Do You Know Whether You Are Dawdling Through Time Travel?

Author, your writing is very good. If this book did not write about the rebellion and the expansion of territory, it would have been completed in more than 700 chapters. I especially like to read Zhifu fan fiction. I hope you can also write Zhifu in the next one. After all, there are not many Zhifu novels to read. This time, you can write about marrying Minglan and being a peasant child. You can practice martial arts and learn literature and gradually break through the situation and climb up. Later, you can write about the old and new parties fighting to find opportunities to become independent and take over the world! ! ! 👍

I've saved more than 40 chapters and still haven't gotten enough of it.

It can only be said that the author has released the channel. How should I put it? There is nothing masculine about him at all. Time has passed, and a man in the new era doesn't want to be as domineering as you wrote about him. If you want to dominate the world, at least you should take the exam to become an official, or become a rich man. You're good to go. I spend the whole day chatting and fighting with a few women. Your book should be posted on female channels. Sent to the wrong place. If you are dissatisfied, come and refute, see what I said wrong?

I read another book about Zhifou in the past two days. . Then I felt frustrated reading that book 😒. . Pig's Foot traveled through time, and then I read three hundred chapters. . Basically nothing has changed. . Became Minglan's biological brother. . Never mind. . I originally typed a bunch of them, but I deleted them again. . I hope this book can be well written, I will read it first

Do you know that there are very few colleagues? This book is well written and must be supported!

I abandoned the book. It's not that the writing is not good, it's just that as a reader I can't stand it anymore. When I read the original novel, I was disgusted by Gu Tingye's plot against the Sheng family. This is still the case in the novel. I abandoned the book.

The first part was good, but the more I watched, the more breathless I became. The protagonist is so broad-minded. He was tricked many times and repaid them with kindness. He was so powerful.

It was abandoned. It was good at first and I have always supported it. But the author couldn't listen to everyone's opinions and insisted on writing Xiao Minglan as Gu Laoer, a cheating, scumbag and scheming bitch. He also wanted to forcefully clean up his innocence. I can't stand it and can only say goodbye. If I want to take care of Gu Laoer, I might as well watch the TV series. I won't watch the TV series until then. That's it. Maybe you can hold on, but how many people are left? You can see and subscribe for yourself.

Should I give the protagonist a whole face as a reference? What do you think of this face😏😏

The middle period is really too dull, I'm jumping to read it. Can anyone explain what the result of the protagonist's imperial examination is, or whether the protagonist has made meritorious service in the army. Otherwise, who gave the protagonist the courage to jump like this, and the confidence to take himself so seriously.

My personal suggestion is, don't delay the plot for the sake of delaying the plot. I originally saved some to watch together, but the latest one I watched was about Su Shi's troubles and so on. It felt a bit boring... Whether you know it or not means you know it. There is no need to mix in too many other stories, right? The author needs to recognize a problem clearly: Most of the readers of your book are fans of Zhihuo movies but not necessarily Song Dynasty history enthusiasts. If you want to write about the late Song Dynasty, you can open a separate book. If you want to write about the late Song Dynasty, this book should follow the main line.

Originally the novel was pretty good, but since I arrived in Bianliang, the plot has become more and more dragging and boring. The story about Ghost Valley and other parts is not good, and it has no connection with the character Zhifou🤮

By the way, is there anyone who traveled through time in the original version? Ever since I wrote about Guiguzi, I don't really want to read it.

The author is great. To be honest, the writing is very interesting. Just please satisfy me as a person with obsessive-compulsive disorder and change the title at the end. It's too uncomfortable. In ancient times, Shu, Wu, and Qin were all country titles, and their titles could only be added to princes or dukes. If you said you were a county magistrate, it would usually be prefixed by your place of origin or the county where you worked. If you want to express hereditary succession, just add "founding marquis" at the end. You can also say "founding marquis of Hanping County" if you don't think it sounds good. You can just add two characters in front of it. You, the "Marquis of Shu County", belong to both countries and counties, what the hell is going on! I felt like it was stuck in my throat when I saw it. Please forgive me for the discomfort of someone suffering from obsessive-compulsive disorder.

I can't stand it anymore. Why do all the authors from Qidian seem to have a grudge against their own father? The main character's father is always written in a terrible way and the conflicts are deep. Killing his father is like trying to do something for heaven.

Although the writing is very good, when you are beaten, you feel very aggrieved and you are unable to fight back. If you do this, readers may run away. Although you want to suppress it first and then get angry, I personally suggest that the next few chapters should have one or two refreshing moments, so that readers will follow it. Otherwise, it will be too depressing and people will run away.

The pace is too slow. I saw that some people started to talk about this problem. The author really needs to arrange one or two cool spots, otherwise people will run away.

... What was the plot about Yang Di and so on written for? Shouldn't the centerpiece of childhood be building the Shengfu first? Then Yang Di and others are completely supporting characters. Is it possible to give them supporting roles golden fingers and directly strengthen them into the protagonist group?

It's a pity. It should be over at least. It feels like it's almost over, but I almost didn't finish it.

What are you writing about? Where did the good writing go? Abandoned

It has been more than a month since I opened the book, and I have passed a round of trial promotion. In about ten days, the plot will enter the main drama. Later, some supporting characters will be needed to enrich the plot. If there are friends who like this book and hope to create a supporting character, you can post your thoughts later. Examples are as follows Name: Zhang San (words are optional) Gender: xxx Age: xxx (can be compared to the protagonist, or only the age) Background: Story: Note: This post only retains supporting characters. For other plot discussions, please open a separate post for discussion. Any comments that are inappropriate will be deleted.

Shulan

Very good, very good. It's too little to write about whether you know it or not. I must support it.

Thank you brother, the return on investment has been paid. Come on, I am waiting to see my Quanxu Fenghou Bai marry Bai Fumei.

1: Update. As a non-full-time author and part-time hobby, 996 work updates are guaranteed to be updated once a day. If the manuscript exceeds 3W, it will be updated twice depending on the situation. So please understand and do my best as much as possible. 2: Will it be a eunuch? It has been confirmed that it will not be, because this book has received a contract invitation. The book that was previously discontinued was due to poor performance and could not pass the contract. In fact, the unpublished manuscripts are all in the range of 30,000 to 50,000. Regardless of the results of this book, it will not end in a hurry or eunuch. You can rest assured about this (PS contract status changes will be updated immediately and the next day). 3: This book is based on the background of a TV series, not the background of the original traveler. I have read the original work several times and cannot control it. There are too many characters and I cannot remember the details. 4: Dynasty background, the introduction has already stated that the general environment is the Song Dynasty, part of it is set to the Ming Dynasty, some historical figures will appear, but the resumes will be different, and the subsequent plot will be explained (it is modified again on the basis of the TV series. The TV series was originally the Song Dynasty with some Ming Dynasty settings, such as the hereditary title system, and the founding auxiliary behind the Danshu Iron Voucher was a noble of the Zhu Yuanzhang era, so it is not necessary to be more realistic). I say important things three times, this book has been signed, this book has been signed, this book has been signed, everyone can rest assured. Finally, you may wish to use Qidian's free investment function, there will be a surprise.

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