
Myriad Worlds: The Golden Crow's Chaos Pearl
诸天:金乌之混沌珠
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 657k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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16.9kFans
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Here are some of the worst flaws I've seen in Panlong World fanfiction: 1. It's a Western fantasy novel, but the protagonist uses a Chinese name, which is awkward to read; 2. The protagonist cultivates all eleven elements and even has a mutated soul, which is impossible in the Panlong world. The original novel states that even having four divine avatars in an endless plane is rare; 3.
It could have been much more sophisticated, but instead it felt like a max-level hero farming slimes in a newbie village. Is a top god going to a material plane to be a babysitter?
According to the original work, Hongmeng would absolutely not stop the protagonist from killing the Four Divine Beasts; the so-called cosmic balance is a joke. Hongmeng created the universe hoping someone would transcend it, and now hindering the protagonist's development is putting the cart before the horse.
Eighty million years to develop power and conquer planes—how vast would that be? Countless rare artifacts would have been collected. The protagonist lacks vision; for tens of millions of years he's just guarding his small territory. Conquering planes with the power of faith wouldn't have been difficult before the Asura era. He doesn't know how to utilize...
The three-legged golden crow should have the attribute of light, right?
The author's writing has major flaws. For example, Hongmeng specifically sends a telepathic message to the protagonist to prevent him from indiscriminately killing other main gods—isn't that ridiculous? As someone with an uncertain fate, Hongmeng would never restrict the protagonist through telepathy, because doing so would cripple the protagonist, making him a person with a predetermined destiny.
I was quite looking forward to it at the beginning, but just before it was about to be released, it became someone else's version. There was no protagonist, and the author had nothing to do with it. Wouldn't it be better to just read the original work?
The attributes involved in the Three-Legged Golden Crow should include fire, light, life, and destruction.
Hongmeng cannot interfere with the internal affairs of the universe. Even if everyone in the main universe dies, Hongmeng will not care. Even if the entire universe explodes, Hongmeng will not have any thoughts. At most, it will create another one!
The four divine beasts are so arrogant and domineering; it's disgusting that they haven't been eliminated. Hongmeng is even interfering. If they ever transcend, they shouldn't be brothers anymore; they should just run off to other worlds.