
Looks as Good as Ever
容颜如初
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 9k Words
- Genre
- Short Story
- Audience
- Female
- Subgenre
- Short Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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3Chapters
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The characters are vividly described, the emotions are delicate, the language is interesting and rich, the storyline is natural and smooth, and the ending of the story is praiseworthy. It sticks closely to the theme and praises a generation of women who endure humiliation, are pure and kind, respect marriage, love family and children... Positive energy, like the author 👍👍🌹🌹🌹
The depiction of human psychology is meticulous and penetrating.
The characters are vivid and the storyline is complete. The plot is not pieced together haphazardly, but affects the reader, making the reader have psychological expectations and keep reading until the unexpected or expected ending is revealed.
It's intriguing and I can't stop 👍
The plot of the story is true and delicate, the characters are vivid, the sense of the times is strong, and it is full of positive energy! The text is also very concise!
To a certain extent, it reflects the chaos of the rich at that time and reflects the kaleidoscope of society.
"The woman actually said, 'What a big deal, as long as the eggs are not lost!'" This sentence clarified Ouyang Fengchen's view of right and wrong.
It creates an image of a woman who is sincere and sincere.
"Suddenly, there was a slight sound of slippers outside. Could it be that the waiter came back to threaten him? He looked out from the peephole. Ouyang Fengchen's hair was disheveled and the flush on his face had not faded. He walked tiptoe in front of the door and turned to look back. Maybe Sima Liuyong was sticking his head out, watching her reluctantly." Accidental coincidences formed a perfect story, and the two-faced image of Ouyang Fengchen appeared vividly on the page.
"Suddenly, there was a slight sound of slippers outside. Could it be that the waiter came back to threaten him? He looked out from the peephole. Ouyang Fengchen's hair was disheveled and the flush on his face had not faded. He walked tiptoe in front of the door and turned to look back. Maybe Sima Liuyong was sticking his head out, watching her reluctantly." Accidental coincidences formed a perfect story, and the two-faced image of Ouyang Fengchen appeared vividly on the page.
Use vivid pen and ink to vividly describe the characteristics of the characters. On the melon-shaped face, there is a pair of autumn-like eyes, framed by a circle of shiny black eyelashes. When she saw Dawn shooting, she always held her breath and closed her eyes. When she heard the screams of her classmates, she opened her eyes and cheered. Everyone was anxiously looking forward to the slowly rising red sun, eager to pull it out from under the horizon. All kinds of sounds and smells seem to have no place to accommodate them, and they are rolling upward and outward together. The windows and roofs seem to be broken through, and most people have entered an intoxicating "wonderland". The language is vivid and vivid. She felt his body was hot and his heart was beating hard, hitting her chest. Seeing that Li Ming had no intention of leaving, the veins on Yan Ruyu's neck bulged like chopsticks. Like!
The characterization of the characters is in-depth and the expression of emotions is relatively real. I was deeply impressed after reading it.
The vivid feeling of Yan Ruyu is written, so that when readers see the name Yan Ruyu, her image will appear in front of their eyes.
The vivid feeling of Yan Ruyu is written, so that when readers see the name Yan Ruyu, her image will appear in front of their eyes.
"If she really had that idea, she would not lie on her shoulder in front of so many people, unless she was drunk and unconscious." "After so many years, the smog has not polluted her pure body and mind at all. Her nature determines that she cannot be a two-faced person!" In front of the classmates, express her feelings truly; when there are only two people, decisively cut off Touqing. Yan Ruyu has a distinctive and outstanding personality!
I think of my college life as if it were yesterday.
Yan Ruyu grasps the boundaries between secret love and love, and controls the boundaries between classmate love and cheating.
Yan Ruyu grasps the boundaries between secret love and love, and controls the boundaries between classmate love and cheating. This degree is more difficult to grasp and write, but I still really feel it after reading it.
Ouyang Fengchen deliberately showed affection in front of his classmates, and his two-faced character was displayed in front of the readers; at the same time, it was in sharp contrast with Yan Ruyu's character of being the same on the outside.
In the sentence "It looks like it has been worn for many days, but it is very clean after washing, and it is carrying a yellow military bag that has turned white all day long", readers can feel Yan Ruyu's simple and unpretentious character.
In the sentence "It looks like it has been worn for many days, but it is very clean after washing, and it is carrying a yellow military bag that has turned white all day long", readers can feel Yan Ruyu's simple and unpretentious character.
"Zhuge Sunyi wore a pair of bell-bottom trousers with surprisingly large legs and tight hips. Sometimes he also wore toad mirrors with trademarks on them, which was particularly eye-catching." A typical description of the characteristics of fashionable people at that time.
"When she saw Li Ming starting to shoot, she always held her breath and closed her eyes. When she heard the screams of her classmates, she opened her eyes and cheered." Yan Ruyu's nervousness while watching the game was vividly revealed.
The story described and the plot made up turn into a "real and true" life journey of Yan Ruyu, thus affecting the readers' perceptions.