Mysterious Resurrection Please Call Me Taotie

Baby, find a job in a factory. Writing books has no future.

The name of the protagonist is good 👍 Some suggestions, firstly, don't be a virgin, secondly, be decisive in killing, thirdly, don't be a licking dog, fourthly, be impotent, you don't have to have a heroine, fifthly, don't add funny elements, sixthly, try not to appear as a wise ghost, seventhly, you can give a semen,

Suggestions 1. There can be emotional scenes, but not too many. Many fan fictions fail here. Readers are not diaosi who see women unable to walk. It is best to have only women without heroines 2. Try not to describe classmates, fat people, best friends, and those who have grown up since childhood. And the supernatural events they encountered, the original work actually has a lot of poisonous points in this regard, such as Miao Xiaoshan 3. Don't have too many supernatural items, and at the same time, don't have offensive supernatural items without side effects 4. Don't encounter a ghost, just a Starting from level 1, don't involve too many huge pits and supernatural places in the early stage of the Republic of China 5. Try to keep the number of ghost puzzles as small as possible, and don't encounter puzzles about controlling ghosts like other novels. If there are so many puzzles, other ghost controllers can more or less encounter their own puzzles, and most of them will only control one ghost. Even controlling a second ghost to extend the recovery time is considered a secret 6. The process of controlling ghosts should not be easy, and don't rely solely on some text descriptions to rely on the master. The horns are willing to survive, which is very boring, like Yang Jian hanging himself on a rope and looking in the mirror in order to die, even if the ghost head is a puzzle piece of ghost shadow, and even if Yang Jian was very nb at the time, the driving process is a narrow escape, it is a coffin and a calling ghost 7. Smart ghosts can exist, but there must be limitations. For example, wish ghosts. To be smart, you still have to act according to certain rules and always revolve around the host. A few keywords of wishes, such as vellum, ghost closet, are smart, but their own actions are greatly restricted. Don't let any ghost pretend to be a person and sneak into the headquarters to become a high-ranking official and hatch a conspiracy. There are no restrictions at all and they act completely according to their own will. It will collapse immediately. Even if the C-level ghost is conscious and has no restrictions, it will collapse immediately 8. Try not to touch shadow ghosts, clone ghosts, mirror ghosts and the like. There are too many written, whether it is original work or fan fiction, whether it is pure horror or others, readers are already visually tired 9. The author has written very well so far

The third chapter is about poisoning, the author is amazing 👍, everyone was dumbfounded when they saw the ghost's smoke expanding and couldn't leave? What the hell kind of logic is this, if a few timid people can't understand it, but everyone? Is this the lower limit of the IQ show? There is also Pig's Foot Silence, who even knew that the world was mysteriously resurrected but still committed suicide with others, and did not run away as soon as he found out that the ghost was resurrected, but was very loyal to save people. I just want to know if he used the wisdom-reducing halo? The IQ of subduing ghosts! Then the ghosts won't kill them?

Starving to death + starving to death = death

Please, stop being stupid. I don't want to see a bunch of people chattering here. It's inhumane. It's time to chatter. Can you write about ghosts? I thought what you wrote was urban literature.

I don't understand. If a time traveler, who is not in your world, knows that controlling an evil ghost will revive him, shouldn't he develop his abilities immediately and then find a way to prevent him from reviving? Travelers who know the original work have a general understanding of ghosts. What can I do after you are no longer awake? Why did you join the headquarters just after you started? It's not your world? Go help people deal with ghosts and judge luck without understanding anything?

The poisonous brotherhood, and the fact that the male protagonist is a ghost master, since he is called brother by an ordinary policeman, even the ghost master's self-conscious arrogance, I believe it is an urban novel. The poisonous ghost painting of a woman helps the male protagonist, and it is another urban novel with the help of a mysteriously resurrected skin!

It feels very good, and I have the desire to read below. Come on, author! Stay tuned

It's pretty good, I just wish the protagonist could be a little more cold and dark. There is also the process of controlling the ghost, the heart is pierced, the supernatural being is suppressed by the coffin nails, shouldn't the protagonist die?

Generally speaking, the protagonist is not strong enough. Except for two good brothers, his brain is off duty and his strength is average. The world in Mysterious Resurrection is too ordinary. Let's watch the later stages.

Seedlings, let's raise them first. I hope the author can write the supporting characters with higher IQs, otherwise, except for the protagonists, they will all be wooden people and I won't feel it.

Alas, the writing is so tender, forget it

Is it a supernatural novel or an urban novel? It starts well, but what are the dozens of chapters that follow? ? ?

There must have been seven or eight names in the first few pictures before the game started. I can't remember them.

The writing is not bad, but it doesn't have the flavor of the original…

A bunch of mysterious resurgence fans, are they really not from the studio?

Water for the sake of water. Just write less about the world view and setting in the fan fiction. It's too painful and it's not fun.

Since you have posted so many comments, I just want to ask whether Pigfoot's character is the Virgin Mary or a cold-blooded killer.

A group of people are chattering. What they write is not like a Mysterious Resurrection fanfic, but like a third-rate urban novel.

Welcome to this mysteriously resurrected world. . . . Nothing else

Generally, there is a golden finger or a plan for mysterious recovery and time travel. The author's writing style is like competing with the original work. But the strength is not enough

It seems. . . . . .

What do you understand by the mysterious resurgence? My understanding is that trickery is the rule. The way of heaven in the mysterious resurrected world has been shattered (or broken for unknown reasons), and the broken fragments have turned into various tricks. Why does trickery have all kinds of abilities? Because they are the rules themselves, the rules that make up the world. Why do you have puzzles? Also because they are rules, broken rules will be reorganized, which also explains why the trick will not die. When all the tricks are integrated again, a new way of heaven appears. Personal understanding