Douluo Continent on the Tip of Your Tongue

There is no need for the author to forcibly gather CP. He can just focus on depicting the pig's feet. There is really no need for all the people who have a role to play to be in pairs. It is too forced, illogical and bloody.

It's okay, not too bad. The protagonist may just feel like a tool. There are a lot of girls around, but the supporting characters come with a lot of cps, which is a bit out of the main line. Sometimes the writing makes people feel that they have read the wrong book →_→. I don't like it very much. Brothers who are in the book world can read it. I can give it a five point out of ten.

I like this kind of fanfic that only relies on the world of the original work, otherwise it will always feel weird. Please give it a boost, the author. I hope I will have a female protagonist. It is really good! ! !

It's well written, but it feels like it's missing a bit of flavor. How to put it, there is a feeling that the character is too abstract and cannot reflect the character's personality characteristics, or the personality characteristics are not obvious. For example, Tang San's character is mature, stable, refined and self-interested, while Xiao Yan's character is to help relatives but not take care of others. Although this may seem stereotyped, it is more real because everyone has their own personality characteristics. As for the characters in this book, it is often impossible to find distinctive personality traits.

I wish everyone in 2022 The vertebrae, sternum, skull, and sacrum, the bones and bones are powerful; The back muscles, chest muscles, neck muscles, and trunk muscles are strong and strong; The eight major systems of digestion, breathing, circulation, urinary, reproductive, motor, nervous, and endocrine are united and friendly; Veins and arteries Pulse, harmony of the six meridians; body circulation, pulmonary circulation, blood circulation, body fluid circulation, smooth circulation; right atrium, right ventricle, left atrium, left ventricle, the heart is prosperous; central nervous system, peripheral nervous system, somatic nerves, visceral nerves, operate in a coordinated manner and feel refreshed. Blessings start from the medulla oblongata, pass through the jugular foramen along the vagus nerve, exit the skull around the left subclavian artery, cross the aorta, pass through the left lung root, and reach the corner called the heart in front of the left front of the sixth thoracic vertebra and surge out: Happy 2022! The air molecules vibrate through the eardrum, along the ossicles, through the hair cells of the inner ear, igniting the bipolar cells in the cochlear spiral ganglion, along the cochlear nerve, through the ventral and dorsal nuclei of the cochlear nerve, through the ventral and dorsal nuclei of the cochlear nerve, through the trapezoid and cross upward, through the inferior colliculus, the medial geniculate body, through auditory radiation, through the internal capsule to the transverse temporal gyrus of the temporal lobe, allowing us to hear the New Year's bell. The light in the night hits the retina, passes through the cone cells, rod cells, bipolar cells, reaches the ganglion cells, passes through the optic nerve, optic chiasm, optic tract, lateral geniculate body, and ends in the cortex around the calcarine sulcus. Gorgeous fireworks are displayed in our brains. The neurons in the cortex around the calcarine sulcus send fireworks through the angular gyrus, Wernicke's area, arcuate fasciculus, to the broca area, through the precentral gyrus, through the cortical brainstem tract, down to the brainstem through the genu of the internal capsule, to the lower part of the facial nerve nucleus and the hypoglossal nucleus, controlling the tongue, shouting: 2022, Happy New Year! New Year's greetings to everyone: Electric potential, magnetic potential, gravitational potential, success in everything Gravity, elasticity, friction, power everywhere Constant speed, acceleration, supersonic speed, acceleration to wealth Kinetic energy, potential energy, mechanical energy, everything is possible Center of mass, center of gravity, geometric center, everything goes smoothly Strong electricity, weak electricity, alternating current, electricity comes every second Baryons, leptons, neutrinos Longmen Takako Virtual image Real image Equal large image Everyone's blessed image Cross product Point product Internal and external product Accumulation of wealth Integral difference Partial differential Full score Momentum Impulse Action Quantity Promising future Stars Planets Pulsars Stars in the sky Cathodes Anodes North and South poles Peaking Electric fields Magnetic fields Standard fields Grand atmospheric fields Organic Inorganic Perpetual motion machine Unlimited business opportunities Rotation Revolution Spiral Rotation and play Plane Curved surface Paraboloid There are inner surfaces Divergence Curl Degree of freedom Generous degree Newton Leiden Hamilton Eat a meal Three dimensions Four dimensions Eleven dimensions Accurate thinking Air flow Turbulent flow AC and DC flow Generation of wind flow Right angle Acute angle Inverted triangle All the protagonists Solid state Liquid, bistable, elegant and graceful Hydrogen, helium, electron gas, proud Solid, gas, semiconductor, decent everywhere[doge]​

! I just like to watch this kind of Douluo. The other rouge fans are all disgusting with the protagonist and the disgusting master. I also love the background. They are all about the first generation of seven monsters. I am convinced. I support it!

Generally speaking, when it comes to Douluo fans, I still prefer to watch the group. After all, it is a childhood memory, and I naturally have feelings for the original protagonist group. However, you can't write too close to the original work, otherwise there will be no point in reading fan fiction. It is necessary to both follow the group and write new ideas. There are too few people who can do this now. In addition, San Shao himself still has many problems with character creation when he was creating (I can tolerate it, but for others, it is a veto). As a result, everyone does not like to watch the group. So now many authors are doing the opposite and specifically writing about being hostile to the protagonist group. As a reader, I recognize the diversity of fan fiction and respect the choices of authors and readers of this type of fan fiction, but I definitely don't like reading it myself because it always gives me a sense of villain that I can't replace. I'm thinking that the intersection of the fan fiction settings with the original characters may be a shackle for the author to some extent - without making the original characters OOC (even San Shao himself was OOC when writing), it must be difficult to change the plot of the original work and add a new character abruptly while making the new character's image "stand-alone" (for example, not being a licker, not being a foil, not stealing the scene...). Many authors even have to state in advance in the introduction that they "will never take xx as their teacher", "will become enemies of the original protagonists after the plot of xx", etc... For readers, this may also be a shackle. "I just hate someone in the original character, and I won't feel comfortable if the author doesn't write him down to death." If you read fan fiction with this mentality, the chances of you being happy with it are slim, and you can't control how the author writes. To sum up, I think it is very clever for the author to choose the time period between the first and second parts and directly avoid all the original characters. Both the "original party" and the "anti-original party" can watch it very comfortably. High praise for full subscription and monthly pass!

A few years later, the Sun-Moon Continent collided with the Douluo Continent. After the initial trial, the Sun-Moon Empire discovered that there was a city named Shrek on the Douluo Continent. The soul masters practicing inside all have amazing cultivation levels. Super Douluo are everywhere, and Titled Douluo are not as good as dogs. After asking around, I found out that they all ate Master Qi's famous dish of sheep hidden in the belly of fish! By practicing deep meditation 24 hours a day, even a pig can ascend to heaven and become a marshal in the sky. The royal family of the Sun and Moon Empire was shocked when they received the news. They cursed in front of the ministers: Soul guides are nothing. Only by learning how to cook can you become stronger! Since then, the Douluo world line has changed. A few years later, Huo Yuhao, an unknown boy who came out of the White Tiger Duke's palace in the Star Luo Empire, finally won the Master of Cooking Competition with his incredible grilling skills after hard work and training. He eventually became another god-level powerhouse and left a legend of his on the mainland.

I have a cat here. Friends passing by can pet it ﾉ │||| ／￣| ||| | (￣ヽ＿_ヽ_)__) ＼つ

Finally, I found a novel that doesn't follow the original route, but only follows the setting. I give it a thumbs up.

The emotional line is so awkward, it's very awkward at the beginning, and the psychological description later becomes more and more pretentious. Help, the food part is very good.

It feels like everyone has a lot of ideas for the dishes in the novel, so now I've posted a list of dishes to order, and I'll look through the brands at random! Read the rules clearly! The same person can order multiple times! But there can only be one dish on one floor!

Yu Lianxin

Menu😏 Egg Fried Rice Pork Belly Chicken (Soup) Patted Cucumber Dongpo Elbow Tomato Beef Brisket Fried honey ribs Grilled brains in tin foil Sheep hidden in fish belly Kung pao chicken Dragon noodles

I just saw the Qing Qing here, let me tell you The whole Qing Qing process in the original work is very uncomfortable. The second level is not bad. The first level can be regarded as a bad joke. After all, it is in a dangerous situation and is at the mercy of others. The third level is a failure and disgusting. A god treats people as amusement. Their fate is unpredictable. If it changes later, it will be even more ridiculous.

To be honest, reading this novel is really uncomfortable. I play games during the day and read novels at night. Then I feel hungry in the middle of the night. 😭😭😭

This daily-style Douluo is indeed very innovative. Other fan fiction is basically the same (with the protagonist group or Bibi Dong, or other sects and the like). The timeline is also in the Douluo 1.5 Period. It can be said that the author basically writes how he wants to write. Although there have been such themes before, I personally think this one is better.

Everything was fine up front, but as soon as the heroine came out, she couldn't hold back

After reading this book, I realized that it was an accident that the author was able to write the Beast Patroller Chun Chun. This book is the author's truest level. Like the following books, it is a pity to discard them as tasteless.

Okay, is this the legendary Douluo 1.5? 😂I like novels with single female protagonists.

It looks so good, I love it. 👍 👍 👍 The timeline is in the middle of Dou Yi Dou Er, before the Sun and Moon Continent appeared.

How should I put it? It is a breath of fresh air among Douluo Dalu fan fictions. Although it feels a bit patchwork, it is really well written. However, the heroine did not handle it well at the beginning. Generally speaking, the heroine's goodwill is a bit far-fetched. Then there are too many descriptions of the heroine's inner activities, but the second time Well, Yuan, it's okay for Sister Li. It's not impossible to be conquered by delicious food, but it's too fast. At least there's plenty of water. Why don't you write a few more chapters and describe your good feelings? You just skipped a month when you first met, and then suddenly said that the heroine has a crush on the hero. The whole process was explained in one stroke. Is this in the river? This is not Beaver. After all, there is a process of cultivating feelings.

The author's new book, food articles, animal control articles, daily articles, no heroine, you can read it if you like it

Menu Xiao Long Bao Candied Haws Crab Stuffed Orange Shili Ginkgo Qinggong Wanfu Pork Boiling Cabbage Three Non-sticks Chopped Fish Head

This is the first time I have seen this kind of daily style Douluo fanfic.

All booked, the author writes so well, I'll eat two bowls of rice

In summary, if you open mid-range and go low, the cuts from behind are really miserable 😭😭😭😭🥵 There are so many pitfalls.

Some Tang Sanshui pits were filled in, and then more pits were made. ————Please give me some pits, give me some big pits, plus some fresh pits, sprinkle them full of pits, and give me two big pits.