The Tycoon System Begins with a Lazy Fish

After reading the book "The Male God", there are many unreasonable things. I hope the boss can avoid the same pitfalls. All the women who appear are above 90, otherwise the rarity of beauties above 90 cannot be highlighted. Don't have too many beauties, and if you include them, it doesn't matter if you don't include them. If you include too many heroines and supporting characters, the emotional drama will not be delicate. If you don't include them, it will feel like giving away girls, which will make many readers disgusted and not watch it. Don't show up with Bai Fumei. Bai Fumei who can make you a scumbag has no idea how much you have, and a clean one will not look down on your money or the character of the protagonist.

After reading only a few chapters, the protagonist and the system have to talk about thousands of words. Compared with the intelligent system, the Shenhao type of non-intelligent system feels better, so as not to look like a murderer.

The young man's mindless narcissism! A high school student has a fart temperament! Have you ever flown airplanes and cannons, are you tired of eating delicacies from all over the world, or is your family a big family? A man's charm and appearance are the least important. No one except the ignorant girl takes appearance seriously!

Shanghai is not that good either, with traffic jams, crowded subways, and Huang Meitian. There is also an environment of constant comparison and high housing prices.

Being the class president in college is not a good look. Many Shenhao novels are about being forced to be the class president.

I have read more than a hundred chapters and tell me how I feel so far 1. There is a problem with the character setting of the protagonist, who is both responsible and independent. You can refer to the second point in this regard 2. The character Su Yaoyao has a lot of space and is written about a deep love. She transferred to another school for the protagonist (not to mention how difficult it is to transfer to another university), but she was rejected many times. In the end, I was even forced to go abroad, and almost pushed into the arms of others. The key protagonist usually touches the head and hugs (the hug may be a hug, but does not refuse), and usually keeps chatting. The reason for not accepting it is just that I don't want to be a coward. In addition, the two heroines Lin and Li are both made with money. They co-wrote this protagonist. Just love the green tea scum girl and the gold digger, then don't write about Su from the beginning 3. The author has too many narrations about the inner drama of the protagonist throughout the book. When reading a book, you should read the plot and the characters. The narration of the inner drama can be appropriate, but not too much. This is not a chicken soup novel, nor is it a one-man show 4. The plot is a bit sloppy, and it is a brilliant novel. It's a common problem. As you write, it becomes more and more like a running account. It's too easy to get money. The plot progresses too fast and is fake. The characters are a bit flat and unattractive. I've said a lot. I may have to withdraw this book, but I still hope the author will work hard. It's not easy to find a good book. It's even harder to write a good book. Come on.

When you see someone running for squad leader, if you don't want to be the protagonist, don't reject it directly. As a powerful person, you may start a business later, and you don't have time to be a squad leader, and you don't need to be. This is a waste of time.

The introduction of the main character persuades him to quit. A man weighs 110 pounds. Are you kidding me?

No wonder my grades are so bad. I deliberately wrote an intelligent system to make up the word count. When I went to a hotel, I copied the hotel's Baidu Encyclopedia...

The system is just a tool for people, it's just a reason for plug-ins, no one wants to look at the system,