that it was not my cup of tea. Moreover, a hodgepodge of Marvel settings is generally easy to collapse.

I've read more than 20 chapters and I can't stand it anymore. The writing is a bit messy, like I'm having fun😒

It's a mess, it's said to be the Marvel universe, but nine-tenths of it is about Harry Potter, and half of the remaining tenth is a hodgepodge of various kinds, which is baffling.

A hammer in one thing and a hammer in the other, I was confused.

First of all, a big problem is that the Marvel world is already very dangerous, and the new things you add feel like they can't even shock them. The second is whether the ability sent by the protagonist can be taken back or controlled. If not, then I don't recommend you to continue writing.

1. New book stage: before entering the recommendation stage, 2 chapters will be updated every day. If the coding efficiency is very high on weekends, 3 chapters may be updated; 2. Recommendation stage: 3 chapters will be updated daily; 3. After it is put on the shelves: 3 chapters will be updated steadily. This is a minimum guarantee. The author promises to save more manuscripts and it will become popular after it is put on the shelves.