Survival Game: Start with a Crow

Well... Let me tell you - The fighting in this book is too simple, basically non-existent - I read the first few chapters and I know that the author wants the protagonist to become stronger quickly, but your experience has been completely reduced by more than half - The people or secrets here seem too stupid, no brains, and very optimistic? ——Cross-level killing is too easy to write, which is not conducive to the future In general, it is a simple article But because the author is a newcomer, it is already very good to be able to write to this point Two stars ⭐⭐

If you see this, please give me some suggestions. The protagonist can talk as little as possible, because judging from the current pace, the protagonist seems to be the villain. The villain will die because he talks too much. If you strike harder, you can also speed up the pace🐶

I only read the first ten chapters and quit. Well, the protagonist seems to be killing innocent people indiscriminately. Don't talk to me about the Holy Mother who kills people randomly. The protagonist was killed inexplicably without even a single hanging rope offending him. One who formed a team because of his sister revealed a lot of real-life information and was killed by the protagonist. Ten and forty are hidden and don't allow others to hide them. They have solved it themselves more than three times. I must know that some people are still bad. Tell your brother to hide it. What's wrong? As long as you are allowed to hide, others can hide or not, and kill people casually. If your own mother is sick, you want to make money and lend money to your mother for medical treatment. You told someone about it, but they refused to lend you the money and asked you to repay the loan shark. It's understandable that the author wants to upgrade the protagonist, but kill people casually. As a result, I comforted myself that he was a trouble and should be dealt with in advance. The relationship between the protagonist and the gargoyle is a team. There was no other connection, and in the end, he was killed by others. What's wrong with hiding it? Only the state officials were allowed to set fires, but the people were not allowed to light lamps. I really admire the author.

How to put it this way, the protagonist is very talented, but why does he need a vest? This is equivalent to consuming double experience. The later the speed upgrade, the more strength will be improved, right? Just for water?

Why is this early stage the same as a book I've read before? The protagonist of that book was a zombie, and the nail was on the protagonist's coffin. Even the words of the nail were the same. Do you write fanfics(՞•Ꙫ•՞)ﾉ????

It's a bit awkward to read skills during a fight 😅😅😅

Let me give you a reminder Starting point Nowadays, many novels like to take the path of unity of all things As long as it is wide, all kinds of novelties feel that they can attract readers But in fact, the author must make a general outline and bring all the skills to the end step by step in a reasonable way From the introduction, doom, body? It seems that there are many tricks I have always felt that specialized books can attract readers in the end Dark Blue adds a little bit, and to be honest, get out of the way is original, isn't it, but Ji Dao adds a little bit of recklessness, which is the core of the roll Tomato's Panlong Why doesn't Lin Lei's Dzogchen, it is Dzogchen, can't make up the word count? No Weird, crow, my first impression is that a crow crows, which means the world's doom, or death. As for the body, emm, you are the author, you have your own ideas and outline, no more bb

Blood Hell Form and Demonic Dragon Form

Although they are all routine articles, this routine is extraordinary.

This doesn't feel weird. The fusion skill should change the body so that the body can use that skill, and there won't be any change in strength as you advance? Others don't devour and plunder at all, how can they become stronger?

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

I prefer the dark style, but I don't like Data Flow! For example: strength, intelligence, etc. It feels too game-like!

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The prevention of copycats is very good. . .

Brother, I don't even update. Don't let people wait in vain for a word.