From Buying and Selling Houses in Small Cities to Handling Land on Mars

Chen Xiaoyu

I read this book by the author. The title is good, at least it makes people interested in reading it. The introduction is a bit awkward and not attractive enough. The number of words in each chapter is not many, it should be at least between 2,000 and 3,000 words. You can refer to the theory of the three golden chapters. The first five hundred words should be concise enough. It would be better to write some flirty words, tricks, jokes, etc., So as to attract people to read. The first three chapters should have dramatic conflicts, such as what dilemma the protagonist faces and what enemies he has. This intermediary system of prophecy can help him solve it. The cheats or cool points should be highlighted, and there should be a simple climax such as a slap in the face. Personal opinion, for reference only.

The later stages of this book will be amazing, as many plots have not yet unfolded. 😆