
Douluo Dalu: The Lie-Flat Qilin, Bibi Dong Hears His Thoughts
斗罗之躺平麒麟,比比东偷听心声
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
564Chapters
208Recommendations
28.2kFans
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The timeline doesn't make sense. Qian Xunji being severely injured means Tang San would have already been born, and Bibi Dong would have been raped long ago, with children already in their teens.
Chapter 190 was alright at the beginning, but the rest was... Well, let's just say it wasn't good.
This is completely nonsensical. Around the 190cm mark, the writing team clearly changed; what kind of nonsense is this? It's like a nested doll.
Chapters 190 and later are practically two different novels. It's completely nonsensical; she was Tang San's enemy at the beginning, but then became his ally? Buying chapters 190 is enough; there's no need for the rest. What a load of rubbish!
Is the author writing a single-female-lead story or a harem novel?
I don't understand why anyone would dare to go after Bibi Dong. Do they really think Bibi Dong is incapable of killing? After being betrayed by Qian Xunji, she showed no mercy to anyone except Yu Xiaogang and Qian Renxue. Even Arou, who saved her, was turned into a spirit ring by her, truly following her every move.
It feels so good, I've completely lost my mind, this is the feeling I want! 🙂
I'm speechless. How did this author write this? It's completely nonsensical. I suggest you rewrite this novel. Like I said, Lin Feng starts out with a system reward, then a few years later, he transforms into a little boy, who is pampered by Bibi Tong. He grows up, pushes Bibi Tong down, and then his father gives him a beating... Something like that, and finally he abuses Tang San... Basically, showing that the Shrek Seven Devils are worse off than a soul beast, and then he abuses Tang San...
I was reading it just fine up to chapter 190, but then it became utterly disgusting.
The part after 199 is obviously written later, what rubbish! I don't recommend reading it; it's like another novel, completely disjointed.