I Can Travel to Different Worlds

I only see that Blue Star is slowly changing, which is not to my liking. The book should be a good book, but I only accept Blue Star as an ordinary planet. Except for the protagonist having extra abilities, everything else remains the same.

Every time I see the protagonist becoming stronger, the main world becomes extraordinary, as if the whole world changes around you, which makes me sick to watch.

Why does the main world mutate? What are the protagonist's advantages when the main world mutates?

I gave up the book when I saw the changes in the main world.

Your own golden finger is exposed at the slightest disagreement, do you think others are fools, and you don't go to the wild to conjure flesh out of thin air? 666

So the owner of the horse training hall is Master Ma Baoguo, right? 🤫 He is not as good at cheating as others, and in the beginning there are people in the martial arts school who are better than the protagonist. After leaving the martial arts hall, there are people in the sect who are more powerful than the protagonist. I think there must be monsters who have lived for hundreds of years after leaving the sect and are more powerful than the protagonist 🥱

I feel that it is better for the main world to remain normal, and the material innovation is okay. If the whole world mutates, it will be nothing to see. All kinds of monsters and monsters can come out.

By selling mutated meat and fruits so frequently, and to acquaintances, are you not afraid of arousing suspicion?

Why did you write the main character to death?

The setting is good, but it's a pity that the writing skills are so poor. He keeps showing off his IQ and can't bear the poison at all.

I don't know. I eat mutated meat every day and my growth rate has been steady. It's fake. There's no basis for it at all. My strength has increased, my body strength has not changed, my reflexes haven't changed, and my speed hasn't changed. How is this possible? And if I eat monkey wine and honey every day, my growth rate can increase once a month. It's really weird. No wonder it's so bad.

It's well written, but I personally don't like it, so I voted for it and withdrew it.

When I saw the introduction, I didn't want to read it.

Let's go straight to daily life. What other world should we write about?

Wuchenquan and Juntiquan are both better than this, but it's just a small drawback.

Hasn't the author read Xianxia novels? The male protagonist is still a half-crazy person. The ores in another world are the most valuable, and there are no advantages or disadvantages in the exploration journey? It costs money to build a house, so who can keep all the wood? A log house couldn't be simpler.

You should bring a dog with you at the beginning. If the dog is strong, it can help.

The book is okay, but the writing method really needs to be improved. You write it as a diary. It feels like reading and writing a diary. There are still some differences between the days. You have too many similarities. And just keep this cheat secret. As long as there is a second person in the world who knows, more people will know. There is also the issue that there is really no need to emphasize the source from time to time. To put it simply, the protagonist provides these things to his master and fellow apprentices, and he still wants to inquire about them and does not charge money, so why provide them? Moreover, your book stipulates that you can only eat these things once. How can you be so good and open the supply in order to satisfy other people's appetites? This is not because there is no three hundred taels of silver here, and there is nothing to do when you are full. It's superfluous and doesn't look good at all. Come on, the book is still okay.

The name of the protagonist does not need to appear in every paragraph, especially the name of the master and the name of the senior brother. Think carefully about how to express things tactfully.

It is written very carefully, but the development is quite slow. The development of the alien world should be accelerated. Only when the other world develops well can it feed back into reality. In reality, write less about your private life and learn the survival skills in the wild.

White Bear comes to check in 😄

It's so damn long-winded. There's one chapter about hunting rabbits and one chapter about roasting rabbits. There are more than ten chapters. They just watch the protagonist buying and selling things, running in both directions, and there is no real content at all.

The force system is vague, and there is basically only one type of force. The martial arts system should also include speed and endurance, resistance to blows, as well as weak points of moves and techniques for exerting force. Writing a novel without a system or outline is just personal fantasy. And why so many people choose dogs as pets? It's because of dogs' intelligence and loyalty. It would be a miracle if you choose a chicken and find it in a day.