Double Headed White Dragon

First of all, the creativity is very good. I have read so many dragon articles at Qidian. This is the first time I have seen a two-headed dragon. This is much more innovative than ordinary dragons of various colors. Then the whole story is also eclectic and interesting. The only drawback is that your writing is really poor and cannot support the whole story. If you have nothing to do, write more essays and practice your writing.

A book doesn't even have the most basic things like chapter and chapter number.

Don't stop updating, don't stop updating, don't stop updating

6 Points for theme, -2 points for writing, remember to divide it into paragraphs

I hope you will continue to update and don't stop updating.

The theme idea is quite novel, but the writing style needs to be improved. Come on.

Brother, pay attention to the segmentation.

First person Strange multiple perspectives at the beginning The protagonist does not appear in the first few chapters Segmentation error No sense of substitution This is not a web article at all, but a running account

The information is too confusing. I don't know anything about the protagonist's size or strength. The segments are packed together like ants.