Start as a Priest in Impel Down

The writing is good but there are a few bugs. I remembered correctly that the priest's acceleration can only be seen when it is stopped, which means that the priest is invincible when accelerating. Also, when the priest ggs, you can add a sentence such as "dio, I failed".

I almost feel like it's missing something, but it's pretty good.

Sometimes I feel almost meaningless... I can't help it... You just have to make do with it... I will slowly change it

I always feel like something is missing when I look at it?

The author has a few suggestions, don't take it too seriously. The first one is to directly change the world when you turn into someone. For example, you can change the world directly when you become a black boy, and add a Great Britain in the pirate world, but it is missing in the blank history. This makes the plot easier to write. In one, because it is now an organization, there will definitely be team battles in the future, so when it reaches 100%, it is to directly physically summon the character to the pirates. Of course, this is purely my personal opinion, and it must be taken too seriously.

Shocked, Whitebeard, the strongest man in the world, teamed up with the Navy to racially beat a black priest (Father Pucci)

Sao Rui I have been studying and writing articles these days These few pictures are definitely wrong, they are just spreading rice on the keyboard, they are better than me in writing Sorry for your understanding Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!

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