Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Forging

It was out of pity for the grandfather and grandson that I rescued him at the beginning, and there was nothing to say. But later on, the ambiguous plot with this woman was always written, which made me speechless😒.

Qiu Xing's grandfather and grandson were not handled well, let's just talk about the character. The character of the little girl Qiu changed too quickly. Before, she was a little girl who was a hyacinth on the street, and in the blink of an eye, she turned into a coquettish and cute character.

It's so nice to have just met the Qiu family's grandfather and grandson, but I'm too defensive. It's best not to have a situation where you can't take your eyes away when you see a beautiful woman (and then have a lot of sexual feelings in your heart), have no concentration at all, and are very erotic. This kind of situation is disgusting. The gold finger is opened a bit wider, I like it very much. Come on and update.

The grandson surnamed Yue really doesn't want to see this, he just thinks it's super unreasonable.

I feel like the main character is so awesome! He hasn't even started practicing yet. He only has a clone of the Ghost King. He wanders around and confronts the big guys. He is almost a novice when it comes to cultivating the protagonist. He doesn't even know what special methods there are in the world of cultivation. He can be killed by anyone casually.

Without the Qiu surnamed grandson, this book would be considered a good book, but unfortunately it becomes a little poisonous weed. The author found an ancestor for the protagonist without even any emotional foreshadowing. This kind of routine is outdated.

He doesn't have the character of a fairy, but he has become a businessman and a gangster There are so many mistakes in the beginning, but the protagonist is still a fool with a silver gun This tells us what "Mud Can't Hold Up the Wall" is

The more I read, the more awkward it becomes. The appearance of these two grandfathers and grandsons is a failure. There is no foreshadowing of the deep love. Why, this book has 500,000 words, so I will lose.

I personally feel that the biggest flaw in this book is that with so many resources, why don't you just dive in and fix it? Wandering around instead? Your own realm is the foundation, and everything else is ultimately an external object. If you have time, you might as well practice in the mountains and fight monsters to improve yourself.

But don't change the map too quickly. If you do it too quickly, you will be exhausted mentally and physically. It will be like using a plug-in. It will be boring to upgrade and fight monsters.

When Xiao Bai read it, it was okay. After reading twenty chapters, he already had millions of spirit stones. How could there be hundreds of millions later! The starting point is too high, there are no restrictions, and it is easy to collapse

I felt that the writing was quite good, and I pinned it to the top of my page to follow it every day. However, I kept chasing it and then stopped. What's wrong with you, author?

Why have you been so casual about recruiting disciples in the last two chapters? There is no background check, so what others say is what they say? It doesn't matter that Xiao Siyue is young. The protagonist is already an adult and has two Nascent Souls with him. Elder Liu actually wants to accept a disciple when we first meet him. Can you be smarter?

The author's writing is good. The plot can be made bigger, and it can be written as a behind-the-scenes story. It would also be good to get married, have children, and start a family.

Who can write a novel about ordinary people who is not a good person, not a fool, but normal, cautious, low-key, not pretentious, decisive, not easy to leak money, and has a golden finger? This novel is too far behind.

The writing is quite good, IQ is online, and I haven't found any poisonous points yet.

It's so good, why isn't it updated again? Aren't you going to prepare eunuchs again? It seems that your basic numbers are eunuchs. Can you stand up to those of us who subscribe?

Who watches love dramas these days? Either there is no heroine, or the watchman makes jokes about whores, then throws a stick and leaves.

I'm already a eunuch before I watch it 😥

Is my phone screen too small?

Already subscribed, why hasn't it been updated today?

There is a rare thunder-type protagonist, and the spirit stone system makes me feel like I am reading an ancient novel. I miss it very much, but it was too late.

How many days has it been? Don't you want to eat even if you don't update?

You, a cultivator, find it boring to read the introduction.

Read the introduction of Krypton Gold Boss

Why write the protagonist in such a high profile? If there is a master above the transformation of a god, the protagonist should die immediately. A high profile without strength is tantamount to courting death.

Why hasn't it been updated in the past two days? Update soon.