I Have Special Settings for the Rebirth of a Giant

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Almost one chapter a day, a bit less 🌙🙄

Let's talk about the problem. The article overall lacks coherence. It looks like a bunch of scattered short paragraphs. There are too many jumps. If you write it like this, it will end in just a few chapters.