
The Guardians of Tirisfal in Konoha
木叶的提瑞斯法守护者
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- Completed
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- 958k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Sheep Transformation + Pyroblast will never kill anyone. Then you can learn the Pyroblast Technique, turn into a sheep and stab him to death with a kunai. Author, your settings are really speechless, so you just stick to the game mode. Even if you flash a kunai, it is better than the embarrassing transformation into sheep and severe burns. The game severely limits the damage caused by player skills. It's disgusting that you forcefully apply the settings in the game to reality.
A mage is not a pure combat profession, but a scholar, an explorer of truth. It is too wasteful just to study pure combat skills (similar to game skills, such as flash, shield, etc.). A real mage does not say that he has a mage tower, but more about scientific research, using results instead of going to the battlefield, and then studying some esoteric magic.
The writing is very good, and the subject matter is also very attractive to me, but there is a big problem, that is, it can't kill people. The ninja is buried in the ground and then emerges. The protagonist's face-to-face flames are only injured. There is also the Dragon Breath Technique at the back. The ninja was beaten to half death. The protagonist's Dragon Breath Technique only knocks him into confusion. There are no other changes.
It's a woolly study. There is no principle of magic and no steps to dismantle it. The protagonist just relied on my power of thinking in half a month to "research the magic". The spell effects are exactly the same as in the game. So what spell book should I write? Wouldn't it be better to just give the protagonist a system? In addition, the character is seriously OOC, Danzo can even reach out to the elder's son? What kind of Hokage does Danzo think of as the Supreme Emperor? Fortunately, I thought it was good when I first read it and ordered 20 chapters just to talk about it.
That thing everyone hates is the brainless harem! What do you think this is? Maliciously engaging in ambiguity and then forcing yourself to be single? Slip away! Anyway, there is no shortage of me.
I was disgusted when Orochimaru blatantly asked the protagonist for secret techniques. It was really poisonous. When did the secret techniques developed by the Hokage have to be reported to the Hokage at any time? Is there any need for family secrets? The common people tolerated it. As a descendant of one of the top officials, were they afraid of Danzo? Damn how far Danzo is going to be hacked! This joke is too forced! Any ninjutsu that is C level is precious to civilians! What's more, Orochimaru directly asked the protagonist for the secret technique development know-how for an entire series? ? ? For ordinary people, this thing can completely create an awesome family! What do you think?
If nothing else, I think this novel will die prematurely. For an author who has had good results in the past, his current results are too poor. Generally, he will rewrite a novel like this.
It's not low-key at all. The main character is stubborn, but his body is very honest. He can't help but show off. In addition to Dai, Dai is not a ninja from a big family. When many people know the protagonist's strength, it's not low-key, but showing off. What's the difference between this and the original work? Therefore, it is better to set up a genius character from the beginning. Double standards will not have good results.
In this era, only the main character's mother is outstanding. Nonou has a deep relationship with Nabekage. She is a saint of character. As a heroine, she can backstab the main character for the sake of the orphanage, unless she twists her character. Kushina's physical injury has profit bonuses and knowledge of sealing techniques, but Naruto will be missing something. However, he can turn Naruto into his own red-haired son. Mikoto's words have no effect on the two pillars at all. Changing mothers, good wives and mothers plus sharingan genjutsu and other research, the shortcomings will cause trouble for Uchiha.
Halfway through watching it, I realized that the male protagonist is a eunuch.