Business All over the World Starts with Tongfu

This is my first time writing a novel, and I hope everyone can support me. Although it may not be very good, I will try my best to write.

Question 1: The system is too smart. Now smart systems are no longer popular. Question 2: The protagonist wants to practice the Nine Sun Magic Kung Fu he just traded with Bai Yuan. If he doesn't read it himself, he can just hand it over to the system and then buy it from the system? Then what's the use of you as a store owner? Question 3. The protagonist doesn't even have money to practice. Yue Buqun just bought peaches and still has more than 200 trading points left. , If you directly trade Xiaoao Jianghu with him, will he not trade with you? In that case, you can have a trading point to practice Qigong. Question 4: How much is the system's valuation? You don't earn the difference as a middleman? And you don't have wages, and you don't even get wages as a worker? You have to buy from the system when you practice kung fu, so what's the point of your existence? What's the use of others wanting you?

This magically adapted Wulin Gaiden is a bit poisonous.

I don't know what the author is thinking. He actually wholesales trade orders in the Wulin Gaiden World. He also claims that he can live forever. Even if he can really live forever, how many people can he support with the resources of the Wulin Gaiden World?

The idea is very novel, but it's still ugly.

Everyone is practicing martial arts, and the atmosphere is completely lost. This is not a martial arts story

Too casual! There is a lack of readers' sense of involvement, the product value is too casual, and it's all over in one go. The most important thing for a store in the world is to continue to develop! If you can't grasp the follow-up, you'll write about one world, one wave of fat, one sale, one time travel, a boy who spreads wealth, and an old man who gives you opportunities. Many people write like this, but there are not many good ones! The boss of Shangtong Wanjie only looked at one Zhou Qing, and the rest could only be said to be okay. After all, Shangtong Wanjie was too difficult to write! !

Please give me some advice. Emotional scenes are dispensable. There is no need to write them specially. It's okay to go through them. Not too watery. You can create some original worlds of cultivation and fantasy worlds with some film and television novels. You can cultivate some martial arts historical worlds through your own mall and develop your own world based on the current mall.

It's better to go to a love apartment,