I Can Plunder the Cultivation Techniques

I have read about ten chapters, and overall I can read it, but many details made me feel like a chicken butt, greasy and burping, so it would be a pity to abandon it. The only reason why it is on the bookshelf is to save food. When there is a shortage of books, I will take it out and look at it. The most likely reason is that it has grown hair after being left there for a while, so I will delete it casually. ——The above represents my personal opinion. Don't ask where the flying flowers will go. It will be cold if they stay, and they will be hurt if they fall. Injured in the whereabouts.

Don't be lazy, author. I've done the math. One word per second, one hour is 3,600 words, and one day is 86,400 words. If 3,600 chapters a day, that's 24 chapters. How many chapters are there now? That's too much.

The writing is pretty good, but I don't know why I don't have the desire to read it. Maybe it's because I've read too many golden finger articles about adding points, gaining experience by killing monsters, or gaining skill proficiency. The protagonist is not interested in practicing on his own.

I think the protagonist is a bit abnormal. Why does the protagonist always work as a thug for the government, and the fee is so low? It only needs to be helped once or twice. When the government encounters problems that cannot be solved, the protagonist will always come to the protagonist. It gives me the feeling that the protagonist is just a thug, and the fee is very low.

The subject matter is good, but unfortunately the protagonist is a bit brainless. He kills the villain and does not clean up the body, but shows it to the officials. This is really a bet that the people sent by the opposite organization cannot defeat him...

Xiao Baiwen, I have been poisoned to death

It's too bland, like a running account, and the upgrade speed is still slow, personal opinion!

Originally, I read that it only had 80,000 words, and I rejected it in my heart... But with the mentality of taking it as it comes, I scanned about ten chapters, and without further ado, I loaded the book. Comments: 1. This book is a very typical work by a newcomer. Common faults are: The plot is too tight and the rhythm is not relaxed. The character dialogue is a bit written and unreasonable. The content is a bit confusing. The relationship between the plug-in and the protagonist, as well as the protagonist's attitude towards plug-ins and the existence of plug-ins, are not very revealing. The protagonist has no goals, which reflects the unclear focus of this article. Overall, the article seems very immature. 2. The subject matter is general, and there are all kinds of monsters and ghosts. This is one of the reasons for the confusing content. 3. The writing style is average and the wording needs to be improved. 4. The only advantage of this article is that it is a strong plug-in article, which can follow the path of invincible flow. Sometimes it is quite fun to read without thinking. To the author: The author still needs to go a long way. It seems that the author has cut off two books. In fact, it is not necessary. First write one that is over one million, which can accumulate a little popularity to a certain extent. It can also exercise your personal ability. There is no need to open new books so frequently that you don't know where the problem is. For readers: It is not recommended for readers who have read more than 300 books, as it will feel boring and dry. It is recommended that new readers read this book and have a good experience. It is recommended that you read it if there is a shortage of books. There are no books to read anyway, so it is better to read this book to kill time. After all, except for the common problems of newcomers, this book is non-toxic. Summary: Non-toxic, pure and new. {"NickName":"jhesterccj","UserId":344214172}

Good guy, Shen Nong has been poisoned to death by you, please do it slowly

Why does it feel a bit like the plot of Dou Mi Xian Yuan 😰

(?—1.) Does the author want to hear a horror story? I heard that when Dante traveled to hell, there was a hell used to fry the author. If the author wrote enough books in his life to cover himself, the deep-fried author would not be able to be fried. If he did not write enough books to cover himself in several thick layers, he would be fried into fried dough sticks by hell. Only when the fried oil is enough to make up for the pit of unfinished writing during his lifetime, can he leave hell.

I always felt that it was a bit like playing house, and the world created by the author was not realistic enough.

Ao Guang

I think it's okay. The villain didn't forcibly reduce his intelligence.

I didn't even understand the difference in realms, so I wrote it down. Internal strength is equivalent to a ghost soldier, and true energy is equivalent to a ghost soldier? Then you, a spirit that is a level bigger than a ghost warrior, can't beat you?

It's a bit poisonous. Fortunately, my poison resistance is higher, otherwise I wouldn't be able to stand it.

Writing level needs to be improved. . . . . .

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It's really lame as soon as the details are revealed.

This article on Corpse Control is not optimized! You can write something better, like natal corpse or something! More powerful!

Nowadays, everyone likes to watch wit-fighting games. There is no market for cheats when they are so popular.

Although there are many loopholes, as long as the storyline is interesting and the links are interesting, I'm afraid it will be lost if the plot is missing.

The plot should be as reasonable as possible and the conception should be rigorous, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to read 😰