Setis Seti! the Natural Enemy of Pirates!

I understand the truth, but why does this cover give me a weird look?

I think the setting of this book is quite good, but there is a big problem with the character creation. Sett feels very vulgar, and it's not like you like to fight. You fight for the sake of fighting, and there are a lot of swear words, which is very out of character. Sett should give people the impression of being domineering but gentle. The person you wrote looks like a little gangster who has gained great power and has nothing to do except fight every day. Also, I hope to pay attention to the timeline and character background issues. Writing a fanfic is also very important. It was fine at the beginning, but I really couldn't stand it when I saw Tiger later. He turned out to be a famous adventurer. He was accidentally caught and sold to the Celestial Dragons as a slave. He became a pirate after escaping. You haven't become a slave yet, and you have fast forwarded to become a pirate. It's a bit uncomfortable to watch. I hope the author can use this book as a training exercise and strive to write better in the next book. Come on.

It's so cool to watch. (*σ´∀`)σ

The author, if you plan to continue writing, you can consider writing about void invasion and studying portal explosion accidents. After all, how the system was obtained has not yet been solved. Hex crystals can travel through time and space, and parallel worlds or plane worlds can be written about, so that there will be no lag 😁. The above are just my personal thoughts, just a joke. 🙏

It was a pleasure to watch, the author's writing is on point I like the character of the protagonist very much

I don't understand why it disappears just after looking at it

🙂 Seti is obviously a heroic and gentle person. As a result, I can only think of one word for the description in the book, barbaric. Barbaric without any sense.

Saw Chapter 34 This book is well written overall, with the protagonist's character, appearance and application of skills. Author, please keep writing like this. There is another book about a wealthy man with a bunch of fancy skills, so I just cut it.

Sett is not such a completely brainless person What was written in the front is very good, until the deliberate reduction of Sett's IQ later turns out to be a failure In the background story of Wanhao, Wanhao's clever access to the fighting arena is not a mindless fight, but a conspiracy and a fair and just grab Isn't it enough to have Mundo without a brain? Sett can obviously be dubbed as "Sett, who once relied on a pair of iron fists to run rampant in the fighting ring, now rules his lawless land with a pair of iron fists", please don't deliberately reduce your IQ

Why does the protagonist of a fan fiction being a time traveler give readers a sense of empathy? Because the time-travelers are as familiar with the plot as we are, at least roughly. The protagonist has never seen One Piece, so his identity as a time traveler is meaningless. Even if you write that a wealthy man in the game travels to the world of One Piece, it will be the same as now, and maybe it will be more enjoyable for readers.

I like this book very much, keep it up! I'm going to see other worlds. Let's take the first step, old man.

Jinfu Jinfu, the whole audience cheered.

I'm afraid that the author keeps adding the skills of other heroes. Isn't the most beautiful thing about the Brawny Pirates is the Brawny Pirates template, and the domineering system that fits the Brawny Pirates very well. Adding the skills of other heroes doesn't feel like a pirate, and it feels like a League of Legends fan with a different world view. I sincerely hope that the author can simply write "Warrior + Dominance" without adding other hero skills. The talent system is already very strong. I think there is really no need to add the skills of other heroes. I hope the author can consider this small flaw carefully. This book is really well written and I like it very much. If it could be purer, this book would have huge potential. Come on✪ω✪

Whatever you say is a strong man

Do you have any recommendations for pirate and naval novels that don't have a heroine or that have a heroine who appears at the end? Please help me, please. Please save the children. There is a shortage of children's literature 😭😭😭

Damn it, Wanhao is so annoying, his shield is like a second blood tube

Let's talk about a reckless man who fights whenever he has nothing to do. He is a very particular camp. When the mood comes, he will fight whoever he pleases. I have traveled through time, so I have to die in the same camp?

This profile doesn't look like Seti, he looks like a manic patient who took the wrong medicine.

Although the writing is very good, I still want to say one thing. I personally like Sett. He is aggressive and hard to kill. Killing strong men is not a big deal. You also kill some passers-by. You hate evil so much, why don't you twist off the head of red-haired Shanks.

I was very disappointed in the later period. Just to hold a conference for the strongest cadres, the Whitebeards and Kaido had to tolerate the riots on their own territory. They were no longer the so-called wrist tyrants, they were already forbearers.

😰😰This author is a bit fierce, and two new books were removed from the shelves in a row... One is a yellow chicken, and the other is a macho...

It's really beautiful! It's just that Hawkeye has never hit Koushiro before he responded...

A reward of 20,000 points will give me more cum.

After reading a few chapters, I felt that the main plot was confusing and I couldn't stand it anymore. Whether it's Robin or Tina, everything seems to be a matter of course. How long did it take for Luffy and his gang to gain Robin's trust? And then after Tina met Robin, she still followed the protagonist as a matter of course. How much trust does that require? And crossing this line is still a matter of course. The explanation is very vague and there is no foreshadowing. The strength is tens of millions, so you know it is very poisonous. Since you are telling a story but don't tell anything, then you can only give up.

I originally wanted to read a pirate article, but there were a lot of unfamiliar move names in the introduction and I lost the desire to read any more.

It would be better to die if people steal your home every day.

To be honest, the best ones in the Navy are Smoker, Garp... These others are just working for the government. Not to mention the era started by Roger, who started it before Roger? For these people who say nice things and do nothing, they will only blame the pirates.

Are there any similar novels that involve a lot of hard work?

Tsk, the natural enemy of pirates. You are truly the "natural enemy of pirates"!

Very crazy, a bit childish, but beautiful 👍